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Moira Eribenne

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Last blog entry: Sat, 20 Feb 2010 04:03:27 pm

Profile updated: Wed, 27 Aug 2008 10:40:48 pm

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Biography

I get an incredible buzz from writing poetry, prose, monologues, sketches and short stories. I have just recently begun posting musings on Helium.
I'm based at the centre of the cosmos..Bolton of course! I just love the written word, how it unlocks who we are, who we might appear to be and of course who we would love to be!

Samples

U

This is not a bed, this is an alter
The place where my alter ego was born
Wrapped and rapt in your love
These are not walls
They are silent witnesses at this chapel of love
Where a heart ached with joy
And peace was forever discovered and held tight
These are not sheets
They are the robes of a goddess
Discarded in the throes of love
Drenched with passion
Writhing in a red heap on the floor
This was not an encounter
It is the very stuff we are born for
The wellspring of passion
An offering of pure love

Pore into me

When I entered the room
The light was off
And you were on
The bulb was dead
You just shone
Radiant
Within the filament
The firmament
Flickering flame
Of your heart
Surrounded by words
Of pure art
You fold me
Onto the bed
Lying there
Laying in wait
I enfold you
Not knowing
What to do
Simply hold you
Adore you
Absorb you
Bore into you
Enter every pore
Of you
Become you
The core you
Just to pour you
Into me

All poems are copyright of the originating author. Permission must be obtained before using or performing others' poems.

Last blog entry

Snow place to cone

Posted on Saturday 20th February 2010 4:03 pm

Snowplace likes home

Home like snowplace I know

Fireplace replace ice space

And snowplace in this cone

Take the particle of this icicle

And know your own home

A rash, a thaw…freeze-frame

Crows claw

Snowplace likes thaw

In this eye-gravel of frost

Hand becomes raw

Tears become acid

Breath becomes more

Heavy pulse in the crunch-step

Through snowplace to door

Cabin-fever rush out

Snow fever rush in

In this fracture-cube ice passion in

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shoeless

Sun 16th Nov 2008 00:22

thankyou kindly for taking the time to think and then comment on my poem ,

Gus Jonsson

Tue 28th Oct 2008 13:21

Thanks Once Again Moira... Can't wait for Christmas now!!
Gus

andy n

Sat 18th Oct 2008 12:57

Like certainly U and Pore into me.. you have a good way with words certainly! I really enjoy reading your stuff!

Gus Jonsson

Sun 12th Oct 2008 18:26

Gus Jonsson

Sun 12th Oct 2008 16:47

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Good Afternoon Moira

Thank you for your kind remarks,

Do you perform...? Might I see you soon ...Ido hope so

Once again many thanks

Gus

Melissa R. Mendelson

Sat 27th Sep 2008 01:19

Hi, Moira. Thank you so very much for your comment on my poem, Tether.

Take care. :)

Melissa

Clare Kirwan

Fri 12th Sep 2008 17:27

Thanks for your kind comment... hey you're hot stuff yourself!

Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Wed 10th Sep 2008 13:27

The I Think Your Sexy poem would make good lyrics to a rap song...

Jeff Dawson

Tue 9th Sep 2008 17:40

Hi Moira

I aim to please! Love your comments, and glad you like my sanctuary poem. I've been on here 4 months and love it! If you wanna look back at other blogs of mine, feel free, music stuff and all sorts!!

And yes, love a bit of rhthym like yourself, and it's hotting up in here! Don't need the fire on! Oh and the month has been extended for you, its an indefinite offer!

Bye for now Jeffarama! X

Jeff Dawson

Mon 8th Sep 2008 20:14

Hi Moira, no probs, you can amend it. Just click on edit whe you're logged in and amend, when you save it, it will post it again with same comments etc, just in case you didn't know, good to see you on the site, good init! Jeff x

Melissa R. Mendelson

Sun 7th Sep 2008 21:00

Dear Moira,

Thank you for your comment on my poem, A Light Ahead.

It is indeed a gift to dream and within the dream, a gift to write, and no matter what, we need to keep that dream alight.

I hope that you will do the same. :)

Take care. :)

-Melissa

Moira

Fri 5th Sep 2008 23:44

Zuzanna I Can 'hear' the accent in your voice. Where in europe are you descended from? To sound your origins as a fingerprint is the magic of our identity. Think the site is great and the community very enlivening and supportive.

There is a strong spiritual attunedness in your writing which I find transporting, lifting.

Delighted to chat with you,

Moira

Zuzanna Musial

Fri 5th Sep 2008 22:19

Hello Moira

Welcome to WOL - beautiful Poetry site. Thank you for the nice comment you wrote for me. I am of European descent but live in Canada for half of my life. Knowledge of few foreign languages makes me speak with an accent that I will perhaps carry on for the rest of my life. Had no opportunity to take an intonation courses in English Literature therefore my accent still falls on different syllables.

It is great to have you with us. Keep penning on; I like the style in your writing.

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna Musial

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