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Dave Dunn

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Profile updated: Mon, 28 Jun 2010 09:59:07 am

 

Biography

After a lot of years in technical writing and marketing I took on the role of carer for my late wife and our 3 children in the mid nineties, so all forms of writing took a back stage for a while. Now there's just my son left in school as my middle child has completed A levels and is now studying to become a herpetologist. I've been writing poetry rather more regularly for the last 2 or 3 years, using various social networks and a few poetry forums to display my work.

Sept 1st 2009 - Back again now after my cervical spine surgery, I'm having to rest most of the day but aim to dip in and out of the web as I can. Already getting some sensations back in my hands as the pressure on the nerves has been relieved. :)

February 3rd 2010 - Now moved into our new home in town - kids very happy to be near the centre of all things local :) BT will be along next week to install the broadband and phone so I should be active online again after that.......

May 2010 - I'm to have more of that nice spinal surgery in a couple of months or so - might restore some greater mobility if all goes to plan :)

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Excess Memories

I awoke to silhouettes of images long suppressed
Those which rose from their internment within grey depths
Flickering with hesitance as from draft blown oil lamps
Wound round with broken elements of sad irrelevance

A bathroom strewn with her damp towels and brushes
The muddled aromas of jasmine and retching assaulting us
Long hair held back by my then firm hands during gasping
That came between her bouts of drink fuelled choking

Tear stained cheeks and serial sorrys during her guilty glances

At a man she then barely knew who tried to overwrite
Jaundiced views of men gained from events afore that night
Shaking from exhaustion as dryness came to end that spell
Face bathed with flannel and water to freshen her well

Seeing her safely settled on the sofa in adjacent room
Window allowing a glimpse of near full moon
That seemed to drift though it could but be the clouds
Saying 'are you ok now' as she still moaned aloud

Bowl placed within reach of out flung arm
Saying I'll be off then you'll be safe from harm
Wondering what was the event that lead to that excess
Feeling slightly guilty at leaving such a ghastly mess

(c)Rhumour
May 11th 2009


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Future Archaeology

Posted on Saturday 28th August 2010 11:37 am

 

Perceptions of a ragged space,

all that was left by the human race,

there's not a lot left to see at all,

as their carelessness was seldom small.


Let's dig around 

in that frazzled ground,

for that's where there's bound to be,

some signs of dodgy chemistry

or maybe just a little radiation,

the sort that killed another nation,

though they said it wasn't bad at all,

any effects would be so very small,

just as asbestos would never embroil

us in disease, nor would  a little spilt oil.


But profit ruled the minds of men,

the bosses say do this thing and then,

you'll have enough to pay the rent,

but wouldn't as it was always spent

on a merry night out with the boys,

long before those electric toys

just sinking pints to rinse the dust, 

before staggering home all filled with lust,


Then some had coal with a price too pay,

only if they 'bought it', down the pit one day,

other times they might just cough it out,

smuggled home in their lungs no doubt,

or maybe they were lost out in the wild sea

aiming to catch that fishy for the rich folks tea,

others were mangled up in the cotton mill wheels,

where safety guards didn't hide belts and reels..


And ever as man moved to make it safer than before,

some new peril would be found to drop men onto the floor

be it from a toxic gas or perhaps a mercury leak,

what did it matter while some profit they'd seek,

the waste might well taint the rivers and poison all

the fish they ate and so keep their children small,

small and weedy with some horrendous rash

while the air was grey with muck and ash.


I could go on for many a verse,

but I've no wish to be perverse,

for by now the penny will have dropped

for those whose brains have not been shot,

by additives to make processed food have taste

or keep it 'fresh' longer so as not to waste,

any scraps of reclaimed fat and gristle,

oh dear, now I've gone and blown the whistle.


And thats before I even mention the Taiji men

who slaughter dolphins by the thousands and then

sell their flesh with labels as if another meat,

what is it that Japan now consumes for a treat,

I wonder do they ever know for sure,

what it is they bring in through their doors

and so the follies still go on and on

do you wonder why I feel so strong?


©Rhumour

August 28th 2010

 

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Lynn Dye

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Tue 24th Aug 2010 20:47

Hi Dave, Sorry to hear about the impending funeral you are attending, hope all goes as well as possible. No hurry with collaboration from my point of view, just if and whenever you feel ready. Best Wishes, Lynn x

 

Lynn Dye

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Mon 23rd Aug 2010 20:39

Hi Dave, thank you for your comments on "Being a Veggie". It's ages since I tried soya beans, and yes, they didn't do much good for me neither! I see that Cynthia thinks you should add a verse from your own perspective, and we could make it a WOL community effort. Sounds good to me, ball in your court maybe? Thanks Dave, Warm regards, Lynn

 

Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Sat 14th Aug 2010 21:26

Hi, Dave! Please, help! I am not sure what is correct: "And her life was a real tough" or " And her life was really a tough" or "Her life was real tough". Which one is correct or better?
With warmest wishes, Larisa

 

stefan wilde

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Wed 11th Aug 2010 12:46

Hi again Dave-regarding your poor friend in Pakistan-there but for the grace of God eh Dave.Best the likes of the ordinary person here can do is donate-and keep these suffering people in our thoughts.catch you later Dave-Stef.

 

Ann Foxglove

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Wed 11th Aug 2010 08:41

Hey Dave -I bet she did it on purpose!! (Just kiddin') ;-) Hope she manages to get you back! I suppose in theory it might be possible to exclude someone without knowing, and then think they'd stopped posting! xx

 

Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Wed 11th Aug 2010 07:49

Hi, Dave! I made an accidental mistake. Pressed "Exclude entries by Dave Dunn in the blogs. I wanted to write a comment on your "Rebel" and it suddenly disappeared, the I understood the mistake. What to do now?
With warmest wishes, Larisa

 

stefan wilde

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Mon 9th Aug 2010 23:07

What seeped through big Dave? hope it was,nt the Guinness-spilling precious beer is a blasphemy- against Saint Al Kerholl! ha! one gets ones drift-and one appreciates ones very good poem-ta DD!...have a smashing kip kiddo!-Stef.

 

Ann Foxglove

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Mon 9th Aug 2010 20:23

Many thanks for your kind comments on my Fishes poem! I remember your lovely poem about a seahorse! xx

 

stefan wilde

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Mon 9th Aug 2010 00:05

just popped in big Dave to say goodnight-hope you had a good day on W.OL.-see you on the morrow kind sir!-Stef.

 

Ann Foxglove

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Fri 6th Aug 2010 11:20

Interesting about the photo Dave. Are you well up on this sort of stuff? I am in a pickle over photos at the mo. I often used to use stuff from Flikka but now Flikka seems to have changed and you can't copy/save an image (or I don't seem to be able to!) I suppose it was prob not legal or something to use the photos? But it was called "Photo sharing" so I did! Will I have to get a camera now and spend all day taking photos to use? And scan stuff from books etc (prob illegal too?) Or have no photo image to go with a poem? That always seemed an integral part of it to me. Oh pooh! xx

 

Lynn Dye

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Sun 1st Aug 2010 12:56

Hello again Dave, commiserations on your loss of Griff, and thanks for comment on Max. There has to be something extra special about border collies, I think... Warmest Wishes, Lynn

 

Lynn Dye

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Sat 31st Jul 2010 13:57

Hi Dave, thank you for commenting on "Seduction" and for best wishes. I think I need to practice on the voice though! ;-)

 

Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 22:06

Oh, no Dave! We are not at the age to blush. I remember when I was 20 and an Englishman kissed my hand, I really blushed. Strange, but now I do not blush.
M

 

Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Tue 20th Jul 2010 15:24

Hi, Dave! Please, read my new poem "The language of flowers" and tell me if there are any mistakes or something I have to change.
With warmest wishes, Larisa xxx

 

stefan wilde

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Sun 18th Jul 2010 13:09

Good afternoon Dave-very grateful for your apt comments on 'Truer than true' hope you and yours are well-catch thee later pater-Stef.

 

stefan wilde

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Fri 16th Jul 2010 09:19

Good morning Dave-re the naked Lady-touche' Dave-touche!-have a good day-best regards-Stef.

 

stefan wilde

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Thu 15th Jul 2010 16:31

Hi Dave-re being able to hear you from the back-no way! with you being so popular,the audience is fifty deep,and the legs of this naked girl on my sholuders are blocking my ears-hee...hee! ta matey-Stefan

 

stefan wilde

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Thu 15th Jul 2010 12:43

Dave-oh don,t burst into song-we,ve got enough rain here in Rossendale as it is-unless you sing into an unplugged mic! lol! catch you later-Stef.

 

stefan wilde

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Thu 15th Jul 2010 12:36

Hi again Dave-ta for comments on 'Black Hell'wish all success to you on future audio,s-you certainly have got the voice for it-all power to your elbow-or should that be tonsils? ha! thanks a lot-Stef.

 

Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Sun 11th Jul 2010 08:12

Hi, Dave! For the first time I hear your voice. "Excess Memories" is a very nice poem. I love it, enjoyed reading it and listening to it.
With warmest wishes, Larisa

 

Ann Foxglove

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Sat 3rd Jul 2010 07:35

Hi Dave - hope you are well. I'm so pleased that Win chose your poem as the poem of the month. I must admit I hadn't heard it before, seems very different to recent poems of yours. I like it, and also your other lighter stuff too. So well done! xx

 

Deborah Jordan

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Sun 6th Jun 2010 12:48

Hi Dave, sorry for the long delay in responding, I have been away for a while, thank you so much for your kind comment on Oyster. : ) Deb

 

Chris Dawson

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Mon 24th May 2010 00:19

Thank-you Dave, for your kind comment on 'Disconnected', much appreciated.
Cx

 

stefan wilde

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Sun 23rd May 2010 12:23

Afternoon Dave and family.Re your comment on on lottery numbers-drat! foiled again!lol-hope your weekend goes just as great-cheers-Stefan.

 

stefan wilde

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Sun 23rd May 2010 00:53

A good early Sunday morning to you and family Dave-re the great minds-yours taking the lead without doubt!spooky though all the same thought eh!ok,another telepathic venture..er....think of six winning numbers,my email adress is.......lol! Stefan.

 

stefan wilde

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Thu 20th May 2010 14:31

Can,t do Dave-you see I,m a member of rage concern-haha(and that-IS-a joke.But I am a trick cyclist(shh!)heading your way-where are you? all I can see is an empty crisp bag and a half full(half empty-positivity there-haha!)bottle of Navy rum.Are you lying down-in another darkened room-lol! cheers funster-Stef.

 

stefan wilde

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Thu 20th May 2010 11:51

Who said that! haha(re you computerising in the shade)Good morning Dave and family.Enjoy your day.Have you been onto age concern for free lightbulbs? hee..hee..catch you later pater-Stefan.

 

stefan wilde

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Wed 19th May 2010 23:17

where are you Dave? someone has put sunglasses on the camera! lol!Stef.

 

stefan wilde

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Wed 19th May 2010 17:40

ah Dave! you had to practice? and heres me thinking it being highly likely you were a natural born lover-oh no can,t be-thats me! lol lovely picture-keep yer grubby mitts of it! cheers big fella-and the lovely Fran and all(including Uncle Tom Cobbley)-Stefan.

 

stefan wilde

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Wed 19th May 2010 09:51

haha again Dave-have at you! you funny cad and bubbly(metaphorical)boundah! how did an old bulldog chewing a wasp like you help give birth to such a lovely young Lady! haha!only jesting monsewer!if I was,nt-you would see a red laser dot-right where your old ticker is! (2nd jest)ta matey for fun comments and having a fun personality-even if it is horned!are your little tootsies cloven by any chance? ooer missis! best regards to you and family of course-Stefan.

 

stefan wilde

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Wed 19th May 2010 08:38

Good morning the Dunn household!
thank heaven you have not poured the good stuff away-keep it to celebrate my forthcoming Viking funeral-lol! take this as a hundred percent belief,your latest profile pic is NOT funny-its absolutely BEAUTIFUL!! do not remove-or you may join me in the last longboat to Valhalla! haha-lovely Dave! as are your comments-Stefan.

 

stefan wilde

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Tue 18th May 2010 23:27

haha Dave! you did,nt tell me you were like that! so all my kisses were not wasted then-lol! Stef...er...no,better not-lol!

 

winston plowes

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Tue 18th May 2010 23:22

Oooh Dave I like your new hair-do! xxx

 

stefan wilde

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Sat 15th May 2010 09:55

Good morning oh bewhiskered one! ta for opening my day with laughter-off to find needle and cotton-before me sides burst!-but sorry, was,nt funny enough to deserve a kiss! haha! hope you enjoy your day-Stefan......no!

 

stefan wilde

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Fri 14th May 2010 13:24

The reason you can easily fall over-is from the top heavy weight of hair!-me? no such probs-haha!add comb/median to your attributes-cheers my friend-Stefan-oh go on then and be damned-X!

 

stefan wilde

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Fri 14th May 2010 12:57

Good afternoon Dave-thank you for your comments on'Chained to invisiblity'-you say you wish I had not described you so well-not so my friend-because I did,nt include the words-gentleman-respectful-kindly-HANDSOME!-thoughtful-friendly-tough old(sorry)boot-and above all-open hearted-oh you make me sick with all your wonderful attributes-that I am bereft of! haha! ta matey-keep yourself warm in this precarious weather-catch you later..young(er?)man-Stefan(no kisses-people will talk!

 

Ann Foxglove

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Thu 13th May 2010 23:24

Don't worry about me Dave, I am not the least bit down. x

 

stefan wilde

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Thu 13th May 2010 21:43

oh right! thanks re Ann Dave-all safely gathered in! -Stefan.

 

stefan wilde

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Thu 13th May 2010 21:15

re 'The seas of angst and hope'-pleasure to comment-Concerned about Ann,s whereabouts-She,s on a bit of a downer at present I believe.A thoughtful word or two from your good self and others might buck her up? best regards Dave-Stefan.

 

Alison Mary Dunn

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Sun 25th Apr 2010 17:55

Dave, you never know. Life's full of surprises

Ally ;o)

 

Graham Sherwood

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Fri 9th Apr 2010 09:37

Dave hello. I'm sorry that this is so late, but many thanks for your kind nomination. It's been a very hectic time workwise and I am just getting myself organized on the poetry front again. Once again many thanks. Graham

 

Lisa Milligan

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Fri 19th Mar 2010 17:29

Thank you for your comments on "Heartfire" and for letting me know what lines you liked best. I truly feel that way myself.

Lisa

 

John Coopey

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Sat 6th Mar 2010 16:30

Dave
Thanks for the comment on Our Gert.
There seem to be so few of us who practice rhythm and rhyme. I'm not dogmatic about it (although it is my preference), so refreshing to see your stuff. Keep posting.

 

Andrea

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Wed 3rd Mar 2010 11:46

Thanks for taking the time to read my poem 'Pulling a Sickie' Dave! I will look forward to reading more of your work :-)

 

winston plowes

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Thu 25th Feb 2010 13:25

Hi Dave, Hope your move went well. glad to see you back with us again and posting blogs once more. Win x

 

Isobel

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Thu 4th Feb 2010 12:29

Hello Dave - thanks for paying me a visit. Yes - I would agree with you that religions probably do more good than ill and like you I am a humanist. Just wanted to write a poem looking at exactly what divides us in life and that is what came out - powerful stuff... I wish you a speedy recovery from your operation and also happiness in your new home. xx

 

nicky burrows

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Tue 8th Sep 2009 14:13

Hi Dave, thank you for your comment on my poem. 'Lilley', is very dear to me as is 'Glass Eyes'. Both written in the last few weeks on the birthday of my son, who would have been 11 this year and going to high school.

Funny, being an English teacher, I tend to push the point that poetry is subjective to the reader. Although, poetry, simply by it's mere existence is subjective to the writer.

thank you again for your warm and heartfelt comments. Take care, and keep on writing. For me, writing helps me process thoughts and emotions that maybe I don't want to burden others with. ( I have written some fun stuff though ).

Peace be with you too.

 

David Franks

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Wed 12th Aug 2009 11:52

I like your trad. metre and rhyme, Dave.

 

Bethan Townsend

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Wed 12th Aug 2009 01:38

DAVE!
Stick to Lincolnshire...don't be fooled by Yorkshire charm hehe x

 

John Darwin

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Thu 6th Aug 2009 15:56

Hello Dave, thanks for your recent comment. Enjoyed reading your stuff, 'excess memories' clearly painful but stunning.
John

 

winston plowes

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Tue 28th Jul 2009 22:18

Hi Dave - I have made some changes to ‘Blood Onion’, which you were so kind to leave a comment on recently. Could you please go to the blog entry and see if you think these changes are for the better or make sense to you.
Not read this out yet, Glad you liked the “Throbs” I thinks it works. You are right about the final cut of the knife at the end.
Cheers, Win

 

Rachel Pantechnicon

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Mon 27th Jul 2009 16:32

Hello Dave
I find that cat-motivation poems work especially well if you shake a box of Go-Cat (or similar) in time with the rhythm. I've noticed that they soon prick their ears up.
Best wishes
Rachel P

 

Bethan Townsend

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Sun 26th Jul 2009 22:01

Lincolnshire...what's there? Grimsby et al??
I'm afraid I don't know of anything east of ... Lancashire hehe.
If I had a choice between Yorks and Scots - I'd be Scottish every time haha. As it stands, I am probably extremely English with no particular rooting!

 

Bethan Townsend

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Sun 26th Jul 2009 21:56

Thanks Dave,
I know! I feel I owe it to my name to become Welsh one day but sadly, I remain distinctly un-Welsh.
I live closer to Wales than I ever have though :) - result!

 

Cate Greenlees

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Sun 26th Jul 2009 20:31

Hi Dave, thanks for your comment on What Do You See,......Ive never been one to take shit without fighting back, and I think this poem expresses my personality quite well!!!!! Im learning to be a little more laid back as I grow older disgracefully though!!
Cate xx

 

shoeless

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Sun 26th Jul 2009 20:29

Thankyou for your encouraging comments today David

 

winston plowes

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Mon 20th Jul 2009 23:21

Hi Dave,
Been looking tonight at your recent postings... Very different to the style of "Excess memories" which is such an amazing thing. This may be a good thing for you though! keep writing. Winston

 

Isobel

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Sun 19th Jul 2009 19:41

Thanks for taking time to read Dave - glad you liked my rant...
Isobel x

 

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 19th Jul 2009 14:14

Dave, thanks for understanding that I would say anything only if I like what I'm reading, a lot. Otherwise, why would I bother?

 

Francine Louis

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Mon 13th Jul 2009 04:11

Dave, just read your poem 'Become A Little Sage'
Good rhyme and flow... Can tell you were inspired by Lennon...
Will read more.

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work...
I appreciate the fact that you also see the page set up of my poem 'Elusive' as an aide in how it would be read...
I couldn't get it exactly how I wanted it though... Always seem to have trouble with fonts, size, and placement - it just won't show up properly on here for some reason.

 

winston plowes

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Tue 7th Jul 2009 13:22

Hi Again Dave

Its a pleasure, this is a great site, you will find some fantastic poetry and some fantastic people. Win

 

winston plowes

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Mon 6th Jul 2009 16:52

Hi Dave,
welcome to WOL Thanks for your comments on Pedro, its a bit of fun. As to your poem Excess Memories, it is stark, it is vivid and grim and hits home with a force. Brilliant. It is my type of poem in many ways. Thanks for posting, Win

 

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