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David Franks: Walkabouts Verse

Email: david1franks@yahoo.com

Homepage: Read samples here, then, perhaps, use http://walkaboutsverse.webs.com for all of my life's work in verse and prose, and http://davidfranks.blogspot.com for all my gigs; also, at http://myspace.com/walkaboutsverse, or here, you may...

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Biography

Welcome aboard!

I'm David Franks, an English folk and Christian musician plus poet; and my web-nickname, WalkaboutsVerse, is an abbreviation of my life's work (originally a paperback) "Walkabouts: Travels and Conclusions in Verse" - which, along with info on a related C.D., "Chants from Walkabouts," you may read, for free, via either my e-scroll or my e-book (linked above); also, at both sites, you'll find further links to other things about me (other info on repertoire, other publications and performances, messages, etc.).

But here is THE BLURB from WALKABOUTS, and some other abridgment - "ABOUT THE POET AND THE POETRY: David Franks was born and, after a long time away, lives in England. The four-part collection has travels and conclusions, in poems and songs, from his nomadic first-thirty-six years. The experience behind the verse includes shoestring-travel through about forty countries, A-grade junior sport, a B.A. in humanities, four technical certificates in manufacturing, plus several years on the shopfloor. The style is mostly direct; and the substance informative, humorous and didactic."

Armed with poems, unaccompanied Chants and E. trads, I began participating in folk and poetry clubs, festivals, and forums during 2004, before beginning to teach myself keyboards and recorders a year later. I've since placed in folk-festival competitions, done a few mini-gigs, recited on radio, and, as suggested above, some WalkaboutsVerse has also been published in journals, etc.

In broad summary, then, I travelled and studied in humanities, before writing the verses and finding a way to sing or chant some of them; I learnt (formally and informally) desktop publishing, P.C. recording, as well as other I.T.; and, lastly, I taught myself to read and play music, plus, eventually, to write it by mimicking my singing with the above instruments.

Other main interests are - as with many English folk - gardening and tennis (again, use links).

Whereas (linked) MySpace is the place for all my collection chronologically, here on WOL I try to be topical and, thus, my blogs, sometimes, offer poetic responses to the news of the day - plus others' comments.

Samples

Poem 187 of 230, WalkaboutsVerse (above links): A SOUTH SHIELDS WALKABOUT - AUTUMN 2001 (Also my AUDIO SAMPLE, above.)

Out of the museum-and-gallery
(Wiser on Cookson and the local way),
Down Ocean Road with, to the right of me,
Its eateries and, left, neat places to stay;
Before, on either side, Marine Parks -
The southern-one a most beautiful place,
Teeming with moorhens, swans, grebes and mallards
In a small lake at a scenic-hill’s base.

Then (holding chips from the parade’s cafe
And, thus, a flock of gulls squawking above)
Onto the South Pier I made my way:
Seeing seaweed over rocks - like a glove -
And high-and-dry sands held from transgression
By growth of grass and the weaving of wood,
Plus, in the dim light of a sleepy sun,
Fishing boats returning to Tynemouth’s hood.

(C) David Franks 2003

After you've finished here, you may like to hear this lay/poem-come-song on myspace.com/walkaboutsverse -

2 of 230, WalkaboutsVerse (above links): WALKABOUT WITH MY PEN

Once drove an old sedan, up north,
From a place in Sydney to Cairns;
Then to Kuranda I went forth,
By train, to look without set plans.

I browsed through the trendy market,
With fresh fruits of tropical kind;
Walked to the creek through lush thicket -
Nature’s hand giving peace of mind.

I dined in a scenic cafe;
Then, outside, as I wrote for yen,
Some passing Kooris called-out: “Hey,
You go walkabout with your pen.”

Request or question, I don’t know -
Assured voices, elderly men.
That’s now several years ago,
And I’ve seen the world - with my pen.

(C) David Franks 2003

All poems are copyright of the originating author. Permission must be obtained before using or performing others' poems.

Last blog entry

A Loss For Humanity

Posted on Thursday 2nd September 2010 10:31 am

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Thirteen years and two days ago...

Poem 47 of 230:  A LOSS FOR HUMANITY

Toward the end of summer,
    A car crash in France.
Then thousands of cut flowers -
    Some bearers in trance.

For Diana broke-even -
    Now resting in peace;
A loss for humanity -
    Her caring did cease.

For, while taking her perks
    (Perks there should not be),
She gave greatly of herself
    In kind charity:

Charity good states would free.

(C) David Franks 2003
From http://walkaboutsverse.webs.com/ (e-scroll)
Or http://blogs.myspace.com/walkaboutsverse (e-book)

 

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Isobel

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Wed 28th Oct 2009 17:25

Thank you muchly David - would rather be responsible for that than a new Ice Age....
Isobel x

 

Isobel

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Wed 28th Oct 2009 11:12

Stop press - I must confess
I never thought my shoes were less
Important than a climate treaty
So pretty are my little feety...

 

David Franks

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Thu 22nd Oct 2009 12:23

I myself, Steve, have apologised for the fact that, nowadays, some of my blog-poems may be old-hat for long-term members, such as yourself. Also, for what it's worth, I try to be topical, in terms of current affairs, with some of my "daily ditties."

 

steve black

Thu 22nd Oct 2009 09:01

Apologies.

 

Melissa R. Mendelson

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Fri 4th Sep 2009 23:36

Hi, David. When I first started writing poetry, all my poems rhymed, and only later did I drop the rhyme. I posted an old poem, The Raven as an example.

I hope you have a great weekend.

Melissa

 

Isobel

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Mon 31st Aug 2009 10:23

I should just add that in performance poetry, issues/language don't jump up and bite you on the bum, like my poem just has. Language is soon heard and soon forgotten. Anything written down is there to be read and reread forever and a day - that is why we all need to be very careful about what we commit to paper. Never argue by mail (as some of my family have) - not easy to forget words that can be refreshed.

 

Isobel

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Mon 31st Aug 2009 10:08

I don't know David. Perhaps people just want to feel rebellious and naughty sometimes - I know I do. I just feel like venting all my frustrations in some way. Perhaps I should buy a cat, then I could go and kick it. Will probably never write another poem that contains so many swear words - it was just a phase I was going through - probably cos I knew someone at the time who swore a lot - it must have rubbed off.

 

David Franks

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Mon 31st Aug 2009 10:04

But why is there so much swearing, and shock tactics, in "performance poetry"?

 

Isobel

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Mon 31st Aug 2009 09:49

Sorry if I've offended you with my recent poem David. I try never to swear in front of my children and only rarely in poetry. This was written primarily as a performance piece, not for page. I tend to perform only in pubs where the audience is largely inebriated and accepting of all forms of language. I do take your point.

 

Michèle Vassal

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Fri 21st Aug 2009 12:05

Thank you for dropping by...Yes you can hear me read(with Brendan Ring on uilleann pipes and clairseach), check the audio clip and also one myspace page!

 

maipenrai

Wed 19th Aug 2009 19:18

Spot on mate it is Thai, lived there for some years.
Bernie

 

Yolande

Sun 16th Aug 2009 17:17

Hello David. Thankyou for commenting on my poem. I can see by your prolific output that poerty is an integral part of your life, reflecting your life's journey. Regards Yolande.

 

Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Wed 12th Aug 2009 19:14

Hi David - thanks for dropping by to leave me a comment, much appreciated

Best wishes

Dave

 

Sarah Cowther

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Mon 10th Aug 2009 17:55

Thanks for your comment.
I like your 'Walkabout' idea, you really paint a picture.

 

winston plowes

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Thu 6th Aug 2009 20:59

Hi David, Glad you liked 'Windows'. I am getting some material together for a childrens book so look out for more daftness to come! Win

 

Isobel

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Mon 6th Jul 2009 12:19

Thanks for taking the time to read David. I think you read one of the few that I wrote in free rhyme - LOL! Like you, I do like to rhyme and found it hard breaking the habit. Free verse does gove you a lot of freedom over the language you use though which can't be a bad thing. Till we meet again.
Isobel x

 

Hannah Eve

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Tue 24th Feb 2009 09:58

thanks for the comment, glad you enjoyed it. x

 

Belinda Johnston

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Mon 2nd Feb 2009 12:16

Hi David,

I have visited Kyoto, Tokyo and many other places in Japan, and there are still many places to cover. I hope to do some more travelling in Asia, whilst living in Japan.

Excuse me for asking, but what do you mean by, Trad and Metre? I am only just starting to develop my form and style in writing poetry and any new terminology still kind of throws me.

Many thanks for your encouraging words. Bel

 

steve garside

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Thu 15th Jan 2009 11:39

Hi David - thanks for taking the time to read my work

steve : )

 

Sam Kellaway

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Wed 7th Jan 2009 11:39

David

Thank you for your comment. It is suppose to have that feel to it but I do not always succeed in getting the stressed/unstressed syllables to meet the iambic rules that my english teacher told me to disregard! Other than that it is a narrrative poem that has a thought to be heard. You should read the 'hoodie' poem, it has a little more rhythm to it.

Regards
Sam

 

Daniel Hooks

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Wed 3rd Sep 2008 15:53

Thanks David I am glad you like my poems!

 

clarissa mckone

Sun 31st Aug 2008 04:45

HI David, thanks for the kind words. What part of Mexico did you get to see? take care Clarissa

 

the other woman

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Thu 31st Jul 2008 22:17

Thanks David for the comment.
hope you enjoy my myspace site.
i'm still learning all this, so some are better than others. i'll keep practicing!!!!
thanks
woman

 

David Franks

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Tue 22nd Jul 2008 18:17

To Carol: I just re-tried and it worked okay...but it's also on myspace if you'd like to use the above link.

 

carol falaki

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Tue 22nd Jul 2008 10:59

Hi David, thanks for your kind comment. I have tried to open your adio sample above but its not working on my computer.

 

Sophie Parkes

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Tue 22nd Jul 2008 10:05

Thanks for your comment! Air Cav's actually a psychedelic indie band but I do play folk too.

 

sarah clark

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Tue 8th Jul 2008 22:43

nice writing, with ur poetry i feel like im there with u..if that makes sence

sez x

thanx for the comment

 

Alison Mary Dunn

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Sun 20th Apr 2008 18:20

"in the dim light of a sleepy sun" I'm traveling with you David, traveling with you.......!
thanks for leaving an comment 2.
Ally

 

David Franks

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Sun 13th Apr 2008 10:55

Thanks, Tomas - that introductory poem/experience was really the catalyst for my whole collection; and I've just enjoyed a visit to your profile.

 

Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

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Sun 13th Apr 2008 01:40

I loved the Pen poem!!! Fantastic!!!

 

David Franks

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Tue 1st Jan 2008 19:44

Thanks, Ricardo: and, if it's okay, I'll respond with another (introductory) peom from my collection walkaboutsverse.741.com -

Poem 3 of 230: PICTURES

Photographs and, more so, painted-
Pictures of people and places,
For ends, involve in some cases
Adjustment of what was gathered.

With restrained artistic licence,
To make metre and rhyme with sense,
All matters related here -
Save the love-songs, to be clear -
Did happen to me, no fear,
And time-ordered they appear.

(C) David Franks 2003

 

Ricardo Reis

Mon 10th Dec 2007 11:08

What i especially like about this poem, and i like it v much, is that it is not 'laying any big message on us', that it exists as itself. That is one of the hardest things to learn, to let it speak for itself. We can slant and select to 'tidy up' a piece, but to contort it to what we want to say is most of our biggest blunders
All power to you!

 

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