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Deborah Jordan

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Last blog entry: Sat, 30 Jan 2010 02:11:13 pm

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Biography

I like to write to make sense of things that happen in my life..or things that don't.
Somebody once asked somebody else, excuse me but I can't remember who it was;
"Why do you write?" and the other replied, "Why do you breathe?"
Sometimes I don't know what I'm thinking until I have written it down. Sometimes I know very well what I'm thinking but hide it,disguise it because it's too much, too strong a thought so I dilute it. I take it down the fields and bury it under a tree. Sometimes I maybe use nature too much in my writing, but a friend who recently called on me said..jeez you live right in the middle of nowhere. To an extent she was right. Nature is everywhere and I can't help it merging into my thoughts more often than not. I do venture into the city now and again and was born in what used to be a pit village on a valley side southwest of Newcastle, within hearing of the Naval ships that used to sail up the Tyne. If stood on tiptoe,I could see the bridges crossing into the city. Junior School used to still have Co.Durham stamped on the blue book covers and the best day was spent sat on the floor amid the contents of the stationary cupboard.Paper everywhere.
What I love about writing is that you can just write, whatever comes into your head,you can create your own worlds and make the unreal real and the real,unreal.
I'm pretty bad at performance poetry but have had some good help and advice from the good folks who have come along to The Hole Int'Wall at Hebden Bridge(where I used to stay, and sometimes still do, before returning to the Northern Wilderness of the Dales)and intend to try again before giving up.

Samples

Oyster

Take this ticking grain of sand
from me.
This tiny thing,
friction, burning,
corroding my soul.
Never becoming
The pearl it promised.
Take this ticking grain of sand
before
I implode.

© Deborah Jordan. 2009


Desire

Posted on Monday 3rd August 2009 4:52 pm


Your gaze
wrapped around me
like a dragons tail
but I stayed
in the centre,
feeling your coiling scales
lash me to the mainsail.
This boat rides unforgiving seas
I balance
on naked feet.
Wooden boards
sigh beneath me
and you
stand before me,
thin black wool
between you and the night.
With hands tied,
I trace your
body
and though
you are
fathoms deep
I hold fast
amid the waves.
Slowly I raise my head,
catch your shadow in
my eyes
and swallow you whole.

© Dej Aug 09



I went to look for the moon but all I saw were stars, one brighter than the rest
But then, the trees sighed, the wind gently exhaled the cool Northern air
and I heard the heart- beat of the earth.
I turned to where the sound came from
the wind brushed the trees just enough aside,
And there, like a sliver of opal, the moon cut an arc in the blue sky.
© Deborah Jordan. 2009

The Pebble Man

He held the pebble up to the light. It fitted inside his palm like some small mute, limbless creature of the sea. He held it under the stream of water and dull browns became lush glistening sables, matt greys became infused with silver tones and subtle blues. Colours came alive again, as they were when he had taken the pebble from the stream bed. He had never found such a beautiful stone. He replaced it on the ornate shelf on the corner wall with the shells and the other pebbles he had picked up on his solitary walks.
The water fell onto the grey curled hairs on his chest and from there into rivulets down his torso. Tilting his head he allowed the gentle force of the warm shower fall onto his face and he hummed a tune filling the small bathroom with sound.
Music filled many gaps in his life. Sounds seeped into the corners of his house and his mind. Sounds of his recordings, sounds of his own voice and his restless fingers drumming on the kitchen table. Sounds of his melodeon, as he sat in the wide window seat letting his mind and his eyes wander across his wild garden as his fingers wandered across the keys. Music filled spaces where other noises might have been. Music lived in the room that might have surrounded the sound of children. The muted colours of old cassette tapes lined the walls where pastel spines of books might once have been. Plastic CD boxes were racked up neatly in spaces where gaudy coloured toys may have occupied. That was not to be. Somehow his life had not offered up the chance for a family, or if it had, he had been looking the other way and missed it. Looking down at the ground stooping to pick up some crystal on the path or so lost in his own thoughts that whatever chance there may have been completely passed him by.
He was not even sure where his own thoughts led him. He seemed to just be a passenger on a slow train ride through long dark tunnels and the vast, dusky yellow arable fields of his home county. Now and again he took another train, a train into the hills. The air was fresher and the stones were sharper. His mind wandered different paths as did his tired feet but he was no more sure of where he was headed than he had been in the place he called home.
The bleak day came when he had to leave that place he called home. He thought it would always be like this, this house, him. He wandered the fields and the woods, walked alone in the rain and snow, walked in the gentle light of spring and the heat of the long summers of the past and had always turned around, walked backwards for a few paces to see the house in all its changing lights. The stones and the red curved roof tiles absorbed colour from the tones of the day and the paintbrush of the weather.
The house had wrapped itself around him for forty years and he knew every stone, but now he was losing it. Reality had crept in like the mould that had slowly spread across the window frames and this reality was just as unwelcome. He had somehow forgotten to pay bills and even if he had remembered he did not have the money to do so. He had barely noticed the decay which had been living its own life around him. As the paper peeled from the walls and the doors fell from their hinges, he had just sighed and rearranged his precious things on their shelves and dark wooden tables as if he and they lived three feet away from the walls of the house. Three feet away from reality. Shells inside shells.
He was a shell and as he held his hand up to his ear he heard music. It was her favourite tune, a Breton tune he played for her on his melodeon. For he had met a woman once. He allowed her to slowly enter his thoughts and to a lesser extent, his life. He both welcomed and resented her presence in his house. He had not had to consider anyone else for so long. His small home was indeed his castle and he had long ago raised the drawbridge. He began to doubt himself in her presence and was haunted by deep scars and bad memories. His habits were his own now, not for any other eyes, not for anyone else to judge him. He began to see his life through her eyes and it unsettled him. It unsettled him so much that he usually arranged to meet her somewhere else, anywhere else, anywhere other than his small home with his music and books, his collections of precious things he had gathered on his travels.
If he had only known how much she wanted to be one of those precious things. She wanted to be held close, to feel as treasured and caressed as his unique finds, wanted him to see her hidden light, see the way the light and sable shades shone from her warm brown eyes. She wanted him to see her uniqueness. She wanted to be a pebble.
© Deborah Jordan. 2009
Published in Mudluscious. Autumn 2009

Goddess Dance/Soul Emerging

Between the smoke and the fire,
dancing between
what is, and what is yet to be.
Unshed tears and silent screams
between the mountains and the valley,
the sea and the sky,
the river and the land.
Liminal space.
Borderlands,
dancing between
what is, and what is yet to be.
The dance of transformation
the pain of a birth.
Soul emerging,
a dance of death
and life.
A caul of smoke
a song of fire.
A cry with closed lips,
dancing still,
into unyielding winds
and an unrelenting land.
Still
she dances
she dances.
© Deborah Jordan 21st Nov 2008

An Gaoth

I am the air that brings the snow
on seven peaks.
I am the chill that sends a shiver.
I am the force that lifts the wings
of eagles and merlins.
I am the hurricane that
sends you wheeling.
I am the hand beneath the waves
that rise to mountains and turn the boats.
I am the gentle violet breath of spring.
I am the warm breeze of heather
across the moor.
I am the one
who whispers and the curtain moves.
I am the wind.

© D.E.Jordan 2009

Published in Mudluscious Autumn 2009

















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Spinerette

Posted on Saturday 30th January 2010 12:47 pm

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Draw words from me,

spinerette.

Take this thread

between pale finger tips

as you lay back over the edge

of the hanging stone.

Face the sky, inhale the light,

breathe my dreams,

spinerette.

Weave me,

through you

and don’t let go.

None will catch us

as we turn circles

in empty air.

Hold me, entangle me,

fall with me.

Submit,

to this silent trap.

Leaves fold around us

and together,

we become formless.

Embalmed in

honeyed essence,

entranced, we slowly spin.

Inhaling dreams

exhaling light.

Fine, green, filtered light,

the light of trees,

falls through the air.

Breathe my dreams,

spinerette.

Face the sky

and inhale the light.

© Deb J. Jan 30th 2010

Image from 'Fallen' by Nykolai Aleksander.

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Janet Ramsden

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Mon 15th Feb 2010 14:44

Hi Debs, thanks for commenting on my Chinese New Year poem.

Janet.x
ps. the metal tiger isn't made of scrap, it leaps over the scrap at the end of the year. :-)

 

David Cooke

Sat 6th Feb 2010 15:21

Hi again Deborah Yes The Romani language that is an interesting one. I've vaguely known that it can be traced back to some Indian language, but have often wondered how many 'real' Romany people there are and do they still use it on an everyday basis. There are lots of other people like the Irish Tinkers and the New Age Travellers who have adopted the lifestyle, but aren't Romanies. Might need to do an internet search! Also I'm toying with the idea of doing some translations from an Irish language poet called Mairtin O'Direain. If I can find the time and get around to it I'll post something.

 

David Cooke

Sat 6th Feb 2010 09:36

Hi again Deborah Posting me the Salendres poem has opened up a can of worms. I've just found a website devoted to Occitan poetry with some of his poems and those of other young poets. What did we do before they invented the internet!

 

David Cooke

Sat 6th Feb 2010 09:26

Hi Deborah Thanks for sending me the Occitan poem. I will have to look him up. I had a phase years ago when I read a quite a bit of Catalan poetry - which as you probably know - is closely related to the Occitan dialects of France. There's loads of great poetry by people like Espriu, Carner, Riba and if you have French and Spanish it's not that difficult to read. I've started reading some of your poems and like them very much. I like An Gaoth - but would have to be a sucker for a poem with a Gaelic title! So again, ta an-suim agam ar do chuid filiocht (Don't worry - just means I like your poems!)

 

Rachel McGladdery

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Fri 5th Feb 2010 20:53

What a very lovely thought.
Thanks,
Rachel
xxx

 

Rachel McGladdery

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Fri 5th Feb 2010 20:36

Thanks so much for the lovely comment on Dead Language.I really appreciate it. Bizarrely I did lose myself in it. I don't think I looked up from beginning to end while writing it. I also had a bit of a spooky experience about an hour ago when I spotted the same story on Yahoo News, I read it, it was similar to the Guardian article I'd read initially but had an added detail...she actually Had lost her sight (I had made this bit up in my poem) I got a bit tingly then and thought maybe I was channelling her or something....then I got over myself and realised it wasn't such a huge leap of the imagination when writing about an old person!Lol.
Thanks again,
Rachel
xxx

 

Ann Foxglove

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Tue 2nd Feb 2010 14:39

Hi Debz - I live in Cornwall now but I'm not Cornish. I wish I was, maybe way back I am! Certainly feelvery at home, couldn't live away from the sea now! I'm on the north coast where it's more wild and windy (misty today.) Lots of old tin mines. xx

 

Tommy Carroll

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Mon 11th Jan 2010 15:37

Hi Deborah, Amy Winehouse! or one of the two women both formally from Morcheeba: Skye Edwards or Daisy Martey

 

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 7th Jan 2010 11:55

Thank you for the time you took to reply to me. I was well aware of the connection of 'witches' and 'covens', and did pause on that thought. But I convinced myself that 'coven' literally means 'gathering' and let it go. The idea of 'angel' is so diverse that I willfully decided to opt for the mythological concept. If anything, the poem is even better after your explanation. You write really well, and deeply.

 

Ann Foxglove

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Wed 6th Jan 2010 16:27

I love the song - what relation does it have to you. Is it you singing, or did you write the words? It is truly lovely, very pure and haunting.

 

Isobel

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Wed 6th Jan 2010 13:45

Thanks for thanking me! LOL It just occurred to me that I hadn't googled the meaning of the title Villtur Augu. The closest I could come to it was Wild August, which seemed a bit improbable given the picture. Is there another meaning?

 

winston plowes

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Mon 14th Dec 2009 23:31

Hi Deborah... I found your poetic comments on Augusta Darlings recent offering "the Loveless" rich and inspirational ! please can you assemble these comments into a tighter piece ? I think it would make a great poem, maybe a title could be "kindling" Take care Win X

 

Augusta Darling

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Thu 10th Dec 2009 18:56

Sunlight and Black diamonds mmmmm...

Yes I may well try that soon.

Thank You so much

Augusta x

 

Starlight

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Thu 10th Dec 2009 17:52

Hi Debs,
thanks for your comment on my profile.
I've been reading your recent work. All very beautifully written. We must chat soon.

Starlight.x

 

Christine Dawson

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Tue 8th Dec 2009 08:26

Thanks Deb, for your kind comments, they are much appreciated.
Cx

 

Steve Mellor

Thu 3rd Dec 2009 18:52

It's ok, I've been relatively disturbed for some time
:-))

 

nicky burrows

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Wed 28th Oct 2009 22:10

Hi Deb, that was a lovely comment that you left on my profile, you really lifted me too, had a tough day. Thank you. Ponies? Dancing? If anyone had of asked me at nineteen, I would have chosen dancing! Lady, a beautiful but, feisty and pregnant grey mare decided to throw me mid-jump, (small jump luckily) couldn't walk properly for a fortnight, and was bruised for weeks. Still rode for a while, but life, work and family then took over.

nicky xx

 

John Coopey

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Sun 4th Oct 2009 22:23

Really like "Of the Earth", Deborah.
It's got a timeless quality reinforced by the pulsing rhythm.
I'm not much cop myself at stuff like this - mine always comes out less weighty.
Keep posting.
John Coopey

 

Steve Mellor

Sun 4th Oct 2009 12:08

Hi again DebR
I'm trying to make my mind up about poetry groups this month. I'm off to one in Leeds on Thursday (to hear my Life-Line ranted by Spencer). I was considering Sowerby on Monday, but I think (think) Hebden on Tuesday is more likely.
Just think! Me, out of the house twice in a week!!!!!
Nice to finally see what you look like.
Maybe see you??
Steve M.

 

Steve Mellor

Sun 4th Oct 2009 08:57

Hi DebR
Pendle was just a jokey piece for 3 of the 'ladies' on the site, who seem to have a connection.
It was odd, but I'd not heard of the Pendle witches myself until a week or two ago.
How's the home-hunt going? Uni? Life?
Speak soon I hope
Steve M.
:-)))

 

nicky burrows

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Sat 3rd Oct 2009 14:48

Thanks Debz,

I really enjoyed it, I have a love of anything to do with the unusual, supernatural and mythical etc, and I thought you put it together, very cleverly and very beautifully.

Nicky x

And thank you so much for your comments on 'The poem that should never........' . I know, I think, but I still wonder. x

 

Isobel

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Sat 3rd Oct 2009 12:48

Thanks for your comment on 'Poetry in Motion' Debs. Whilst not being a prude, I am obviously the extreme opposite of the recent poet of the month. I realised that my poem would be controversial - so I do have something in common with him - sometimes it's easier to take the middle ground - why can't I ever learn that....

 

Francine Louis

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Tue 29th Sep 2009 03:34

I hope all is well with you Deb...
Please keep me updated.

I used to eat almond croissants, but now I don't eat much of anything like that anymore, as you know...
What a treat though if they were good...
I do remember well : )

 

steve garside

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Sun 27th Sep 2009 09:43

HI Deborah - thanks for your 2pen'eth - always a pleasure

steve x

 

Gus Jonsson

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Sat 26th Sep 2009 21:34

Ahhhh.... Auntie Debz.... ued b my favorite Aunt!


Guszz

 

Antonionioni

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Thu 24th Sep 2009 08:51

Hi Deb - I could have a head-stretching operation so the glasses fit!

 

winston plowes

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Thu 17th Sep 2009 00:23

Hi Dedorah
Just looking again for some reason at 'Oyster' really love that one... Brilliant. Win x

 

Isobel

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Thu 27th Aug 2009 23:00

Hi there - thanks for your lovely comments on my poems - one of them did so tie in with what we were talking about. Enjoyed reading more of yours. x

 

Steve Mellor

Thu 27th Aug 2009 21:42

Hi Deborah
It was me that proposed many, many, many years ago, and my wife died 3 years ago.
Of the other kind, I'm living more in hope than expectation.
x Steve x

 

Steve Mellor

Thu 27th Aug 2009 11:43

Hi Deborah
I appreciate your reading Touch Love.
Never mind the sigh. Do you know that I haven't had a single proposal :-))))
Such is life
Steve

 

maipenrai

Wed 26th Aug 2009 21:25

Hi, it's Thai, three words, mai pen rai=no problem or never mind.
Bernie

 

Tommy Carroll

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Sun 16th Aug 2009 00:25

Deb Bill Hicks is so much more..

 

Tommy Carroll

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Sat 15th Aug 2009 21:57

Deb take an hour out to listen to his humour.

 

Jeff Dawson

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Fri 14th Aug 2009 12:04

No worries Deb, I'm fine thanx will be great to see you again either at tour or other date, Jeff X

 

Gus Jonsson

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Thu 13th Aug 2009 14:35

I am currently writing a collection of Pirateseque poems of which this one, although this poem is written in a pirate ‘Ooh Arr’ style the subject matter is the 4 winds , ie how they change the mood of ‘Captain Jack’ who is the evil master of this mighty force of nature.

Yes Debz, he is probably is one of my many, alter egos. Mind you if I blew up against one of these nights when your out with yer wine and bats... you would know all about it!!

Incidentally Captain Jack is another name by which heroin is known colloquially in New York and New Orleans and no doubt other seaports.

I may change the title to ‘Never An Ill Wind’…


Many thanks for your encouraging comments as usual.


Gusxx

 

John Darwin

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Mon 10th Aug 2009 13:58

Hi Deborah, I was a songwriter is a 'previous life' and although I rarely pick the guitar up these days some of what I write probably shows this. Thank you for your kind comments.
John

 

John Darwin

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Wed 5th Aug 2009 15:14

Deborah, only just caught up with your stuff. Lapped it up, it seems effortless and natural, your love of words shines through. Particularly enjoyed Desire.

Thank you.

John

 

Deborah R Jordan

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Thu 9th Jul 2009 20:55

thank you for your comment. she was a Romanian gypsy, ţigan, no not meant to be cigan, I think cigan is Slovenian and she was Romanian. ta, Deb

 

Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

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Mon 6th Jul 2009 23:35

"Tigan" was a good poem. Who is Tigan? Is it meant to be Cigan (gypsy?)

 

Cate Greenlees

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Thu 2nd Jul 2009 13:46

Hi Deborah, thanks for your lovely comment on my poem What Do You See....Ive always been a bit of a rebel, and it does creep out in my poems occasionlly!!
Regards Cate xx

 

Jeff Dawson

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Wed 24th Jun 2009 08:28

Hiya Deb, no probs, yeah I've not been to Heb for a while, will be good to see you again. We will be there for sure on Sat 3 October as thats our Hebden date of our Buskin 4 Beer poetry & acoustic tour! All welcome!!

Check my profile for dates, but will be advertising soon online and distributing flyers etc. I know theres not one this month but hope to be there Aug or Sept to plug the october thing. So, hope to see ya soon. If you fancy an open mic slot for October let me know, Jeff X

 

steve garside

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Wed 24th Jun 2009 07:19

Hi all,

Thanks very much for taking the time to read my poem – moment and making comment it makes me smile to know that I can mess about with words and achieve : )

A little of Robert Lowell John – high praise indeed : )

 

Gus Jonsson

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Tue 23rd Jun 2009 23:11

Hi Deborah'
WOW!.....for me ...a pressie...
Come down... North??? where from... I'm often up North nr Middlesbrough... Guisborough...dye know it??/

Anyway you are lovely...many thanks...
Gus xx

 

Nabila Suriya

Tue 23rd Jun 2009 09:15

Moniza Alvi too....they are top writers ! very sensuous, earthy and fluid in their writing x

 

Nabila Suriya

Mon 22nd Jun 2009 15:17

That is so sweet. Thank you so much :-) you have put a smile on my face. My mum chose my name from a novel she was reading when pregnant with me! I often think that made me a writer .

 

Christine Dawson

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Fri 5th Jun 2009 22:37

'Take this longing' by Leonard Cohen isn't like 'Oyster' at all - just that one line put me in mind of it. Nevertheless - it's a beautiful song, I think. It's on youtube:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eHqteBfKRu0

Cx

 

Christine Dawson

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Tue 2nd Jun 2009 23:28

Hi Deborah,
Nice to hear from you - hope you're well?
Cx

 

Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

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Tue 26th May 2009 00:57

I liked "Paper Ghost" very much...

 

Julian (Admin)

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Tue 28th Apr 2009 22:28

So, you just write because you need to express yoursef, eh?
And don't really know...
You are a lovely, superb writer, Deborah. Such gorgeous images. I wish I could write as you do.
Which village was it, by the way? In the 60s, I think it was, they classiffied all the villages in C. Durham and many of the pit villages were lableed D villages; not worth investing in, or so we were told. I did a teaching practice in one. Bowburn, just south of Durham city. Intersting to say the least.
Please keep on writing. And have more confidence in your work. The world needs you to do so.
Thank you.
Julian

 

Pete Crompton

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Wed 8th Apr 2009 20:30

Spring tide is beautiful
what a work of art.

 

Christine Dawson

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Thu 2nd Apr 2009 16:40

Ciao Deb,
State facendo molto bene parlare Italiano! - sto provando ad imparare il Greco al momento, sto dimenticando tutto l'italiano che ho imparato! Spero che siate bene,
Cx

 

Sophie

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Sat 7th Mar 2009 00:51

Nothing like a bit of beautiful poetry at 1 in the morning to set my mind afloat. I wish I could be more 'sentimental' in my own. So thanks for this : D x

 

bill

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Sat 28th Feb 2009 12:08

Thanks Deborah.
I couldn't get a life at Asda so I settled for a compromise, I have joined the ranks of the living dead, more appropriate anyway for anyone who spends time in supermarket aisles. Bill.

 

sian howell

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Sat 21st Feb 2009 15:25

such a powerful writer with a natural 'tuned in' ability to feed the reader with the right words to create some amazing imagery.
sian X

 

Jeff Dawson

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Wed 11th Feb 2009 22:56

Hi Deb, didnt get to last hebden bridge but might be at next one! Going wigan tomorrow and Bolton sunday, hope to see you soon, Jeff x

 

Anthony Emmerson

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Thu 29th Jan 2009 23:12

Hi Deborah.
Apologies it's taken me so long to get back to you - and for the "scary" avatar! (It really is me!) (No it's not, but I can't seem to find an either decent or recent one - working on it.) I'm pleased you liked "the Lavender Path." I think scents are the most evocative and inspiring of sensory experiences, they trigger so much memory and response. Have you have changed your "Profile" pieces? I don't remember reading "Paper Ghosts" before, and I'm sure I would have if I had. It's a very beautiful piece of writing, Subtlely onomatopoeiac and sibilant - I would love to hear it read. I greatly enjoyed "Traveller Sickness" too, although I hope it wasn't too autobiographical. There is great ability and diversity in your work, which is something I admire. It is obvious that you put a great deal in - to enable the reader/listener to get a great deal out. A real pleasure to read. Promise to get a new face - real soon.
Regards,
A.E.

 

Gus Jonsson

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Thu 29th Jan 2009 20:07

imagery imagery lost in in it ...wonderful ..wonderful..
Gus

 

Antonionioni

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Wed 21st Jan 2009 22:59

Thanks Debs - I've had 3 lovely days off work with this bad back but I fear it's getting better :( Ta for yer comments - off now to watch some Alan Partridge on DVD...

 

winston plowes

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Mon 12th Jan 2009 21:07

Hi Deb, Wow... well thats interesting. I have read the poem again and can see that now although can still see the dying horse also. If you were unclear, I don't think that mean's the poem lacks strength. It may actually mean equally strong but entirely different things to different people because of this. Sorry I missed your reasoning but I don't think you were rambling. Where would any of us be without rambling! Winston

 

Antonionioni

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Sun 11th Jan 2009 16:26

Que? En otras palabras, Yer what, luv? What the dickens? WTF? I beg your pardon, I never promised to mow the garden... I could go on all day with this nonsense. And I'd like to. But...

 

Darren Thomas

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Thu 8th Jan 2009 12:50

Hi - your poetry is intense and precise and although sometimes i get bogged down with the overuse of some adjectives married to nouns - i love the way that you include a poetic 'turn' or a profound clause at the end.

For eg.

"I am bitter winter
become warm spring
I am calm".

Personally, I think that you can do without the word 'bitter' before 'winter'.
Leaving the reader to fill in the outline of the word 'winter' in this succinct context can sometimes create a greater image in a reader's mind. I hope that makes sense?

PS I'm guilty this too, btw. The skill, I suppose, is knowing when and where to leave out the flowery adjectives. I'm still practicing...
But overall,poetry well worth absorbing yourself into. Well done.

 

holl

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Wed 7th Jan 2009 22:41

Hi thanks for the comment :)
i really like your poetry, you can
imagine everything in your poems
you have a great talent

 

Alison Mary Dunn

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Sun 4th Jan 2009 22:58

Hi Deborah, I love all of your poems you've posted. Your choice of words and the way you write is very free and powerful. If I had to pick one, I'd say 'Wolf Fog' is my favourite. Family of glass is awsome too. Hope to read more from you.

 

winston plowes

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Sun 4th Jan 2009 22:14

Hi Deborah
Now... I am afraid I canot respond in Italian and so feel rather inadequate. But hope to see you at the Hebden WOL event on Tue. Best Wishes, Winston

 

steve

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Sun 21st Dec 2008 18:51

Deborah... ringraziarla per portare che il tempo di leggere il mio commento di parole e marca (in italiano)! steve

 

Anthony Emmerson

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Sun 21st Dec 2008 11:26

Hi Deborah.
Just took a peek at your samples and I particularly enjoyed "Susto." It's not a word I have come across before, so I looked it up on Wikipedia. What a shame we don't have an equivantly powerful word in English! Thanks for the introduction.
Regards, A.E. x

 

Julie Rose Clark

Sat 20th Dec 2008 15:48

I love your poetry. The imagery is so very strong and has so much depth of feeling. Thank you Deborah, for writing. Julie-Rose

 

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