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Isobel

Email: farmoorgirl@yahoo.co.uk

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Last blog entry: Tue, 13 Jul 2010 02:56:21 pm

Profile updated: Tue, 6 Jul 2010 10:10:45 pm

 

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Bored with the bird 6/7

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What's It All About?

(Sung)
'What's it all about, Alfie?
Is it just for the moment we live?'

What's it all about?

Catholics know
That it's all in a piece of bread
The breaking of and the partaking of
Transubstantiation is a very long word
Can you spell it?
And I'd so like to join them
But bless me, I can't.

Born agains know
As they jump in and out of water
Praising the Lord and trying oh so hard
To wet everyone else

Jehovah's Witnesses know
Knocking on doors with their kids
Selling Watch Towers
And oh how well they watch
As the last drops of blood
Spill from a loved one
Never to be renewed...

Jews know
That it's all about kith and skin
Your family, your extended family
And your extended, extended family
Self-preservation, your livelihood, your life, your land
Hang on to it for grim death
And don't budge an inch.

Muslims know
The price to put on a woman's soul
A camel, an ass, a case of whiskey
Gag them and bind them
With yashmak and burkha blind them
It's all so fundamentally wrong
But I'd best keep my big fat
Western woman's mouth shut
In case someone Rushdies off
To put a fatwha on me.

What's it all about?

George W Bush knows
It's black and it's thick and it's very unctious
And it's not his heart or soul I'm talking about
Though it could be
It's not worth dying for
But it's worth someone else dying for.

Patriots know
As they wave and wear their flags
Proud and secure in their sense of belonging
Please Alistair Burnett
Let there not be one English man, woman or child
On that coach that plunged off a cliff in Paraguay
'And did those feet in ancient times
Walk upon English pastures green?'
I rather think not.

Anarchists know
Throw an egg, throw an omelette
Throw a party, throw up
Let em ave it, put the boot in
Up the anti
What a riot...

The Klu Klux Clan and the BNP know
It's all so black and white to them.

Separatists know
Basque (I'm not thinking sexy)
Tamil Tigers (Still not sexy)
ETA (mmm - now we're talking)
They know
Kill a policeman, lob a bomb
'New' IRA, Fighters for Freedom!
But what do you do when you've got it?
No effect without cause?

Hutus and Tutus know
Ditch the spear, grab a knife
Tear unborn child from warm belly
Get a life...

What's it all about?

Communists know
That what is yours is mine
As they dig deep into your pockets
Dig deep with their ice picks
Into the skulls of those who might just be
Of a different mind.

Fascists Know
It's all in the footwork
The goose step and the frog march
The takers and the took
You put your left arm in
Your left arm out
Peel the skin off a Jew
Then you turn the light out...

What's it all about?
Thank God, Allah or whoever
Most of us just don't have a clue
Until we're dying of course
But I can tell you a man who does
No - I can tell you a woman who does

Cilla Black
Cilla
Lorra lorra laughs
What's your name and where d'ya cum from
Black
She knows

No bible, no Quran, no dead sea scrolls
No constitition
No dib, dib, dib

Just a heavy script and some great lyrics

(sung)
'As far as I can see
There's a heaven above Alfie
One that even non-believers
Can believe in
I believe in love, Alfie...'

I'll let you reach your own conclusion.



Upon the Quality of Love

Romeo Romeo - where for art thou Romeo?
Speak now, that I should hear your voice, rejoice
that deafened ear should hear you call my name…
_____________

The quality of love is not defined,
yet trippeth from the tongue with gentle ease,
to each and every one of us a meaning
as fickle as the feather on a breeze

Speak not to me, I pray, of star crossed lovers,
so thwarted by the cruelty of fate,
love by trial and tedium untested,
denied the chance to flourish or to sate

As flowers cleave to sun, so do we clamour,
enamoured by the promise of romance,
blinded by the light to onward stumble,
and in our madness give no backward glance

To lowly soil beneath us oft forgotten,
that nourished once our hearts right to the core,
grounded us to earth its daily tending,
to universal chaos, lent its law

Uprooted we erode to senseless matter,
just desiccated atoms doomed to dust,
planets out of orbit, cased in darkness,
stripped naked of that sacred mantle, trust

For much that speaks of love is surely lust,
lost in a reverie of youth misplaced,
masquerading whore in virgin clothing,
exacting costly penance once embraced

Show me a love that stands the test of time,
beholds its prize through eyes bewitched, beguiled
before a faded bloom, beyond its prime,
to see the sweetest rose or flower wild

Show me a love that does not ask for all,
nor seeks the easy path in life to tread,
sees every facet of a fractured soul
yet loves enough to be by blindness led

Show me a love that does not seek to change
to chip, to hew to mould; instead to hold
such imperfection to the brightest light
delight, as though the dullest lead were gold…

Show me a love where two minds meet as one
sweet appetite by word and language fed,
a heat to melt a frozen land locked tear,
swell hearts with hope upon a hemlocked bed

Why then I should say, that Romeo lives, breathes
that Juliet sleeps,
perchance
one day,
to dream…

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Last blog entry

Your Gift

Posted on Sunday 11th July 2010 6:09 pm

 

Your gift to the world is nothing,

an empty box crammed with ash

of puckered mouths

sucked dry of light or hope

 

Your gift to the world a canvas

stretched taut with misery and pain

acrylic acid armoured,

its colours bled to angry daub

 

 

Your gift to the world a vulture

feeding from eyes of those who'd see,

triumphant in its mockery

of all once held so dear

 

 

Your gift to the world a dust bowl

an empty faceless well

a land locked, earth bound chasm

impervious, impaled

 

 

Your gift to the world is nothing

delivered with catholic conviction

Nazi annihilation

absolute abjection

 

Your gift to the world is nothing.

 

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Ann Foxglove

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Thu 29th Jul 2010 10:04

Thanks for your kind comment on my Incurable Romantic poem. xx

 

geraldine golightly

Mon 26th Jul 2010 11:38

Thank you -Jeff was meant to have that kind of detached - and so on humour , using an almost flippant view on Jeff's passing

 

geraldine golightly

Sun 25th Jul 2010 12:27

Thank you Isobel.

 

Tommy Carroll

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Wed 21st Jul 2010 18:24

Yes Isobel...thank you.

 

Graham Sherwood

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Mon 19th Jul 2010 22:56

Isobel, many thanks for reading Melancholium. Hope you have a great inspiring holiday. Graham

 

Chris Dawson

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Mon 19th Jul 2010 00:23

Thanks for the comments on 'Chaos'. The title is from an interest in Chaos Theory - and some 'poetic licence' taken in applying it (loosely!)to human relationships;and the picture is of a fractal - interpret as you will ;)
Cx

 

Gus Jonsson

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Sun 18th Jul 2010 13:10

Hello isobel


many thanks for your well thought through critique... you are getting warmer.. you have to wait and read the book ....one day...

Hope you are well hope to see you soon

Gus xx

 

Banksy

Sat 17th Jul 2010 08:30

Hi - (sleepers) I've got to admit - there's nothing like a good night's kip -"la petit morte" as francine would doubtless?? say. I like the clip as he says that heaven lies (not in the big expensive things in life), but the things that are hardly anything at all - a song, a kiss, a party etc. x

 

Rachel McGladdery

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Wed 14th Jul 2010 09:55

Aw Ta Isobel....I've had a lovely welcome back from you lot. xxx

 

Gus Jonsson

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Mon 12th Jul 2010 14:21




Hi Isobel just copied you in...

xxx


Thanks you ladies... I wouldn't dare do a follow up...but I know a a poet who may??

Perhaps it may be offered as a lemon drizzle prize subject..


LADIES OF A CERTAIN AGE

I'm sure Isobel and Francine could arrange that... I'll send the cake overseas if it comes to it... Whatya think ???

 

Janet Ramsden

Sun 11th Jul 2010 03:28

Hi Isobel, thanks for your comment, re- poetry-love affair.
Thing is, that is exactly what it has been for me. Turbulent, traumatic at times, beautiful and downright sexy at others. I don't think you saw my more raunchy ones. I have a very good sense of humour but it tends to come across as sarcasm when i attempt it in poetry.

I've finally, finally decided that the poetry performance scene isn't for me and so my time on here is over.(for good this time) :-)
I wish you well, it suits you and i know you still get a great buzz from it. That's gone out of it for me, as has the inclination to write any more.

See ya, love Janet.xx

 

Banksy

Sat 10th Jul 2010 23:54

BTW - I'm glad to hear you're fine & maybe I was falling into the trap of thinking "this is what you write, so this is what you are or believe". Big mistake ! And trudging round the Asda aisles alone - no - luckily for me - at that time - I'd long since learned to let go of regrets. xx

 

Banksy

Sat 10th Jul 2010 14:46

Aye - all's well that ends well.
this says it all for me -
"I would never UNWISH that now cos to do so would be to unwish its consequences - my children". That's my point - if you would not unwish it, then in my book its not a regret - just musings. besides, its only my take on things, not gospel. xx

 

Banksy

Sat 10th Jul 2010 09:35

Hi - great poem Isobel & you are so right about our struggles in life fuelling our art. My life has been very shitty in parts, (and probably, like many people, I seriously thought of ending it) - but still, not anything like as hard as yours, but I have been lucky in finding a "trick" to banish all regrets. For me, having a regret is a wishing that your life had been otherwise, (is that what you mean ?) - which (for me) is a negative view and unattainable anyway. There's nothing wrong with capitalising on our troubles & turning them into art, but (for me) to have regrets is to dwell on the past - to "agree" to be a victim of what may very well have been intolerable at the time. But that is in the past & by "agreeing" to hold onto our regrets (to "indulge" in them) - one cannot help but be (at least partly) governed & defined by them.
I know I sound like a vicar here - and I'm not at all religious - but if you Wanted to let go of your regrets - as I did - you can simply let go of them - not forget them, but deny them their hold over you. I haven't forgotten my troubles, but they no longer affect or define who I am. If your definition of Regrets is different than mine, then maybe your use of them to build your art is a good thing for you - an exorcising of your ghosts - but for me they would no longer be defined as regrets, just memories. It does sound as if I just like hearing the sound of my own voice here!
Sermon over :)

 

Dave Carr

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Sat 10th Jul 2010 01:42

Hi Isobel,
Re: the comment..
Read in French.
Pensé en Anglais.
Dave

 

Francine

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Wed 7th Jul 2010 04:24

Ouais !
Finalement... C'est toi : )

 

Pete Crompton

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Wed 7th Jul 2010 00:53

yoo hoo. Nice smile! Sorry but I been away for a bit, just catchin up on here. Good happy pic of izzy

 

Thaumaturgically Charged

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Tue 6th Jul 2010 22:41

Hurray !! the Ostrich has gone ;-)
Love your new picci ;-)
XXXX

 

Alvin Guinessberg

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Mon 5th Jul 2010 21:01

Thank you
Billy is also a great reader of his own poetry
http://www.youtube.com/watch?gl=GB&v=56Iq3PbSWZY

 

Lynn Dye

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Sun 4th Jul 2010 20:30

Thanks Isobel for your kind comments on "Flesh", glad you like the re-write. To be honest, I wondered about the 6th stanza myself, and couldn't decide whether to keep it in or not. It's always true people will think differently but I value your opinion, thanks again. xx

 

Lynn Dye

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Sun 4th Jul 2010 12:07

Hi Isobel, thank you for commenting on "Flesh". Before I joined WOL I had only ever written rhyming poetry, but I have recently dabbled with free verse - in "Arillas" and "Warm Embrace" for instance, yet sometimes I have to actually change verses because they ended up rhyming anyway!! I actually think rhyming works better with comical poems, but free verse is probably better with the romantic. Thanks for advice anyway, always welcome, and I shall give it more of a try. xx

 

Gus Jonsson

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Mon 28th Jun 2010 11:35

Hi IzDo you know when you call me

'A Naughty Boy'

I tingle from head to foot...

Thank you for your critique and hope to c u soon.xxx

 

Dave Bradley

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Sun 27th Jun 2010 23:21

Hi Iz

You've said that you'll be parking WOLOP until blogs are run on a different basis (though someone else could take it over). That could mean it may not resurrect. It hasn't lasted long but while it did it brought a lot of pleasure and interest (and a lot of work for you). It shouldn't end without someone thanking you. So...um...thank you.

Makes you think - there's lots of people do stuff for WOL on a voluntary basis. Does anyone ever thank them?

 

Ann Foxglove

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Fri 25th Jun 2010 21:40

ThanksIsobel - re Love to the Blood and Bone. x

 

SDeHS~OwT .VeR

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Wed 23rd Jun 2010 17:53

oh yesh indeed... for it is written... feminine all over, that's me, my 45rpm bra is two copies of Iron Nipples by 'Tits of Death' and I think I'd make a great Patti Smythe on "Stars in Their Eyes'... I even sent her a copy of the pic. via her managerie, she didn't reply of course... maybe the world is full of philistines after... mwa mwa - lovely daaarling

 

Janet Ramsden

Wed 23rd Jun 2010 11:17

Hi Isobel
thanks so much for your lovely comment on 'Summer's Eve.'
You are right in the sense of it being a gentle letting go. It's about letting go of Spring and the last stanza is about the ashes of Spring being used as hope for the Summer by nurturing/protecting the roots of a rose. Positive continuous existence :-)

Janet.x

 

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 22nd Jun 2010 11:50

Isobel, your comments are excellent; but the challenge of Sapphic is to write in very structured 'feet'; the pattern can't be broken. So one's 'freedom' is dramatically curtailed. The first 3 lines had to be:
/, // /,, /, /,
and the last line:
/,, //

Good words kept twisting and turning on me, mocking me. I refused to be beaten; this is an effort.

 

marvin cheeseman

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Sun 20th Jun 2010 23:36

Good luck with the World Cup Haiku - don't think they're absolute purists, they've used my 5/5/7s at least.
cheers, Marvin

 

winston plowes

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Fri 18th Jun 2010 23:12

hi Isobel - thanks so much for reading and commenting on "It Only Ends Once". your comments made me feel I have created a nice place to visit on a day when i feel abandoned. :-) Its a 'settling' poem i feel. Win x

 

Janet Ramsden

Thu 17th Jun 2010 11:48

Hi Isobel, thanks for your comment...
and give up poetry? I can't do that, it won't leave me alone :-)

I don't think the subject of the poem is in denial, hence the question mark in the title. I think the subject of the poem is fully aware.

Janet.x
ps I don't think i'll be on here again until the move has taken place. Just tried to blog a poem but there was no space to place my entry :-)
Such is life!x

 

winston plowes

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Tue 15th Jun 2010 23:51

dear Emmu, How do you volumise your lashes? Win :-o

 

Dave Bradley

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Fri 11th Jun 2010 11:36

Hi Izz

We noticed last night
that your rear red light
(not the one on the right)
has given up the fight

 

Chris Dawson

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Wed 9th Jun 2010 08:00

Hi there,
Thanks for your comments on 'Whisper' - I was trying for a wordplay on wisp/whisper/whisker, and it's the nearest I've got to a sonnet yet - but not sure it quite works ... hey ho! :)
Cx

 

Anthony Emmerson

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Tue 8th Jun 2010 13:47

I'm being stalked - in "real time!"
x

 

Thaumaturgically Charged

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Mon 7th Jun 2010 21:19

I see you are preparing to bury your head back into the sand heh heh...

 

Isobel

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Mon 7th Jun 2010 18:34

Am touched you noticed - yes - had a slight trim and lost the glasses...

 

darren thomas

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Mon 7th Jun 2010 18:27

There's something different about you...is it the hair?

 

Ann Foxglove

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Mon 7th Jun 2010 17:24

Just sticking my beak in about the Liverpool poetry thingy - how about reading The Quality of Love? It's a beautiful poem!

 

Isobel

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Mon 7th Jun 2010 17:19

Well Ann - now you mention it - he does have nice hands...

 

Ann Foxglove

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Mon 7th Jun 2010 17:16

Oh Isobel - you have turned into an emu! Does this mean that your ideal man is in fact Rod Hull? xx

 

Steve Regan

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Mon 7th Jun 2010 15:51

No,it's just one straight 4-min read for all contestants, Isobel. That's because it is a comp, not a slam, so there is no slam-off! Great, glad you're coming.

 

Steve Regan

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Mon 7th Jun 2010 14:47

Hi Isobel,

thanks for leaving a comment on that blog posting I did. I'm gonna leave a comment on it - as soon as I find the blasted article I was discussing.

I wanted, also, to urge you to take part in the free-to-enter poetry competition we are holding in Liverpool on Wednesday. Here are the details, m'dear ...

LIVERpoetry is to host the Grand Liverpool Poetry Competition next week on Wednesday, 9th June.

The competition has a top prize of £100 and is free to enter; and with prizes of £30 and £20 for the second and third runners-up respectively, it could be well worth your while digging out your best poems and taking them along!

Your poem can be on any theme, but each performance may be no longer than four minutes. Your time will begin when you start to speak, and points will be deducted if you exceed the four minute performance time. Judging will be on both the quality of the poem and the performance given.

A maximum of 25 poets can enter the competition, and spaces will be allocated on a first come, first served basis. Please arrive before 7.30pm and wait at the desk to register in the Upper Room of the Pilgrim pub on Pilgrim Street, Liverpool, LH1 9HB. Arrive in good time because once 25 poets have registered, the list will be closed.

 

Banksy

Sun 6th Jun 2010 23:34

Hi - I mean to send you this before your email, but sent it to myself instead....durr.
Hi - Isobel - I agree that the chemistry has to be there - if it's not, then it's just not & you are wasting your time. I think internet dating etc can work if you're prepared to give it a go, play safe & look out for nutters & (for girls) the "quick shag brigade" - it worked for me - but you have to decide what works for you.
Chris - you are sooooo right! As long as the chemistry is there and you LIKE this person, you can work on the other stuff - none of us is perfect & to expect that is going to end in disappoinment. Also - dont give up on them at the first major hurdle; try & hang on in there - just staying together counts for a LOT - it's as if the more you give, the more you get back. And both have to be able to say sorry. I've known several other girls in my life who (had I been a bit more mature) might have been "the one". X

 

Chris Dawson

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Sun 6th Jun 2010 10:55

Woops = just realised that I posted this on Banksy's profile - meant to post it on yours :)

Butting in on a private conversation here - hope that's ok. I think, for women in particular, we're led to believe that there is a 'someone' out there who is the 'right one', and all we've got to do is find him, prove that the glass slipper fits, and then hang on like grim death.
There's no 'right one', there's merely a choice of compromises to be made.
One of my favourite authors - Ann Tyler wrote in her novel 'A Patchwork Planet' (and I'm para-phrasing) ... after so many years to-gether, the other person sort of becomes the right person.
Cx

 

Banksy

Sun 6th Jun 2010 10:30

Hi - do you want another 2 cents??
most of what you say I agree with -I was in the same position that all the "sane" girls are already married etc. But if you perceive yourself as a Strong woman, dont you think that that can easily come across as "bolshie" & put off the "nice guys"? You've set yourself a prettty tall bar there -you're looking for "very special" -aren't we all? I'd be tempted to go for someone you fancy who treats you right & work on the rest later, as most women can twist their man round their little finger anyway & mould them to their needs (me included). sorry if it sounds like a lecture, but I'm just talking sincerely from my own experiences. X

 

Banksy

Sun 6th Jun 2010 08:28

my problem is that sometimes I make what are (to me) obvious jokes & people think I'm being serious ! It's the same with those defences of yours (and a lot of girls are the same BTW) - if you come across too "hard" you might put off the guys you want to reach & only the cocky idiots have a thick enough skin to take your banter - and they might not be what you're looking for. Only my 2 cents - it's not gospel, just my opinion as having "been there" myself quite a bit.

 

Banksy

Sat 5th Jun 2010 23:24

BTW - bitter & twisted = I WAS only joking !!

 

Banksy

Sat 5th Jun 2010 23:21

I'd pray for you to win the lottery too - only I'm not much of a believer. I don't know how I got to be so lucky this time round, but I'll keep my fingers crossed for you. I think that first you have to believe that such a thing (love) IS possible after all. X

 

Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Sat 5th Jun 2010 18:47

Hi, Isobel! Thank you for your nice comments on my jokes. With warmest wishes, Larisa

 

Chris Dawson

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Sat 5th Jun 2010 18:09

Thanks Isobel, left a fuller comment on the poem.
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Ann Foxglove

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Sat 5th Jun 2010 07:39

Yeh Isobel - our crayon chewer was Gwyn Price! Why on earth do I remember that! Maybe if we'd eaten crayons or stuffed them up our noses we'd be remembered for all time too.

 

Francine

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Fri 4th Jun 2010 23:32

Salut toi !
Eh bien tu vois...
Tu m'as inspiré d'écrire un poème aujourd'hui ; )
Merci beaucoup pour les beaux mots...

xxx

 

kath hewitt

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Fri 4th Jun 2010 23:21

Hi Isobel
Thank you for your generous comments on my Jackie challenge. I think i kinda like being distinctive enough to be recognized lol
thanks again x

 

hatta

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Fri 4th Jun 2010 18:28

Hello Lovely! Wowee as always!10 into 5 is simply cillalelululiah! It sweeps like vitamins through the system and comes out glossy. xxx

 

andy n

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Thu 3rd Jun 2010 13:41

See how drunk I get 2moro after work first, Isobel.. If I get very drunk - I may just arrive and perform in a drunken, wild manner.. Not much change from norm I know!! lol x

 

andy n

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Wed 2nd Jun 2010 13:14

Hi Isobel;

I was too tired to go to W.O.L. Sale on Tuesday.. One of those days in work! I am gonna make a effort for W.O.L. Stockport next Monday however and if I stay sober on Friday after work maybe Poetry Pillow! What are you up 2? x

 

ray miller

Wed 2nd Jun 2010 09:58

Ta for your thoughts on Brown Study. It reminds me now of Jane Austen TV adaptations. Mr Darcy!

 

darren thomas

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Mon 31st May 2010 14:04

Hi Isobel - 'Chin-Chin' (Panda's Box) is on my profile page if you need it. I'm sure it's far too cerebral for the average drunken bum and my Latin isn't what it once was - Toodli Bye Byeum.

 

Michelle Marie

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Fri 28th May 2010 13:41

Hi Isobel,

Re: no body... no alterations

 

Anthony Emmerson

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Fri 28th May 2010 00:02

Yes!

I'm with Gus - the last pic was very short-lived!

Thank you for visting "Neil" and your helpful and generous comments. I agree with all you say re the audio. I'm not too sure what I'm doing with it at the moment - a learning curve; so any comments/technical assistance are/is appreciated. I'll have a play around with it, but I'm pleased you saw what I had in mind. Sorry if I made you cry - it makes me cry too when I think about him.

Regards,A.E. x

p.s. You miscalculated - it's "LI" not "LII" - "LII" is sooo next year!

 

Gus Jonsson

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Thu 27th May 2010 23:05

You have returned to the defensive and aggressive pic again.... NEED yer legs!!!

 

Ann Foxglove

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Thu 27th May 2010 07:15

Are we WOLOPing this month? And thank you so much for lovely comment on "Poetess" too. x

 

Chris Dawson

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Wed 26th May 2010 23:29

Hi Isobel,
Thanks for your comments on 'Play Me', glad you liked it.
I've never tried a didgeridoo ... I don't think I'd be able to blow one, I prefer something much smaller and with a little more sophistication to it - like my clarinet. I agree though that finishing on a diminuendo is lovely.
:)
Cx

 

kath hewitt

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Mon 24th May 2010 22:46

Hi Isobel, My RE is tres poor too, though i agree that King probably did get inspiration from the bible.
I had hoped to get away with Pandoras sex change - looks like i managed it ok lol x

 

kath hewitt

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Mon 24th May 2010 15:47

Hi, Definately not blackpool!! It was actually inspired by Stephen King's Dark Tower series of novels. I wanted to try to stay away from the actual Pandoras box, yet keep the meaning? Hopefully i pulled it off!
Thanks for taking time to read and comment xx

 

Banksy

Sun 23rd May 2010 18:19

Hi Isobel - thanks for the comments. "grasping at straws" - about the nuances of words/phrases & the different ways in which they can be employed. & - the ampersand works for me on the page only because sometimes to repeat the word AND becomes a little tedious to the eye, and like it says in my bio, I much prefer the written word, so it needs to look "right" on the page for me. Each to their own though and I can well understand what you mean. You always have something interesting to say! all the best. B

 

Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Sun 23rd May 2010 13:26

Hi Isobel, thanks for commenting on 'Dead End'. I haven't come across 'The Rapture' but a quick google gave me the jist - Climate change is an old interest of mine, I started a web magazine on the topic in '07. Best wishes, Dave

 

kath hewitt

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Sun 23rd May 2010 09:43

Hi Isobel, Sorry, i wont be attending on tuesday, lack of babysitter. I'm sure we'll meet eventually! Thanks for asking though, it's quite a nice feeling to know i'm wanted lol x

 

Chris Dawson

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Sat 22nd May 2010 23:32

Thanks again, much appreciated.
Cx

 

Chris Dawson

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Sat 22nd May 2010 16:21

.... but please don't feel you have to comment again.
Cx

 

Chris Dawson

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Sat 22nd May 2010 16:19

Thank-you - removed it 'cos I thought it isn't much good ... but then again I'm not having the best of days. I shall put it back. :)
Cx

 

ray miller

Fri 21st May 2010 22:47

Ta for the Pandora words. It's always easier to blame the gods rather than Man, I find.

 

Anthony Emmerson

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Fri 21st May 2010 22:38

I had an email today from Mr Blackburn . . . Bet you can't guess what it said . . .

(Bet you b****y can!)

 

Anthony Emmerson

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Fri 21st May 2010 22:33

Isobel,

I have a bone to pick with you!

Regards,
A.E. x

 

Banksy

Fri 21st May 2010 21:48

PS - I think the idea I was trying to communicate rather badly was that "I can't NOT write it" - because it's there (if you see what I mean). B

 

Banksy

Fri 21st May 2010 21:42

Hi - thanks for the comments. I think I can honestly say that I generally (except P.Box) just write = ie not for myself or for anyone else - something sparks a beginning, then before I know it, it's finished (sometimes needs a little cropping or tidying-up).
I agree about the sex thing - it may seem a little surprising with some of the stuff I've posted, but some on WOL have made me squirm - I always try to write with honesty & integrity, but sometimes the subject matter doesn't always make for easy reading. I never write for effect or to shock, but I can see that it might come across like that sometimes - to me, there is no subject that I would not write about if the words/ideas were there. I can understand (see Dave Bradley's comment to me maybe) that some folks have boundaries that they would rather not cross, but for me, as long as it is done honestly, there's nothing taboo. Whether other folks "like" it or not is a different matter - and I'm not even sure that "like" is the right word anyway.
all the best. B

 

Banksy

Fri 21st May 2010 14:46

Hi - (the beautiful game) - thanks for you comments - I can do nicey nicey as well, but do you see how many comments it got? I've also noticed that rhyming poetry still gets far more interest than other types (mine + others). A lot of people do still like rhyme - I do as well, if it's good. all the best. B

 

Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Thu 20th May 2010 12:40

Thanks Isobel for commenting on 'The Angry Man' - I'm currently baffling him with polite responses, lol.

 

Banksy

Thu 20th May 2010 07:52

Hi Isobel, P.Box-I've copied this to you just to make sure you see it. B
Hi - thanks to all for your comments & just to answer some in order:
if Chris thinks this was a dig at Isobel I can say 100% that it was not a dig at anyone - Isobel & I had had some good-natured banter, but as far as I can see, that was all. Same for Isobel herself & her brother TC (I didn't know BTW) - there was no "motivation" - it was just a poem which almost wrote itself, as many do. The catalyst for the poem was Gropecuntelane - a common street name right across the UK as frequented by prostitutes until most got renamed for "decency's sake". One remains in Southwark & one of the newspapers - Guardian, I think - had a picture of the nameplate still on the wall down some backstreet by a block of flats a while back & the name stuck in my mind - can't think why.
Nash - the mighty Nash - got it right -it's a love poem & it says so in the last 2 lines.
Just to reiterate - I've no axe to grind with anyone - dedicating a recent poem to Isobel was just for a laugh - nothing sinister - and I'd hoped it would be seen as such. TTFN. B.

 

Larisa Rzhepishevska

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Fri 14th May 2010 16:20

Hi, Isobel! I am happy to know that my comic poem "I am on diet" made you laugh. If it was not for humour our life would be so boring.
With warmest wishes, Larisa

 

Anthony Emmerson

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Thu 13th May 2010 23:18

Thanks Isobel,

Your analysis is pretty much right on the money. Maybe I'll tell you all about it sometime.

Regards,
A.E. x

 

kath hewitt

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Thu 13th May 2010 21:36

Thank you Isobel :-)

 

winston plowes

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Thu 13th May 2010 14:35

Hi Isobel, glad you can relate to whats going on in this... liked your extra comparisons. The shaking bird was a reference to the vibrating. As for the title ;-P , It is supposed to be a winking face with its tongue sticking out but in some fonts that have serifs the tongue doesnt look great. Generally accepted as meaning 'naughty' but I thought the tongue went well with the 2nd line. I have just found ;-9 which is supposed to be 'licking lips' and may be better. Win

 

Thaumaturgically Charged

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Wed 12th May 2010 20:57

FYI I store the ammo inside the very large Cannon I pack heh heh XX

 

kath hewitt

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Wed 12th May 2010 19:28

Hi Isobel, re the song, you are right i don't remember it but i get the humour now i know what you mean.
As for the Tudor, it's unlikely to be honest, but ta for asking.

 

kath hewitt

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Wed 12th May 2010 16:21

Hi, No, i don't dance. Why?

 

Steve Regan

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Wed 12th May 2010 11:24

Hi Isobel. I presume you got to hear the audio remixing of your poem at the exhibition in Wigan. I did a similar thing with John at Leigh Turnpike, but I couldn't get to the exhibition (it was only on for one night). John did send me an audo loop, however, and that sounded good. I will try to listen to "Cramp9ng My Style" on the features section. I have hardly delved into the features so far, but then again, we do live in a world of too much information.

NOW THEN! It's LIVERpoetry! tonight (WED 12 MAY) at the Pilgim pub, Pilgrim Street, central Liverpool L1 9HB. Open-mic. You came to the launch event (at a different venue) and it would be good to see you again soon.

I followed your comments on the state of this site with interest. The people who run it appear to be most reluctant to give LIVERpoetry any publicity in the news section. Hey ho, the petty politics of the poetry scene!

 

Ann Foxglove

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Wed 12th May 2010 09:11

ooops! So I did! (Put it in the wrong place!) Have now moved it so you might want to move or delete your comment too. xxxx

 

Tommy Carroll

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Tue 11th May 2010 22:51

Thank you Isobel for your personal comment. ''I could go on...'' please do!: )

 

Max Wallis

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Sat 8th May 2010 14:22

Nice to meet you last night Isobel!

 

andy n

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Fri 7th May 2010 14:00

thanks for the comment over my latest poem, chuck. it is a bit off a surreal one, i must admit and isn't the clearest one of them but i always think it is good to confuse poets once in a while.

confusion rules! lol x

 

Pete Crompton

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Mon 3rd May 2010 23:33

Hi Isobel, thanks for your feedback and lovely words on 'Ankle Chain', means a lot that you liked it. x . Peter.

 

Ann Foxglove

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Sun 2nd May 2010 14:48

Sorry that May Day celebrations have passed you by this year Isobel. Here in Aggie we have our Giant Bolster Pageant. I've given you a link but it does go on a bit!! xx http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YDrpsDTS3qY http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8v4yKUqFwls

 

Francine

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Sun 2nd May 2010 03:08

Re: 'Cramping My Style'
I finally got to hear it Isobel!
I see what you mean now - kudos to John for making it sound so amazing.

xxx

 

Ann Foxglove

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Wed 28th Apr 2010 09:49

Thanks for your kind and funny comments on Marshmallow. You always look very slender in your pics on here. As to writing about the male physique, I can't remember what one looks like! If you see what I mean!

 

Gus Jonsson

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Thu 22nd Apr 2010 10:44

Dearest Isobel

How lovely you are, how sweet and endearing to confess to being targeted by my Phartesque - ( A description for the high blown or windy tales of intrepid endeavour)

To mess with your mind and convince you that there was indeed a subliminal and subtle message would be demanding just a little from both your razor sharp repartee and feminine intuition.. No, I am overjoyed that you rollick and roll so as to speak to my good old ‘Toilet Humour’, toilet humour at its best no less what an accolade.

I thank you as always, lovely legs.

Hope to see you soon.

Gusxxx

 

winston plowes

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Tue 20th Apr 2010 20:20

Hi Isobel - thanks for commenting on the secret lives of woods.why is is you don't like nature poems. Maybe as I don't like political poems - I just can't explain why lol. Glad thisone struck a chord. Win x

 

hatta

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Tue 20th Apr 2010 19:07

Hello Wunderpoet! Thank you for your comments re shoes! I'm honoured indeed to have provoked such a lot of thought and analysis. Yes, the piece isn't about children, either :D!

 

shoeless

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Mon 19th Apr 2010 22:23

thanks for the commments on my poem , you know i cant do long ones. so short is all they ever are :)

 

Lisa Milligan

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Mon 19th Apr 2010 13:05

Thanks so much for your note. You answered all my questions!

Lisa

 

Rachel Bond

Mon 19th Apr 2010 09:20

hah yeh...at the same time my mum was trying to deafen herself to the sounds of next doors piano practice...its a sign! of what i dont know but sign nevertheless

 

Rachel Bond

Mon 19th Apr 2010 07:49

hey Is. nice to see you at volunteers gig. werent they great. should have come and danced with me at the front. i like to find my place right next to the speaker x

oh yeh and that poem was great admin x

 

hatta

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Sun 18th Apr 2010 20:26

Hello, fair faced friend and wondrous poet! Thank you for your comments. You cheer me up so often and so well I've decided to make you a saint. There you are. How about that, then?

 

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 17th Apr 2010 18:51

Isobel, you are such a supporter. Thanks much. One is almost a 'story', and the other is almost 'abstract'. I've gained some 'reputation' for the former; but I'm really interested in honing other skills as well, just for fun. I actually prefer reading straightforward poems usually, but it's fun to puzzle sometimes, - operative word - SOMETIMES.

 

Francine

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Sat 17th Apr 2010 16:57

Merci beaucoup Isobel pour tes commentaires sur mon poème
'Is it not enough...'
J'apprécie le fait que tu es toujours honnête et généreuse...
Cela m'a fait du bien de l'écrire ; )

xxx

 

Ann Foxglove

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Mon 12th Apr 2010 07:29

Hi! just to tell you that I had a dream with you in it last night. You were standing on a balcony surrounded by swags of greenery and singing this great song about the power of love. The crowds were enraptured! You were very good! xx

 

Ann Foxglove

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Sun 11th Apr 2010 06:42

Re Pinny. Thanks for your comments. Ah! Marriage! The man I lost and I were never married. Far too bohemian - which was all very well until he dropped down dead without making a will. Which, funnily enough didn't matter at all regarding money and stuff, but was just more hassle at a terrible time. He was a right pain on occasion, but we really loved each other and he was never boring and had a heart of gold. AND was my best friend too. I think this poem just comes from how I feel seeing couples everywhere. They seem to be more in evidence around bank holidays! I don't think I'm the marrying kind. Miserable selfish old loner, that's me! ;-) Did try it once a million years ago. And I have my two children who are lovely, tho grown up and living in London. And I know that marriage is not a bed of roses etc. Maybe that's the trouble - I just want a bed of roses!!

 

Gus Jonsson

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Wed 7th Apr 2010 23:26

Yes Old Jack was a bit of a lad Isobel... Hope I don't spoil a good nights sleep... oh the very thought!...thank you for commenting....

Gus xx

 

Chris Dawson

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Wed 7th Apr 2010 15:29

Hi Isobel, thanks very much for your comments on 'Minefield', glad you enjoyed it. You know, until you mentioned it, I hadn't even noticed that it fitted quite well with my war thingy, it actually preceded 'War' by about 2 years. Perhaps I have developed a fixation with combat as metaphor for life .... watch out for 'Tank!' - the story of my dieting ... ok, maybe not ;)
Cx

 

hatta

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Wed 7th Apr 2010 14:42

Hello Lovely, I departed, briefly, for a breather after a weird 'do' on Easter Monday. Massive big thank yous for your generous comment on the Dalek's nit, and for noticing I'd hopped off for a mo. You, as always, amaze me -- as both a poet and the person you are (each being somewhat inextricable from the other). xxx

 

Rachel McGladdery

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Tue 6th Apr 2010 09:19

Lol!It'll be a publishing launch spesh again....you get a free copy though but I have my doubts whether there'll be an open mic that night at all.
Thanks for the comment on Lucy by the way.
xxx

 

John Coopey

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Mon 5th Apr 2010 22:20

You should try holding them by the testicles (dentists, that is) - it encourages mutual consideration.

 

Rachel McGladdery

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Mon 5th Apr 2010 20:25

Hi Isobel,Where have I been???? I've been to hell in a hand basket...the brink...the dizzy limit...well ok then I've been a bit depressed lol, bouncing slowly back now. I am reading at another couple of publication launch events at That Preston one on April 20th and one May 25th if you fancy chancing it....
x

 

Augusta Darling

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Sun 4th Apr 2010 23:17

Good Evening Isobel

Whilst I am the first to agree Isobel, many a fine and upstanding man of the cloth exists within the main body of the churches establishment, but they are far and few between. The farcicality of chastity for life , in my view the catalyst for this plague of violation and abuse, is main cause for this most unpalatable tainted ministry, in my view the evidence is over whelming.

Take the dishonesties and hypocrisy of our fine upstanding political representatives in parliament. If an honest man or woman be there let them be named, for the life of me I can not identify them.

This hypocrisy and theft of children’s innocence together with relentless avarice and manipulation of guilt has been aside the poor and ignorant for centuries and neither is it localised to the UK. This elitist poison has been with us world wide since we first vacated the caves and formed tribal communities.

‘A House Called Heaven’

My poem, however, does not really highlight the extent of my own views and feelings it is a simply a poem addressing a fantasy brothel called ‘Heaven’ and the type of cliental that would be attracted by such a heavenly establishment..

Augusta xx

 

John Coopey

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Sun 4th Apr 2010 22:43

Thanks for your comments on "Sheds" - my rather simplistic guide to marriage guidance counselling.
I do hope your reference to my red hot poker was not a masturbatory allusion! I would have you know that this was simply an adolescent phase I was going through for the rest of my life.

 

ray miller

Sat 3rd Apr 2010 22:27

Are you being suggestive, Isobel?! I have "performed" this once and it didn't go down well. It was in a library, which didn't help, and there were tuts from some in the audience, abhorred at the vulgarity. Anyway, at present there's no sound on my computer!Thanks for the comments.

 

Paul (Admin)

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Fri 2nd Apr 2010 10:45

Thanks for commenting on latest Cross Cultural Poetry project.
The point of the project is not the translation per se but to understand and appreciate the problems, particularly concerning cultural differences, the translation process throws up. That's why I asked Fatima to provide notes on the translation process.

I think your idea about an audio version of the poem is a good one and I'll try wherever possible to get one in future.

 

Ann Foxglove

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Fri 2nd Apr 2010 10:28

Ta for reading Poet's Death. Actually I wrote this a few weeks ago, just popped into my head, don't know why. I expect I'll be found slumped over my computer keyboard making my last blogg entry on WOL (as opposed to a blogg exit - sorry bad taste Elvis joke!)xx

 

Rev Two-Sheds

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Thu 1st Apr 2010 22:18

thanks Isobel... - 'untitled' is just an old clunker that I rattle out from time to time when taking the mic. and so on... happy to have raised a smile. It gets mixed reactions, the Lady says that the by far best reaction so far seemed to be when I performed it in a theatre full of lesbians... as y'do.

 

Francine

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Wed 31st Mar 2010 16:45

Merci toi pour tes commentaires sur mon poème 'Alone'...
Tu me connais assez bien, alors tu sais ce que je veux dire
la plupart du temps ; )

xxx

 

Lisa Milligan

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Tue 30th Mar 2010 17:00

Thank you so much for your comments on "I Thought White Was Beautiful". I always thought of it as written in metaphor but I like your interpretation of it being written in allegory is much more accurate. I very much appreciate your insight.

Lisa

 

Greg Freeman

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Mon 29th Mar 2010 12:49

I'm really chuffed about your comments on Semana Santa, Isobel. We were there for a week in a small town halfway between Granada and Seville, where my daughter was teaching at a little English language school. The way the atmosphere builds during the week; we saw it in Seville as well as Osuna. And as for the hoods ... you're right about the Klu Klux Klan .. slightly alarming, to say the least! Greg

 

Janet Ramsden

Mon 29th Mar 2010 12:39

Hi Isobel,
thanks for your comment on In fidelity.
I added a comment of my own below the poem if you're interested to have a gander. :-)
xx

 

Augusta Darling

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Sun 28th Mar 2010 16:18



Good afternoon Isobel,

Thank you for grappling with my grandfathers scrotum.

I would very much like to produce a self published book of my poetry... and 'Bollocks' might well be the Title although many of my poems do include reference to ladies gentalia... now I wonder what a combination of the two might be...

I'm open, as always, to suggestions.

Augusta

August

 

ray miller

Sun 28th Mar 2010 11:45

Isobel, thanks for your kind remarks on Unexpected Steps. I retired over a year ago and the menagerie is somewhat depleted, 2 dogs, 4 cats and a rabbit. Can't seem to get rid of the kids, though.

 

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 28th Mar 2010 10:34

Isobel, I was ill on Tuesday gone, and missed the first Waterside in ages. Sounded like a great evening. Maybe it will take some of the 'anti' out of the venue. I see I also missed you and Janet. My loss. Speaking of - Stan still seriously wonders if his only leather gloves might not be in your car - somewhere. Did you check any further?

 

winston plowes

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Sun 28th Mar 2010 09:38

Ah the Genie is out of the bottle!

 

Ann Foxglove

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Sun 28th Mar 2010 07:02

Oh Isobel, you look nice this morning but it's a little bit early for me! Are you sweet or very very dry? (The latter I suspect!) And of a good vintage! Cheers! xx

 

Francine

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Sat 27th Mar 2010 23:27

Mmmm...
chin-chin ; )

xxx

 

hatta

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Sat 27th Mar 2010 08:52

A mind is a series of points of view shoved out of the mouth/dispersed by a number of gestures. What's not to like? You have such an ease with language it's loveable.

 

Ann Foxglove

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Sat 27th Mar 2010 06:06

Thanks for comments on Spelling. . . I guess the spelling issue was supposed to imply a more general lack of communication between two people, not on the same wavelength type of thing, maybe if you were trying to distance yourself from someone you're attracted to. But I'm not very good at spelling anyway! And I agree you wouldn't fall for someone cos they were a good speller! But that's the point of the poem maybe? And it's based on someone I know. xx

 

Anthony Emmerson

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Sat 27th Mar 2010 01:08

Hi Isobel,
Missed you too. Been a funny time for me of late - not funny ha-ha. My comment wasn't meant to be cryptic. What I meant was that it was about time you allowed others a chance to reward your talent and be suitably WOLOPed. Like your latest too - although I'm not going to say why publicly for fear it gets me into trouble - as usual. Beautiful minds are rare, whether male or female. Beautiful words it seems these days, rarer still.
Regards,
A.E. x

 

Janet Ramsden

Fri 26th Mar 2010 12:20

Thanks for commenting on my Hyacinths poem. Much appreciated.

Janet.x

 

Augusta Darling

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Tue 23rd Mar 2010 14:37

Hello Isobel
Thank you for sticking to poetry.

The subject matter at its base root level is undoubtedly SEX.

The subject ‘Samey’.. Well I make no apologises, the base survival and instinctive drives roots in life as far as mankind, womankind for that matter, are concerned is
SATIETY, SHELTER, and SEX. Sexual gratification, adventure, tragedy, loss, horror joy, perversions are all arenas in which I explore the samey subject of sex.

Love is not sex nor is it a base root for our survival and in my humble opinion, nor does it come close to being.. Sex has long been accepted as the catalyst of contract. Prostitution aside, take WAGS and celebrities as a prime example.

Yes indeed there are a multitude of themes but they will all come down to these basic roots driving them at some point, as for ‘SEX is great but there is only so much sex you can take’, once again I think you are deluding yourself. Sex is not always gratuitous and pornographic it’s in everything we see and touch every second of the day it is what makes us different from Tarmac

Isobel with legs like yours you are never going to be more than a moment away from the energy of sexual fantasy, and that in itself, albeit a catalyst, is the reason you use them thus and not just for walking. Not withstanding your pretty shoes and expose tights.

‘We girls sticking together’, is that a subtle call from Lesbos, or is that me aflame once more., ahh me , I shall continue the penning of my next poem which is on the subject of how to make a bread pudding rise slowly.

Many Thanks

Augusta xx

 

Francine

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Sun 21st Mar 2010 22:28

As always Isobel, I appreciate your support, as well as your funny and insightful comments.

Merci pour tout : )
xxx

 

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 18th Mar 2010 12:00

OK, I'm being totally picky here: but, the title of that particular poem was Vanilla Sex. I do think Ice indicates an entirely different 'take' on the subject.

 

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 18th Mar 2010 11:56

Hi, Isobel,
You asked me to tell you when I would be appearing again in Manchester. I'm doing a regular 'gig' tonight at the Green Room, Whitworth Street.
Friday, March 19, tomorrow! at the closing of Manchester's Central Library, I'm reading one of my own poems under the umbrella of the Manchester Library's Poetica Group. I am so honoured to be chosen.

 

Ann Foxglove

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Sat 6th Mar 2010 16:04

Look forward to some more wonderful poetry when the month is up! Bye for now.xxxxxxxx

 

Ann Foxglove

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Sat 6th Mar 2010 15:43

Yup! I tried to give up for one week. After nearly 6 days I sneaked back! We'll miss you. lots of love af xxxxx

 

Ann Foxglove

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Sat 6th Mar 2010 08:56

Thanks for your comment Isobel (Mapping). Always appreciated. It makes me sound a bit arrogant, re not changing anything. Hope I don't come across that way! ;-) I expect, knowing me, I'm just off writing the next one and the bird has flown, as it were. I think as I grow and improve as a poet I will take more notice of what people say. I'm only grateful that they bother to read it! xx

 

Thaumaturgically Charged

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Fri 5th Mar 2010 20:34

Hola Issy thank you for the blog on Teardrop much appreciated you hot piece of totty ha ha ;-))
Love TC XXXX

 

hatta

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Thu 4th Mar 2010 14:23

Yes, you're exactly right -- some people are profoundly irrepressible. You can attempt a vasectomy (or similar analogy) but they're going to bubble up anyway and follow their own path. You're spot on. Which is a relief since I'm delighted you like my mini poem!

 

Rachel McGladdery

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Tue 2nd Mar 2010 07:32

Hi Isobel, thanks for the comment. I'm playing catchup (a la Henry Kelly)with comments cos I have had scant computer time recently since Chris discovered Facebook (insert rolly eyed smiley here.) Very glad you enjoyed the poem.Rachelxxx

 

Emma McCourty

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Mon 1st Mar 2010 13:33

Isobel, thank you so much for your lovely message regarding the un-named poem. Im so glad you like it. I love the title suggestions thank you and will pich to call it "shelved" I think. Thankyou!
take care ~~~ em ~~~

 

John Coopey

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Sun 28th Feb 2010 22:29

I spent half my school days walking back to school from a bus stop a mile further on. I blamed the road's potholes.
These days it takes a lot more than potholes.

 

John Coopey

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Sun 28th Feb 2010 20:46

Thanks for the comment about Piggies.
I'm not admitting to it being entirely autobiographical, but I did do it on a train going to Edinburgh; it was only going to be a couple of verses long but I got carried away (and because I couldn't stand up, had to stop on till Aberdeen!).

 

Alvin Guinessberg

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Sun 28th Feb 2010 06:43

I liked your reading of the quality of love in the same way I like to see/hear the Northern Broadsides theatre company perform Shakespeare. It's the vowel sounds which convey the emotion so well

 

Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Sat 27th Feb 2010 17:07

Hi Isobel, thanks for commenting - Man Still Ponders' is very definitely a tongue in cheek (maybe 2 tongues), primarily written to cheer my friend up, but it also drew a lot of reaction from others so I posted it around a little :) Best wishes

DAve

 

garside

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Sat 27th Feb 2010 12:09

Hi Isobel

thanks for reading and making comment on my poem

steve x

 

Antony Owen

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Fri 26th Feb 2010 15:45

'Held' has a cracking first stanza.

 

winston plowes

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Mon 22nd Feb 2010 21:06

Hi Isobel, Thanks for your comments on 'Ghazal' recently. More detailed comment left on the blog entry if you wish to view it. Thanks Win x

 

kath hewitt

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Mon 22nd Feb 2010 20:53

Thank you Isobel! x

 

kath hewitt

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Mon 22nd Feb 2010 19:54

Hi Isobel,
Thanks for commenting on 'one more for the cellar', even though you didn't like it. I appreciate the honesty. X

 

Janet Ramsden

Mon 22nd Feb 2010 16:31

Thanks for commenting on 'There to Here.'
Detailed interpretation of how i see it in comments below poem if you want to see it. :-)
You were very close.

Janet.x

 

Banksy

Sat 20th Feb 2010 17:38

Hi - thanks for the kind comments.
- "I'm not at all sure that true love exists. I think it is just a dream that people chase" - I think this is really sad - I just sat here 20 mins thinking what else to say, but I'm stumped.

 

Banksy

Fri 19th Feb 2010 17:42

OK - I'll post a lovey-dovey dewy-eyed one just for you - if I can find one amongst all the filth, that is.

 

Banksy

Fri 19th Feb 2010 17:39

After all the fun of the fair, a woman really wants to be held. That is often where it all falls apart... Yeah - but still gaggin for it - right?

 

Nichola Burrows

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Thu 18th Feb 2010 11:31

15 weeks to go and counting!Whatever happened to the stork??!xx

 

Greg Freeman

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Thu 18th Feb 2010 10:39

Thanks for your message, Isobel. It's true, working on a paper over the years has usually been absorbing and always kept me on my toes. But I rediscovered poetry a few years ago after not writing any since my teens, and am lured by the things it expresses that journalism can't. You may be surprised to know that I find time to monitor WOL fairly regularly, even at work! It keeps me thinking about poetry every day. (Sounds a bit like a laxative?) Greg

 

Nichola Burrows

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Thu 18th Feb 2010 09:04

Hi Isobel, Great Pic!! You look fab. Whose the glamourous mum now hey!! Good to be back. Have missed you all. Anything interesting been going on?xx

 

Banksy

Wed 17th Feb 2010 18:14

I very nearly fell for that - and I thought you were being sincere: Definitely a 'feel good' poem Banksy - you do have a heart. Will restrain myself from writing anything rude - I am capable of leaving bog standard comments, you know...
oh yeah? "bog standard"? - perv!

 

Banksy

Tue 16th Feb 2010 12:09

"Was she tied up an gagging for it at the time?"

- you really do have a one-track mind..... = a perfect woman :)

 

Rachel McGladdery

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Tue 16th Feb 2010 10:34

Thanks Isobel, I like Wigan actually, you're never that far from greenery are you?
Cheeeeeers,
Rachel
xxx

 

Janet Ramsden

Mon 15th Feb 2010 15:01

My latest is written in Iambic Pentameter too with some eleven syllable lines with weak endings. Not strictly rhyming. I'm not sure i got some of the line endings right or some of the Trochees and it might be out a bit on some of the punctuation. I really don't know and to be honest, i'm not even sure i care any more. It wears me down.

Janet.x

 

Janet Ramsden

Mon 15th Feb 2010 14:37

Hi Isobel, thanks for commenting on my Chinese New Year poem. I'll let you into a little secret... I was born in the year of the dog and have other animal instincts linked in. :-)

I doubt very much that ANY of my poetry will EVER be described as 'wonderful' meter etc.... but if that was the only reason for me writing anything, i probably would never write again. It's just not my genre...
but YOU have a gift and a wonderful talent for writing which is recognized by many on this site and so the comments are well deserved. Keep it up but most of all enjoy it.

Janet.x

 

Joshua Van-Cook

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Mon 15th Feb 2010 10:27

The chat was working, I'm just not fast at typing. Soz.

 

Joshua Van-Cook

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Mon 15th Feb 2010 09:55

Thanks Isobel, I appreciate it. Best of luck to you and your poetry too.

- Josh

 

kath hewitt

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Sun 14th Feb 2010 20:22

Thanks Isobel ;)

 

John Aikman

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Sat 13th Feb 2010 14:29

Thanks for your suggestions for rhymes...most invigourating. I've just been railing (on another thread) against the tired pairings of words that tend to inhabit some poet's canons. I can see you've given it some serious thought!

: )

One day I really will get to grips with something really sensual...honest, I will, but every time I have tried so far it has always seemed just...I dunno...naff. I need to loosen up a bit. I tried writing some 'Agusta lite' the other day...and it just ended up sounding like...Augusta lite. Certainly wasn't a poem, by any of the measures that I employ anyway.

Might send you some one day...and see what you think.

Keep up the great work.

Jx

 

Banksy

Thu 11th Feb 2010 20:40

Naughty but nice Banksy. I bet the only gaps you find now are in your hairline or teeth... in fact looking at the evolution of the species, you might just struggle to fit a palm anywhere, let alone without touching. After reading you and Cynthia, I definitely feel inspired to write something risque... xx
Some women just do have that particular "gap" morphology.
Write away - we're all waiting to hear what women really want - we now know what cynthia wants ;)

 

Banksy

Wed 10th Feb 2010 18:14

believe me - there's a lot more than 2 of us out there: what a crying shame you haven't "come" across more of them :) B

 

Banksy

Wed 10th Feb 2010 16:05

Can't decide whether you are inspired by another poem on here or challenged by it...
If you are darker still, I'm guessing there's more to come. Best keep my eyes open!
No - I was just telling cynthia that I also had a poem by the same name in my list & I'd post it if it wasn't too pervy :)

 

Steve Regan

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Mon 8th Feb 2010 16:50

Hi isobel, I'll try to remember to bring a few copies tonight. Don't pay me owt, though, just have it as a present. Great, I'm so pleased you're coming tonight!! I haven't got a moby number for you so I couldn't send you a text alert.

 

Ann Foxglove

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Sun 7th Feb 2010 14:01

Thanks for including me in the WALLOPS. xxxx

 

Francine Louis

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Sat 6th Feb 2010 17:01

Tu me fais rire!
D'accord... Tu m'analyses et je t'analyse ; )

xxx

 

Rachel McGladdery

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Thu 4th Feb 2010 10:38

Thanks for the comment on 'For You', I know, it makes me so sad that they grow up so fast....I watched a programme on telly once, years ago about putting children in tupperware to keep em fresh....hmmm maybe a pretty Cath Kidson one? ;)
Rachel
xxx

 

Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Thu 4th Feb 2010 09:27

What's it all about is a great introduction to your thinking - I'm inclined to respect all true religions as each are seeking a path that ought to benefit their communities. I remain a humanist myself though, so brotherly love is something I like to encourage in the interests of all. Best wishes, Dave

 

Janet Ramsden

Wed 3rd Feb 2010 20:38

Soft and gentle?
actually i prefer Sure :-)

Only joking, new year, new look.
Might try a different one but still smiling. Thanks.xx

 

Gus Jonsson

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Wed 3rd Feb 2010 18:05

Ya little tinker.... you only have to ask..God I can feel my sap risin as I speak...

Gusxx

 

kath hewitt

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Sun 31st Jan 2010 00:12

Thank you Isobel for your comment on my poem 'untitled'.

 

John Aikman

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Wed 27th Jan 2010 16:23

Re 'Martin'

The word 'eutectic' comes primarily from the realm of 'physical chemistry'...that was the first clue....but I wouldn't expect most folks to get that one...I took out a whole verse about how I had to bite the line through and consequently ended up rather close to his tearful face...which was how come I could taste his tears and his breath (he always smelled of sherbert...his gran ran the local sweetshop!). When I took out that verse it suddenly became just funny...rather than funny/sad/longing/...Ho Hum.

Back to the drawing board. Thanks (as ever)

:)

Jx

 

John Aikman

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Wed 27th Jan 2010 10:10

I'm glad you enjoyed 'Martin'. It may be my final piece for the OU course I've been doing. Nobody seems to have 'caught' the adolescent, homoerotic subtext. Is it that invisible?

The original draft was packed full of adjectives and explanation and then I whittled it away to the core...perhaps I did too much whittling? It's a true story. Seems I can only do true stories.

:)

Jx

 

Steve Mellor

Sun 24th Jan 2010 10:55

Dear Isobel
I'll write a little later, but thanks for the comment.
och aye the noo. Glad to see it made you smile
xx Steve xx

 

Thaumaturgically Charged

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Wed 20th Jan 2010 18:40

Hi Izzy, thanks for your comment on my latest ;-)) Hope all is well with you in the Wilds of Wigan ;-))
Love TC;-)) XXX

 

Janet Ramsden

Tue 19th Jan 2010 09:54

Hi Isobel, just to say thanks for your comment on my latest blog.
Your encouragement is always appreciated and the time you spend you reading and commenting on peoples work on here.

Take care,
Janet.x

 

Francine Louis

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Sun 10th Jan 2010 19:36

Je t'adore Isobel !
Merci beaucoup pour tes commentaires sur mon poème 'Bound together'...
Tu me touches toujours avec ta générosité...
Et tu me fais constamment rire - qu'est-ce qu'on va s'amuser quand je viens visiter : )

xxx


 

Janet Ramsden

Sat 9th Jan 2010 20:27

Hi Isobel, thanks for commenting on my poem about Miles Platting.
I enjoy personifying places and birds/animals too.
It's a while since i wrote one.

Janet.x

 

Rachel McGladdery

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Fri 8th Jan 2010 20:53

Oh, it's merely the cooking whisky! all gone now too, there was only one measure left, might have to sup the sherry next! then the listerine! No purple teeth for me tonight then!
Nope I did think that about the flow of it to start with....honest!
rach
xxx

 

Rachel McGladdery

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Fri 8th Jan 2010 20:49

Hullo Isobel,
I totally agree about the rhyme thing. I am messing around with styles and stuff at the mo and I'm not really comfortable with rhyming. it feels like I'm trying too hard and having to leave out stuff I want to put in but just can't tesselate. Practice at the jigsaw table for me I think. Lol!

Thanks again for the comment...also I am pretty sure the first few lines just don't work rhythm wise ...I will mess some more with it at some point.
cheers
rachel;
x

 

Ann Foxglove

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Fri 8th Jan 2010 20:03

Thanks for your kind comments on my Warm me Twice poem, it means a lot. x

 

Gus Jonsson

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Fri 8th Jan 2010 17:03

Hey up Izo,
we could do a little duo, make music together next outin, you singing an me on the horn, could be good... could be very good.
Thanx as usual for your comments, constructive and well read as always.

Gus xx

 

Augusta Darling

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Fri 8th Jan 2010 11:32



Hello Isobel,
I am very pleased with my nomination for Dec WOLOP
I have tagged as requested.

Not just pretty legs then...mmm

Augusta x

 

Deborah Jordan

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Wed 6th Jan 2010 14:29

thank you for thanking me for thanking you.. this could get silly... : )
it means, in Icelandic...the same as the title of the song in the link.deb x

 

Emma McCourty

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Wed 6th Jan 2010 11:44

Hi Isobel, glad people liked Cosmic Fairy. How do I tag the poem to Wallop? happy new year! em.

 

Deborah Jordan

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Wed 6th Jan 2010 11:38

Hi Isobel.Happy New Year. : ) Love your new pic, you look so young..and innocent.. and thank you for your kind comments on Villtur Augu.One day I'll write a happy poem and suprise you..and me .. Debz xx

 

Ann Foxglove

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Sat 2nd Jan 2010 13:51

Hi Isobel - I totally agree about the last line, but I couldn't resist the rhyme! Might change it. Happy Noo Year!

 

stefan wilde

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Sat 2nd Jan 2010 11:23

sorry Isobel,can,t be doing with your christmas cake look-get back in battledress asap.and as for those superglued lips!!! to think,i once wanted for mine to alight upon them!

 

Gus Jonsson

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Thu 31st Dec 2009 16:08

Black is black
I want my panties back

Thanks fer yer cheery banter,,, yes you are right size 18 is a bit Bridget...even 4 me.. poor Francine possibly size 4 ladies squeeze into very little these days ... so I am given to understand.

Happy New Year

Gusxx

 

Janet Ramsden

Thu 31st Dec 2009 10:43

Thanks for the comment Isobel.
Love the new pic. Makes you look all young and innocent and yet....

Happy new year.
Janet.xx

 

Rodney Wood

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Wed 30th Dec 2009 22:04

Thanks for your kind comment on Cinders. Sometimes it's good to play the bastard although for the record I've been happily married for 36 years.

 

Noetic Fret

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Wed 30th Dec 2009 21:16

Hi Isobel, thanks for commenting on my work. You're spot on as is chris co. I have left a comment on that will clarify what the army speak means. By the way, i like your work.

thanks once again.

Michael

x

 

John Aikman

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Wed 30th Dec 2009 20:23

Cor....lovely! I'll miss the ankles...but love the wry smile...and beautiful face.

: )

Jx

 

Rev Two-Sheds

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Tue 29th Dec 2009 17:37

wehey - hello matey - finally found that 'One Woman Crime Wave' text for that poem that won't upload... [dunno why - der???] anyway ~ happy new things to all

x

 

John Darwin

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Tue 29th Dec 2009 13:15

Hi Isobel, thanks for your comments on cycling home (no hands). It started as a daft jaunty piece but ended as it ended.

Happy new year to you.

John

 

Rachel McGladdery

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Mon 28th Dec 2009 21:40

Massive thanks Isobel, for taking the time to read and comment. It really is appreciated.
Rachel
x

 

Steve Regan

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Mon 28th Dec 2009 10:49

Hi Isobel, haven't looked at any intrnet things since Xmas Eve, so only just seen your latest message. I think MOreton Arms have skipped their December night and will start up again in January. I am seeig Ieaun tomorrow, so I'll make sure he gives you the correct dates.

Don't forget we launch LIVERpoetry opn mic in the 3rd room of the Everyman Bistro in Hope St, LIverpool on Thu 7 Jan, 8pm start. Be great to see you and your sisters at that - and it's a bit easer to get to than the Wirral!

 

Nefertiti

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Thu 24th Dec 2009 09:58

Thanks for the kind comments xx

 

Andy Williamson

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Sun 20th Dec 2009 12:46

Hi Isobel, Your comment on Win's "Decree Absolute" regarding '....it's all his fault' had me grinning from ear to ear. Nice dry touch. I've posted a follow up comment, too.

Dzien dobry !!

 

Rachel McGladdery

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Sun 20th Dec 2009 00:15

Thanks lotsly for the comments Isobel, they're hugely appreciated. Glad you put your stockings on (virtually) with me....now then, people seeing this comment who haven't read my poem will be Sooooo Intrigued by that comment won't they? tee hee!
Thanks again, and glad you enjoyed the poems,
Rachel
x

 

John Aikman

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Sat 19th Dec 2009 07:28

Thanks for adding your fairy dust to my last offering. A review is not a review...without your view! I always keep an eye out for those shapely ankles.

: )

Jx

 

winston plowes

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Sat 19th Dec 2009 01:10

Hi Isobe - you wrote "I think the picture is great cos that could be either sex - very tortured and hard to look at though - much like the poem is hard in some ways to listen to" That's a brilliant comment to me as it is exactly why I chose the pic... haunted drowning neither sex difficult to stomach. Thanks Win x

 

John Aikman

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Fri 18th Dec 2009 15:28

As 'Head Girl', and someone who can be relied upon to offer trenchant views, undefended by petty jealousies and perspicacious in their critique...whaddaya think of my last one?

I miss your observations...and crave your approbation.

Or you could just say it's shite....'The only thing worse than being talked about...is not being talked about'! (is that one of Wilde's?)

: )

Jx

 

winston plowes

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Fri 18th Dec 2009 00:22

P.S. Yes I had to change to photo really... didn't I. done that . Win x

 

winston plowes

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Thu 17th Dec 2009 19:46

correct. I was slow in updating... doh (Done it now). Win x

 

Rev Two-Sheds

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Thu 17th Dec 2009 00:30

Hi Isobel,
thankyou for your comments... just added the words [ ...of sorts ] to 'Panning for Vibes' for you in my blog thing...
kind regards
R2$

 

Steve Mellor

Tue 15th Dec 2009 19:48

Hi Isobel
Here, here.
I just left a comment on Cate's site. Why do you look good on the photo, and me like a dummy? OK I know the reason really.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Steve xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

 

jane wilcock

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Mon 14th Dec 2009 22:36

Many thanks for taking the time to read Camel and I, hoping I find you full of thought, enthusiasm and originality as always, jane

 

Thaumaturgically Charged

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Mon 14th Dec 2009 17:04

Thanks for the blog on the Sentinel, you can delete this after if you like ;-))
Love TC XX

 

Steve Regan

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Mon 14th Dec 2009 16:05

Hi Isobella, yes I enjoyed MCing at Wigan for the most part ... though I did sense there was some sniping in the wings, a little coldness of heart and meanness of spirit, which left me feeling saddened towards the end. Hope you are feeling better soon! You're welcome at the Bards anytime. PS someone told me Darren had put up a review but I never got to see it, as it was, as you say, taken down quite quickly.
Just why it was removed so quickly, I don't know. Though I could hazard a theory!

 

Emma McCourty

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Sun 13th Dec 2009 21:16

Hi Isobel! I just got your message about a poem I wrote called HUMAN. do you want me to enter it for a competition. wow! it brilliant that its thought so highly of. let me know asap. sorry im late getting back to you. my internet access isnt regular.Take care. em

 

Paul (Admin)

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Sat 12th Dec 2009 13:37

Thanks for the comment on my poem - glad it amused you

 

Lauretta

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Sat 12th Dec 2009 11:24

now then gorgeous Isobel, about Mr P's pocket! ..........one can spill the beans.........................
ha! loved it. x

 

Deborah Jordan

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Tue 8th Dec 2009 19:19

thank you Isobel for your kind comments about Drifting. summer will come, debz xx

 

Marianne Louise Daniels

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Mon 7th Dec 2009 14:33

sorry to be dense isobel, but how do I tag the poem as a Wolop poem?? thankyou.

 

John Darwin

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Mon 7th Dec 2009 14:32

Fizzobel, I have no idea how to tag a poem, could you enlighten me?

thanks
John

 

Steve Mellor

Thu 3rd Dec 2009 20:48

Be warned. If I stick my head above the parapet, you'll know all about it (wishful thinking)

 

Steve Mellor

Thu 3rd Dec 2009 19:30

I am teetering on the edge of several double-entendres.
I have erased most of this thanks, but I'm sure that you aren't amongst the clitorati.
I have to go now before I am tempted ...........
xxxxxxxxxx

 

Ross Kightly

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Tue 1st Dec 2009 22:11

Hi Isobel - after your kind comment on Queen Pin, I thought I'd have a look at your profile, and I was delighted by the poem - 'What's it all about'? indeed! Don't put yourself down about the singing either - the quality of the sound clip is excellent and does justice to the rhythmic verve of the poem. Terrific reading!
Cheers.

 

winston plowes

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Tue 1st Dec 2009 16:02

dear red shoes - Thanks for looking at Social Algebra Alphabet. I lost it at the begining! don't look too deeply at this one it was just a bit of fun. Win

 

Augusta Darling

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Mon 30th Nov 2009 16:54

How diligent and observant you are Isobel, of course I was utilising the stresses rather than the syllables, ( I'm fibbing)

A king’s ransom spent on my education too…

I have made amends.

Thank you.
Augusta X

 

Beulah

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Thu 26th Nov 2009 13:07

thanks Isobel. As usal there is more in the mortar than the pestle. Bet the young ones don't know that saying. Have two auditions coming up. Now if I get there then I have to get a part in one show at least. yeah.

 

Janet

Wed 25th Nov 2009 01:14

Hi Isobel,
i'm visiting wol for a few days. Got the loan of a mobile dongle but god it's so slow!!!!!!!
Just thought i'd pop in and say hi and hope you're well. :-)

Janet.x

 

Ann Foxglove

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Tue 24th Nov 2009 22:28

Thanks for your kind comments on my "Apologies to..." poem. Don't think those are hob-nailed boots you're wearin' tho!

 

sian howell

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Mon 23rd Nov 2009 21:47

many many thanks for your kind comments Isobel, I am trying out a new style and I'm glad it seems to have hit the right note....to be honest I really wasn't sure I was going to even post it so there you go X

 

Steve Mellor

Mon 23rd Nov 2009 19:32

Hi Isobel
It's ok, I met Chris last night, and I'm sure they wouldn't hit a sick man.
Now get down to some writing.

 

Gus Jonsson

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Mon 23rd Nov 2009 12:58

You are right of course Izo,

Gary Glitter .mmmm.... Whatya’ like in bunches and a gym skirt.... ooooh

Anyway, I digress, back to my gang.

The problem solved causes yet another series of problems I am well aware, however it at least enables likeminded poets a diversionary route. If the whole thing became a parallel blog then it can be terminated.

Yes, I agree with you on the WOLOP idea and that Paul, the old silver fox, is beautifully formed and has genius foozling from ever orifice.

I'm just happy that something is at least being attempted to make the site less wieldy.
In the event that no one wants to join my gang then I will probably spend my twilight years in the Far East until I'm arrested for cloning Paul Blackburn

Many Thanks
Gusxx
PS As Gang Leader I am letting Girls in...but not out

 

Steve Mellor

Fri 20th Nov 2009 18:33

Cheeky
I could only comment on the 'Date Rape' drivel because I could understand it. Normally, I can't understand the other 'drivel' posted.
xxStevexx

 

Augusta Darling

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Fri 20th Nov 2009 01:34

Hello Isobel
Thank you for your 2nd comment and support re JA remarks , to which I have replied,

You are lovely.
Augusta x

 

Augusta Darling

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Wed 18th Nov 2009 19:35

Thank you so much for your comment Isobel.... and hope you enjoyed your shower. the girl in the poem is both confused, excited , aroused and afraid... very afraid....at the end she feels miserable and used... and ashamed at her totally lack of control... or ability to ever take charge and have a sexual liason on her terms or at the very least agreed terms.

Was it rape... I don't think so... but I don't know for sure

Once again many thanks for critique it is as always welcomed warmly.

Augusta x

 

Gus Jonsson

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Thu 12th Nov 2009 18:23

Thanks amany Izo your kind and thought through comments as welcome as ever re Mrs Pragnell's Shop

Thank you
Gus xx

 

Cayn

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Thu 12th Nov 2009 13:02

Hi,
Ta for the comment on my new poem. I think you'll find a lot of the stuff in the poem is fictional and is not targetted at anyone in particular. Just thought I'd clear that up.

 

John Darwin

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Wed 11th Nov 2009 07:26

Hello Iso :-) No it wasn't me, it was Orhan Veli Kanık, a far better poet than me, and nearly everyone else. Of course, I am better looking, naturally.

 

Francine Louis

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Wed 11th Nov 2009 02:45

Merci toi pour tes commentaires sur mon poème 'Taken'...
Tu me fais toujours rire!

Euh... MOI un singe?! ; )

Moi xxx

 

winston plowes

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Tue 10th Nov 2009 18:47

Hi there, Thankyou so much for your comments on my latest blog entry, more detailed comments left on blog page. Winston

 

winston plowes

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Tue 10th Nov 2009 18:36

Hi Isobel. I am now part of the WOL web team. My role is that of New Members Organiser. Its great that you take time to meet and greet new members already, just carrying on doing that please if you can and this will help a great deal Winston

 

Pete Crompton

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Mon 9th Nov 2009 11:14

Hi Isobel, thanks for your comments and encouragement, you always put a lot of effort into the site blogs for us all! thanks x

 

Steve Mellor

Thu 5th Nov 2009 21:36

Dear Muse
Glad you enjoyed it.
It takes one to know one (that's a complement by the way - just in case)

 

Tommy Carroll

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Thu 5th Nov 2009 20:29

the women were congested but all had new batteries!

 

Augusta Darling

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Thu 5th Nov 2009 17:21

The double image of love lust and love is a difficulty we all come up agains.

Is pain pleaure or is pleasure pain.??

Thanks again so very much for reading my poem.

Augusta x

 

Jonboy Walton

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Wed 4th Nov 2009 10:12

Hi Isobel,Just read 'A Poem Not For Guy'.Enjoyed the message behind this about seizing the moment,Well done!

 

Alvin Guinessberg

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Wed 4th Nov 2009 06:04

Try copy and paste the link into address bar. It should take you to a youtube clip of Lawrence Ferlinghetti reading "The World is a Beautiful Place" He has a more rambling approach to poetry. He is 90 this year and has certainly loved life.

 

Alain English

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Tue 3rd Nov 2009 16:25

Cheers for your remarks, Isobel. Much obliged. I have been off the site for a while now but am happy to be back. I like the 'Update Gigs' feature that is now up. I will be posting some more poetry over the next few weeks on different themes, so look out for that.

See you soon,

Alain

 

Augusta Darling

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Tue 3rd Nov 2009 11:26



Good Morning Isobel

It's so difficult at times to write of 'Love' in a joyous way... usually the venom of love has its way with my pen and restless nights...

Thank you again for such an indepth critique of my poem.

augusta x

 

jane wilcock

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Tue 3rd Nov 2009 07:36

Hi, Isobel, thanks for commenting on Perfect, and Jenny!! However, this poem is a romance, not about motherhood. Love, with an image of an eclipse of the sun as I know of nothing else which would eclipse it. I love your site as you know and the red shoes. best Janexx

 

winston plowes

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Fri 30th Oct 2009 09:49

Hi Isobel,
Thanks for reading.Comments left on Ronaldo blog. Win

 

Steve Regan

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Wed 28th Oct 2009 16:12

ISOBEL, I wish I'd scooped up the bra and taken it back home to New Brighton with me. Then I'd be able to produce it for performance purposes, smears and all. When are you coming back to perform at the BARDS, me dear?

 

David Franks

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Wed 28th Oct 2009 13:23

My only worry is, Isobel, they could well be adding to global warming - from under-the-collar!

 

Gus Jonsson

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Wed 28th Oct 2009 11:52

incongruous?... Well Shirley is Australian... and it sort of sounds right because of the closeness of truth... but was it her only name??...just read the Auntie Norma item between the lines ...clue.?

Thank you so much for reading.as always
Gusxx

 

John Darwin

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Wed 28th Oct 2009 11:20

something else rhymes with pretty.

I am now ashamed :-O

sorry

 

David Franks

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Wed 28th Oct 2009 10:44

What news -
New shoes!

;-)>

 

Steve Mellor

Tue 27th Oct 2009 17:50

Stunning stuff Cilla

 

Augusta Darling

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Mon 26th Oct 2009 22:51

Oh Isobel
How kind youare moreover how beautiful your legs are...are they yours?... and what adorable shoes...
Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem..

Augusta x

 

ian leslie

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Mon 26th Oct 2009 20:30

Thanks for the comment. We all really enjoyed your set at The Tudor.

 

nicky burrows

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Mon 26th Oct 2009 10:48

love the legs Isobel :-) Very chic pic x

 

Steve Smith

Mon 26th Oct 2009 09:57

Thanks for your comment, Isobel -yes, the point is the bogey man is not in another country, not a 'foreigner' and to pretend it is is a hoax in order to dominate their country while people here fear for their own children on their own streets.
Steve Smith

 

Steve Mellor

Sat 24th Oct 2009 08:38

Moi also on the vanilla front.
I shall be partaking of the experience later today

 

Janet

Fri 23rd Oct 2009 16:13

Hi Isobel,
just want to say thanks for your support and comments on my poetry. I'm going to be an absent friend on wol too for a short while so i wish you well with your own work and will most likely see you at an event.

Janet.x

 

Tommy Carroll

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Fri 23rd Oct 2009 09:15

why sad?

 

nicky burrows

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Thu 22nd Oct 2009 22:04

Sign of a good actress Isobel? lol x

 

BRASS

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Thu 22nd Oct 2009 12:51

I appreciate your comments on my poem, I am very happy. Thank you, Aziza.

 

nicky burrows

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Mon 19th Oct 2009 14:36

Irony? Me? lol.

the darn thing just wrote itself in between the washing, drying and ironing so thought it deserved a bit of an airing.

feel very cathartic now that I put it to good use. what do you say? x

 

Francine Louis

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Sun 18th Oct 2009 13:59

Thank you Isobel as always for taking the time to read and comment.
I tweaked it a bit...
Yes, it's been a while... so busy trying to get caught up... I won't be until it's over though.

Moi x

 

Paul (Admin)

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Sat 17th Oct 2009 10:06

Hi Isobel,
Dates on Blogs? As far as I know or can remember nothing has changed.

 

Jeff Dawson

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Sat 17th Oct 2009 10:00

Hi Isobel, thanx for your comment on Cemetery Gates, yes you're right it is about the dilemna of moving on in life which people struggle with.

I dare say your friend (you can decide if they should read it :-) )and lots of others would identify with it. Its no-one I know, just something I observed.

The only bits that refer to me are the lines about lingering with the dead and skeletons in real life. I'm not so bad with death, its other things I struggle with!

Anyway, glad you like it, your comments and support appreciated as always see ya soon Jeff X

 

winston plowes

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Mon 12th Oct 2009 09:26

Hi Isobel, Thanks for the comments on CAFCASS Survivor. Good observation. Thanks. Win

 

Neil West

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Sun 11th Oct 2009 20:11

Hi Isobel. Sorry I've not been paying attention but I wholeheartedly agree with the choice of Anthony's 'Beyond the Equinox' for notable poem of the month, if I hadn't been burying my head in the sand lately I'd have voted for it too - good choice. By and by, thank you for your comments on An Anti-Love Poem, I'd intended it to come over as positive and affirming but perhaps I need to suffer a little more yet. I know, I'll post an opinion about next month's POTM:)

 

winston plowes

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Sun 11th Oct 2009 09:04

Hi Isobel, thanks for commenting on CAFCASS survivor.made a couple of tweeks on the blogs page. Win

 

nicky burrows

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Fri 9th Oct 2009 15:15

Thanks Isobel, gobbledegoookeeoohgooksomemoregoodecrap.
nkidsssdeermmmpackitineeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrmdehobbllledegookgookdeermdeeebedtime

You know what I mean.

nicky x

 

andy n

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Mon 5th Oct 2009 23:21

hi isobel;

good points over P.O.M. - I agree with you.. I must admit I haven't any of them in months and months - it seems to have gone off in a direction I don't like anyhow to the sort off poetry I don't read or particularly enjoy anyhow. Hope you are good! x

 

John Coopey

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Mon 5th Oct 2009 22:44

Hello Isabel
Many thanks for you comments on my submissions - I'm really new to this and feel like a fish out of water. Everybody seems to do such "weighty" stuff and mine's dead simple.
Anyway I checked out yours and I really like them both, especially "What's it all about?"
I look forward to more.
John Coopey

 

Steve Mellor

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 19:37

Hi Isobel
I doubt you've seen it, but Ernesto has left a little message on my Profile page, and Neil West's, saying that we'll be surprised at next month's POTM
For some reason the kack seems to have been spread in our direction. How did that come about?
A gentle soul like moi
Speak soon
Steve M.

 

Steve Mellor

Fri 2nd Oct 2009 21:56

Hi Isobel
My pleasure.
Re Ernesto:-
Did you ever consider going into the diplomatic service as a child?
As ever ;-))))))))))))))))))))))))
Steve M.

 

Anthony Emmerson

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Fri 2nd Oct 2009 15:50

Just seen your latest on the POTM thread. You can do better than that - tell him where to stick it! :-)

 

nicky burrows

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Fri 2nd Oct 2009 14:58

Hi Isobel, thanks for the comments on 'Pearl Stitch'. Had a great time reading them and took a long time to answer them. Am all worded out now. love your take on it.

Take care

Nicky x

 

Steve Mellor

Thu 1st Oct 2009 12:38

Hi Isobel
I'm all wrung out, but that's another story.
Steve M.
;-)))

 

Steve Mellor

Wed 30th Sep 2009 15:07

Isobel
My humble apologies, I was only joshing you.

Steve M.
;-))))

 

Steve Mellor

Wed 30th Sep 2009 14:54

Hi Isobel
'a deluge of light-weight poems' !!!???
I thought you were the one to pour oil on troubled waters LOL
x Steve M. x

 

Tommy Carroll

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Tue 29th Sep 2009 20:59

haha!....too shay!

 

Gus Jonsson

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Tue 29th Sep 2009 17:52

An' Yoo Hoo to you too!

GusXX

 

winston plowes

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Sun 27th Sep 2009 20:16

Hi Isobel, Glad you liked "On meeting a poet", and found you could make your own interpretation and be happy with that. Thx for commenting. see you soon. win x.

 

Gus Jonsson

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Sun 27th Sep 2009 12:19

Hi Izo....U R correct....a great deal of sadness in the last line.. very intuitive..

Many Thanks
Gusxx

 

Steve Mellor

Sun 27th Sep 2009 11:26

Hi Janet
Are you talking about me or the poem?
x Steve M. x

 

nicky burrows

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Sat 26th Sep 2009 02:13

Must have been posting a comment on your profile while you were posting the comment on mine.

I am thinking the same thing. Thanks Isobel. I may do it as a personal thingmybob out of pure curiosity, can't even come up with a title for it! Think maybe it will always be ' the poem that never mean't to be a poem' .x

 

nicky burrows

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Sat 26th Sep 2009 02:03

Hi Isobel, thank you for your comment on the piece, I am quite taken aback at the response.

Would like to know what you think about Darren's suggestion that I change it to the third person? do you think that it would reduce the alienation aspect that a reader may feel or would it at the other end of the spetrum, lose it's rawness in the substitution of she for I. I am struggling with this one.x






 

Isobel

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Fri 25th Sep 2009 14:36

Hi Chris - not really sure how to get in touch with you since you don't have a profile yet. You left a comment on my profile. I am touched that you bothered to read my poetry - particularly after my crass comment. To read past poems you need to go to the bottom right hand corner of the current blog. The previous poem will be highlighted in blue. If you click on it it will take you back and you can go right back through a poets work that way. I'm glad you liked the one you read - that one meant quite a bit to me.
Most poets on this site have had some trauma in their lives, though perhaps not on the same scale as yourself. Emotional turmoil is often what brings us to poetry in the first place. We are therefore, on the whole, very understanding and supportive of others. This site, in some ways, mirrors life. You will find the good, the bad, the ugly and the mischevious....but above all, a home for everyone. I hope you join and enjoy it.
Isobel x (will delete this once I think you might have read it)

 

Anthony Emmerson

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Fri 25th Sep 2009 14:25

Hi Isobel,
Hope all is well with you. Thanks for your comments on "Beyond the Equinox." I have to confess that it's not a new one - retitled and slightly reworked. I just thought I ought to post "something." Got a couple on the backburner at the moment - would you mind if I asked you to take a look at one of them? I know the nature stuff isn't your bag, but this one may be. How is your muse? I notice you haven't posted for a while too.
Regards,
A.E. X

 

nicky burrows

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Thu 24th Sep 2009 20:50

Isobel, I shall let you into a little secret. As my two year old son would say 'I luff you'. lol - obviously not in a romantic sense - but in a ' someother sense' I cannot quite find the correct word. Really enjoy the discussion, although, as I said, I fear I may have created a monster. I suppose that is the way discussion threads go - and I do not like the elitist take on the thread - however, thats by the by. I mean't to leave a comment for you earlier on your profile, (but dinnertime took over and I am struggling with a certain project I have going) to say 'this comment is not personally aimed at you' regarding the reference on the engaging with the website thread, before you took up your guns and started aiming at me again, lol, but you beat me to it. No 'handbags at dawn' tonight, to quote Russell I think, was it? I would like to discuss something with you, do you mind if I contact you direct by email? Please let me know either on profile or by email.

Nicky x

 

steve black

Thu 24th Sep 2009 20:27

How is the humorous prose going? I see you have a habit of upsetting the punters, you are right though about talent on this site, in pure/harsh publishing terms only a handful would be considered good enough.

 

Janet

Thu 24th Sep 2009 11:42

Hi Isobel, thanks for your comment on my poem ''A gentile river.'
To be honest i wasn't sure what it was about myself. It was one of those which came to me while relaxing with no actual intention to write anything. It was the day after it was written i looked at it again and i realized it has several things running through it. There might well be something of myself in there but if so it came from within and not consciously.
When i first read it back to myself i doubted i should even post it. Now i'm glad i did. The various comments helped me to see something else in my own work. I think it was just one of those poems which are meant to be shared for the sheer pleasure of the imagery.

Janet.x

 

Jessie Alpal

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Wed 23rd Sep 2009 20:45

Hi Isobel, thank you for all your comments on my poems, you made me realise i might need to try my hand at writing a happy poem! I really like your poem 'Words'

Jessie x

 

Neil West

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Mon 21st Sep 2009 21:37

I don't know, I find I'm imagining sandwich based snacks most of the time, I think bacon for supper, yum ;)

 

Neil West

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Sun 20th Sep 2009 14:51

Hi Isobel, thank you for your kind words, in fact the story is true and happened to a friend of mine, I feel that these extraordinary things that happen to ordinary people deserve to be recorded and expressed somehow so it can become a shared experience - and as it happens he grew up to be a fairly well adjusted music teacher!

 

Steve Mellor

Fri 18th Sep 2009 19:20

Hi Innocent
You have to remember that I was born in Yorkshire, where the pace of life is a little slower than on your side of the hill.
We obviously do things slightly different.
It wasn't totally auto-biographical. You'll have to guess which bits are which.
Steve M. :-)))

 

nicky burrows

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Wed 16th Sep 2009 14:21

The red wine is purely for medicinal and cosmetic purposes, to control the onset of insanity and reduce the speed of aging, and it gently calms the nervous system the more glasses you consume - on a totally socially acceptable level of course. haha.

The only pic of me that I like, probably because its out of focus.

Love that poem, empathise with it 100%.

 

Steve Mellor

Wed 16th Sep 2009 13:32

Hi Isobel
Were I to 'rant' Life-Line, I think I would have to add in an extra 2 lines after Superannuation:-
Oration
Defecation

It was bad enough just reading one of poems at Hebden! I don't even know how to 'rant' or even just rant.
Your comments are gratefully accepted however.
Steve M.

 

nicky burrows

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Wed 16th Sep 2009 00:40

Hi Isobel, thanks for your comments on Catharsis, funny you gave me the inspiration for it during a discussion. So, if my catharsis ever ends up on someones dusty shelf, hey, you'll be gathering dust with me too. lol.x

 

Deborah R Jordan

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Mon 14th Sep 2009 12:28

Hi Isobel,

thank you for your kind comments on my poem Shoormal. It's strange you found loss in there also, I hadn't intended it so much but I think it came through from another place. It was more about a passing moment, finding myself in one place within another, kind of..
thank you : )) Deb xx

 

Cat Parsons

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Sat 12th Sep 2009 21:20

Hi Isobel - It's a little belated but thanks so much for your comments on 'that cough' it's great to see how differently it's been interpreted and the impact it has.
Thanks
Cat x

 

Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

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Fri 11th Sep 2009 11:11

Ill get a vote in soon...

 

Steve Smith

Thu 10th Sep 2009 13:28

Thanks for the comment Isobel. I appreciate it.
Steve Smith

 

Cate Greenlees

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Thu 10th Sep 2009 09:36

Hi Isobel, just catching up on my comments. Thanks for yours on For whom The Wheel Turns.
Cate xx

 

Georgina Knowles

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Wed 9th Sep 2009 12:37

hiya Isobel, cheers for all your lovely comments on my poems, it's appreciated...i write to record my memories on feelings and it's good to dispense such feelings too/ theraputic?...plus i'm studying textiles, so writing has always been an interest of mine and another creative outlet. the WOLOP award sounds like a nice idea definintely xx

 

Janet

Wed 9th Sep 2009 11:19

Hi Isobel, thanks for your comment on haiku's and other poems of mine too.
Your straight-forward and honest approach is both refreshing and joyful, and that goes for your comments on others work too.

Janet.x

 

Gus Jonsson

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Mon 7th Sep 2009 19:27

Whatya mean Izo?... a sorta period piece?

Gusx

 

Steve Mellor

Sun 6th Sep 2009 11:47

Hi Isobel
Now there's a thought!!!
If I wrote an arse poem, I could probably use the same photo.
x Steve x

 

Janet

Sat 5th Sep 2009 10:50

Well that was a bit less work on the white finger of scrolling. :-)
Sad you say? I'm sad too Isobel, i print mine
before deleting them too.

Thanks for comment on Kinsella, i don't like sad endings either. I commented further in the comment box under the poem.
Janet.x

 

Isobel

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Fri 4th Sep 2009 23:34

Have deleted my comments cos my profile was getting a little long. I have saved them all somewhere though cos I'm sad like that - will visit them one day when I'm feeling lonely. I saved Moxy because she is an absent friend. x

 

moxy casimirs Keg of Curiosity

Wed 6th May 2009 11:20

Absolute gleaming, multi-faceted gem of a poem -- will reply in verse. Draining peas sounded vampiric.... You poetry molecular gastronome and virtuoso dynamo, you!

 

moxy casimirs Keg of Curiosity

Tue 5th May 2009 17:09

Oh, poor Song of Sixpence! Did it die from an inflation related malaise? Has it been taken into custody by Mr Darling? I am very sorry that there is now an hiatus where there was once something beguiling and valuable.

 

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