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Nefertiti

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Last blog entry: Thu, 24 Dec 2009 10:01:05 am

Profile updated: Tue, 30 Mar 2010 07:55:11 pm

 

Biography

Born and raised in Moss Side, Manchester in a Carribbean household. my only memories of my childhood are The X-Men, Jam Butties, Thundercats and some girl who tried to pull my knickers down when i was 6.

So to escape it all i'd go into my leaf-green little world of writing stories and poetry. The passion for it never really left me, or I never really left it?

I have performed in Manchester at the Contact Theatre in the production, Crow of Murders (February 2008), at the Freed Up Event at The Greenroom and at the Taurus Bar Canal St (March 2008) .

My collection of poetry reminds me of a car-boot sale... I don't know why? It just does.

Samples

Fuck The B.N.P.

I am British
yeah Me
though probably
and strongly disagreed
by the BNP.

Cause when they look at me
and see
the tightly curled hair
the thickly formed lips
the chocholate coloured skin that I am in.

They will say...
"She's not British".

But! I talk with an accent
unlike some others
I say shit like,
"Ya wat" and "Safe"
just like mi sisters and brothers.

But when I say i'm British some dickheads disagree
and say...
"Nar Love, your just 5.2 percent of the ethnic minority".

It's not that I am not proud of my beautiful Carribbean roots
I mean I love my people
my culture
the music and the fruits...
But I Am British!
I support British teams,
I mean as a teen standing on the pitch at Ainfield was one of my dreams.
Though i'm not a fan of your queen.
I'm not a Brit to that extreme
I'm not keen on the whole regime and
I don't get your love for tea...
But I Am British!

I was taught in three British schools
I abide by British rules
I grew up loving soul and reggae
but
I think Oasis and Coldplay are cool.

I was there
through Thatcher, Major and Blair
Throughout the IRA bomb scares
Felt my house shake when they hit town and brought Manchester down!

But yet!
They force me to tick that box
Which I think's a disgrace!
What have my office typing skills got to do with my fucking race?

But isn't it obvious?
Look at my face.
But what you get is what you see.

So FUCK the B.N.P.
Cause i'm British,
yeah me.





Mr Wood

Me and Mr Wood,
Got a good thing going on!
He's my new companion,
Who never does me wrong.

Mr Wood lives with me,
We've been together just six weeks.
He sleeps on the panties in my drawer,
and plays between my sheets.

Mr Wood and Me,
Got a great thing yes we do!
As long as his battery's charged
Laying on my back is all I do.

Mr Wood's always long and ready
He's so durable and strong.
He never, ever leaves cum stains
Mr Wood's forever, he's lifelong!





I Have Moved On

I gave up precious days
loving you. Precious hours making love to you.
Yeah even precious saliva wasted on... Just wastesd.
Now I cant believe your sitting there,
not laying here,
not in my arms
making me feel. Like you said you would.
The definition of bullshit. Is you,
you cant spell truth,
honesty blinds you,
never thought you would. You're no good.
It's been another year of me holding onto
lies, memories, lies lies, memories lies.
But a new year is here. Im seeing through clear eyes.
My own.
My world, my year.
There are times. When your lies
perice through me,
right in deep. keep me from sleep,
But what the hell!
I belive shit always happens for a reason
even if it's to me,
I see it as a story to tell. Or maybe a poem to write.
But then I look at your life and feel,
a little pitty
you silly,
confused,
down and out
man. Dammn.
You gave me up on the basis of
what?
You're troubled,
messed up,
I used to give a fuck!
I hope she's worth it. But from what you say she's not.
But not my problem.
Look what I got!
Who's missing out?
Who's missing?
Me?
No! I've moved on
you're still where you used to be.

Life can be funny.



We Were In Love

I loved him for his consistently, different & magnificent ways
That thing we had there was NOT a phase (well not at the time)
At the time we WERE in love...xxx
I loved him with A passion
Like Versace loves fashion
Nothing!
No One!
Could get inbetween
Nobody
except his girlfriend I mean.

© Copyright 2009 Ms J.A. Lewis





All poems are copyright of the originating author. Permission must be obtained before using or performing others' poems.

Last blog entry

That’s just emotion

Posted on Thursday 24th December 2009 10:01 am

 

That’s just emotion

 

Tears fall against the itchy redness of my face. A customary reaction, expression of my uncontrollable emotion. The death of me? He probably will be, cause for us both to exist in this is close to nil. Like having double Spider men, only one wins. 

So once again, the contents of my torso bounce on trampolines and force me to present my breakfast for the second time, and my wrists bleed but there are no cuts. I just despise him that much.

 

My insides scream at the slightest thought and I go into this dream-like state of hate, and I pray that it is a dream and like the fairytale I’ll awake. The worst part is, it’s beyond my control and all in his and I allowed it to be, but not because I was weak or a result of defeat, but I allowed it to be! Paper bags and my inhaler have no lasting effect, panic attacks and itchy skin, flaking at my scalp and I scratch and scratch in an attempt to make it go away but that just leads to sores and sores lead to more pain and then that leads to hate again and I’m back where I started, lemon like, bitter!

 

I constantly turn my other cheek but then punch out at his face. I ignore his poison for a month and then find myself spitting venom back. I can’t survive on the hope of Karma, it’s not enough and I’m certain as algebra is that one of us will cancel out the other.

Sooner or later.

 

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Dogstails

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Wed 24th Mar 2010 20:16

Hey,
Mr Wood made me chuckle, thought you was writing about a cat at first..

 

Isobel

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Mon 7th Dec 2009 22:32

Rubbish Fassbinder - Coldplay are brilliant - they have just reached the stage where their success makes them unpopular. The Brits so love to knock down all that is successful. Went to one of their concerts recently and was bowled over by just how musically talented Chris Martin is - and the music is so tuneful.
Have already commented on your BNP poem Nefertiti - but why oh why does everyone ignore the rest? Let's big it up for Mr Wood - as a single girl, I think can see just where you are coming from...

 

Fassbinder

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Mon 7th Dec 2009 21:55

Good evening Nefertiti

I enjoyed the poem about the BNP. You convey the suffocating frustration that those at the brunt of the far right face in Britain today really well.

bit disapppointed that you include Oasis and Coldplay in your list of musical likes but only in such a poem as this - to make a point - can it be excused I spose!

Clever reworking of Billy Paul's Me & Mrs Jones too!


Fassbinder

 

maipenrai

Wed 19th Aug 2009 09:11

good on yer mate for fuck the bnp.
Bernie

 

Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Thu 6th Aug 2009 15:04

Hi Nefertiti :) Thanks for your comments upon 'School Rules' - I probably was seen as a little devilish in Grammar school since I questioned pretty much everything, especially in R.E. lessons, ;)

Best wishes

 

Dave Dunn aka Rhumour

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Sat 1st Aug 2009 23:09

Nefertiti - that's a cracking crack at BNP - pity it couldnt stand for British National Poet - we've no need for the nauseating hypoctites that spout their racist politics.

Best wishes

 

alex iamb

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Thu 7th Aug 2008 22:46

Absolutely love Fuck The BNP! Wicked matey, keep it up.
a
x

 

sarah clark

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Thu 10th Jul 2008 02:15

lovin ur poetry
great to see a fellow manc here lol

keep up the gud word girl
ur poetry is wicked!

 

Chuka Nnanna Okeke

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Fri 4th Jul 2008 11:13

Congratulations! You really making waves all around the planet. Make more steps ,and I think this is your best bet.

 

Mia Darlone

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Sat 17th May 2008 08:40

Alright! I am disappointed you've not included your shortened version of BNP you did in the rehearsals(!). War Wounds is brilliant.
I'm thinking we should have a write-in and get Not the Real Mel n Kim a profile. Speak to you soon x

 

Philip Golding

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Tue 8th Apr 2008 15:25

your poetry is inspirational and even better to hear performed
Your 'fuck the BNP' right on!

 

Graham Eccles

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Mon 7th Apr 2008 08:50

i hope you are performing these on the manchester circuit.
Brilliant.

 

Tai Mahmud

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Sat 29th Mar 2008 21:24

YH YH!!LOL!! I love your opening poem 'Fuck The BNP' You've hooked me straight up!!

 

Steve OConnor

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Wed 26th Mar 2008 21:25

Howdo you

GOOD! Post your stuff here an' all!

No more Myspace privileges at work. (That's probably a good thing!)

Fuck the B.N.P. is a cracker. More please.

 

Zuzanna Musial

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Sun 23rd Mar 2008 02:23

Hi, Nefertiti

Welcome to WOL. - It is a pleasure meeting you.
I have taken the opportunity to read your poems.

All your poems are nicely written. Loved the BNP...You are certainly not afraid to speak your mind. Good for you. I believe that we all belong to this Earth it does not matter where we are from. It is time to stop the discrimination based on race and colour of the skin.


Happy Easter!
Zuzanna

 

Cayn

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Wed 19th Mar 2008 18:56

Hello! Welcome to WOL, like your poems ecpcially the Bnp one, straight forward and to the point, even the Nazi boneheads should be able to understand that one, though I wouldn't hold my breath!

 

steven lalley

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Wed 19th Mar 2008 16:01

lucky mr wood.

 

Sophie McKeand

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Tue 18th Mar 2008 17:02

oh yes and definitely fuck the BNP!!
tell it like it is :-)

 

Sophie McKeand

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Tue 18th Mar 2008 17:01

Hi there!

This is a great poem that celebrates our multicultural society - I am white and welsh and proud of my cultural heritage too... welcome to the site, I look forward to reading more of your work...

 

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