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Neil West

Email: neil.west@ymail.com

Homepage: neilwest.blogspot.com

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Last blog entry: Thu, 5 Nov 2009 05:55:49 pm

Profile updated: Thu, 29 Oct 2009 03:38:44 pm

 

Biography

Hi, thank you for your interest in my work. I have always enjoyed being creative simply for my own pleasure, writing short stories, poems, plays, a little drawing, even a stab at a novel, but have had about 10 years off to raise four lovely children who have now decided that my period of servitude is at an end and I may once again persue my own interests. It may interest you to know that I am a teacher and am based about half way between Bolton and Wigan and can therefore claim dual citizenship. I am quite resilient and invite honest criticism of my work as I just show it to my Mum if I need someone to say it's lovely:)

I have a modest presence at neilwest.blogspot.com if you would like to share more of my work.

Samples

Dignum Laude Virum Musa Vetat Mori*

The first rays of light crept hopefully about
Casting their prying fingers in and out
Of long night time shadows, forcing them
To slink like nocturnal beasts revealed
Into remote corners and crevices unseen
As day followed night the light fell full length
Upon a dusty window pane shut tight
Made grimy by neglect and marching time
It struggled and yet finally did pass through
To cut the dusty gloom inside a house
No better than its neighbours and no worse
The cheerful light laid bare with no remorse
The shabby living room of this small house
A patterned woollen carpet, faded in the sun
The patchy threads had been much walked upon
And battered furniture antique in style
Old newspapers left yellowing in a pile
Upon the mantelpiece a clock had ceased
To count the passing hours long ago
An ashtray was the only souvenir
To indicate this house was still a home
It lay full gorged upon the butts and ash
Explaining why the peeling walls were stained
And in that sealed room the air was stale
A fine layer of dust had settled gently upon
The back of an old armchair, its back to the door
Still looming in the fast receding shadows
A gnarled hand grips each arm tightly
Wrinkled brown skin, chipped black nails
Paler than the palest ivory
The whites of eyes that can no longer see
Staring from his face quite peacefully
A face much lined with wrinkled age and care
Though crowned with white his head is mostly bare
In life he had been poor and lived alone
In the dignity of death this was undone
And so we must retire from this poignant scene
Back out onto the streets from whence we came
And up above those rooftops all the same
To watch the bloated sunset's fading rays.
* The man worthy of praise the Muse forbids to die. Horace


The Mask of Unity

The Mask of Anarchy rides out once more
And leads his troops to clear the killing floor
His crocodile tears are shed from glassy screens
And fall like neon gemstones, subtly guided
To dash out the brains of fleeing refugees
'We are the agents of peace!' twisted words are cried
'This action will not cease!' bombs fall from the sky
In this slaughter of the innocents who must die
In order that a greater evil be destroyed?

A lapdog's face twists grins into concern
His earnest words and waving hands express
Distaste at the way this war has turned
Yet gnaws upon the bones that have been burned
By Anarchy's stealth forces and then tossed
Down from that higher table to his pet
As payment earned for loyalty unquestioned
But this war cannot offer glory, blood or gold
Just mass graves, empty cities, barren landscapes

Silent

Cold

All poems are copyright of the originating author. Permission must be obtained before using or performing others' poems.

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Never Strikes Twice

Posted on Thursday 5th November 2009 5:55 pm

While making a cup of tea

And looking at the kettle

I was led to dwell on the magic of electricity

Factory farmed lightning

Caged in a flex

And remembered the advice

My mother always gave

To never stand under a tree

During a thunderstorm

 

With hindsight

I tend to think

She could have offered some advice

That would have been more useful

On a day to day basis

 

On the other hand

I’ve never been struck by lightning

 

Not even once

 

So perhaps

My mother was right

 

Now that’s a shocker

 

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Ron Scowcroft

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Tue 10th Nov 2009 18:46

Hi Neil - Thanks for the comments on 'Age Concern'. I have the suit in my wardrobe but I'll keep the location of the charity shop a secret!

 

Steve Mellor

Thu 5th Nov 2009 18:05

Hi Neil
Thanks for the comment on The Sun Shone. I was just about to email you about your latest offering, when your comment popped up.
When was your mother ever wrong? A real nice read.

 

Nichola Burrows

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Mon 2nd Nov 2009 15:57

Hi Neil, glad you like that one. Having a re-vamp on profile.x

 

Jeff Dawson

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Sat 31st Oct 2009 11:25

Hi Neil, thanks for your comments on Cemetery Gates, the reference to the dead lying in line is more a reflection of her not being able to move in in that even they aren't bothered that she goes back mourning day after day, all a bit morbid I know! cheers Jeff

 

Steve Mellor

Thu 29th Oct 2009 14:29

Hi Neil
I'm keeping my powder dry this month (so to speak).
I got all giddy last month, and where did it get me?
I'd paid for at least 4 votes.
I've still got my speech ready though.

 

Chris Co

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Fri 16th Oct 2009 12:51

Hi Neil,

Yea enjoyed the poem, it was a nice transition in style and it felt very natural and not at all forced.

I'd like to hear more in this style if the words come because it feels right.

It was indeed my voice you heard on that recording, I have a great voice for silent movies and a face for radio :)

The former rather than the latter makes reading poetry a little fraught to say the least.

I could probably make the greatest acts in Shakespearian English sound like the poorer parts of a Willy Russell play.

Oh well you have to laugh.

 

Steve Mellor

Thu 15th Oct 2009 20:35

Neil
Perhaps a bodice-ripper next.
I just had the feeling this a.m. that there can only be so many ways that we can describe a love lost. So!
Poets must suffer!!
Thanks for the ;-)

 

nicky burrows

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Thu 15th Oct 2009 19:48

Thank you for sharing 'Lies' with me Neil. A very true and thoughtprovoking poem. Funny how we try automatically to protect our young ones with lies in one form or another, when what we should be doing is preparing them for their solo entrance into the world. The difficulty is finding the balance.

Nicky x

 

nicky burrows

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Thu 15th Oct 2009 18:41

Haha. Take it your house is the same as mine then!!! Chaotic, except between the hours of 9pm and early hours of the morning?! Nice to hear from you Neil.

Nicky x

ps. what do you think of my arty-farty pic?lol:-)

 

Isobel

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Mon 12th Oct 2009 13:08

Tee hee. Yes - that's one way of suffering big time...

 

Ernesto Sarezale

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 20:13

No hard feelings, of course. It was not comments like yours that made me want to leave. I just thought your comment was an unfair one (as opposed to viciously nasty, which was the case with some of the other posts...).

I don't have children but I am middle-aged too. ;-)

xE.

 

Ernesto Sarezale

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 19:59

Perhaps it's because Steve wrote on Neil's profile:

"Hi Neil
Just think, it will be Ernesto who chooses the next POTM.
I dread to imagine
Steve M."

 

Steve Mellor

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 19:34

Hi Neil
Are you ready to see November's POTM?
Can you contain yourself?
How come you and I get the stick, after all the vitriol chucked by everyone else?
Steve M.

 

Ernesto Sarezale

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 19:30

Neil West and Steve Mellor will be very surprised with November's POTM, as chosen by Ernesto.

 

Ernesto Sarezale

Sat 3rd Oct 2009 19:26

No ones's obliged to like what they don't like but an attempt at respectful commentary would be desirable, in my opinion.

You equated my piece to a poem full of fucks or to cheap 'shock value' for the sake of it. Did you read the pooem carefully? Do you really think that was a fair characterisation of the piece? If so, why? None of this appeared in your commentaries.

Regards,
_ernesto

 

Steve Mellor

Thu 1st Oct 2009 20:06

Hi Neil
Just think, it will be Ernesto who chooses the next POTM.
I dread to imagine
Steve M.

 

Chris Co

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Wed 30th Sep 2009 16:48

Hi Neil,

You might want to take a look at the last part of Home Front...comments left.

 

nicky burrows

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Mon 28th Sep 2009 23:07

Hi neil, thanks for hanging around to comment on that piece.

I am trying to catch up on everything, but there is so much that I keep getting sidetracked.

Hope you are well.

 

Antonionioni

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Sun 27th Sep 2009 21:22

Hi Neil, thanks for the comments. Yeah, that's ok - I hate criticising people's stuff really - shouldn't do it, I know!! I enjoyed your piece tho as I hope I made evident! Keep it up!!

 

Cate Greenlees

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Sun 27th Sep 2009 16:27

Greetings Neil, thanks for the comment on Eer Olives Pumps, I love humerous poetry, its much underated! Yes I suppose technology has moved on somewhat, but in my area "parent power" seems to have come full circle, and we had to have locks put on the classroom outside doors to stop parents coming in and berating us!!
Cate xx

 

winston plowes

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Sat 26th Sep 2009 11:37

Hi Neil. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on "On meeting a Poet". Win

 

Janet

Sat 26th Sep 2009 10:13

Ah but my pic was taken at the Manchester green room theatre slam event earlier this year. What's your excuse for the shades?

I see you live between Bolton and Wigan. Westhoughton maybe? I know someone by the name of West in that area. (Jimmy).

Janet.x

 

Janet

Fri 25th Sep 2009 10:59

Ha! now you got five pics of me.

 

Francine Louis

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Fri 25th Sep 2009 04:10

Thank you Neil for your lovely comments on my poetry...
I have never performed any of my poems before...
Hope to at some point... soon... perhaps ; )

 

Janet

Thu 24th Sep 2009 21:11

Your pic, your choice. You're as bad as me. I don't have many of myself either. Been teaching myself to upload images from my phone but i will offer one which someone on here took of me at a gig. The one i would have liked to put on there is too big and i don't know how to make it smaller. Ah well. Nice little exchange though.

Please feel free to remove these comments. It's not as if they are about your poetry so i won't be offended.
Janet.x

 

Janet

Thu 24th Sep 2009 20:46

There's no difference. :-)

Anyway, how do you manage to change it, every time i try to put a pic in it doesn't work. I always end up mithering poor Paul to do it for me.

 

Janet

Thu 24th Sep 2009 20:33

Where's the happy smiley face gone?
Sorry but this looks depressing. Hope you're not going through a strange metamorphosis. :-)

Janet.x

 

Janet

Thu 24th Sep 2009 11:49

Hi Neil, you're welcome to my comments and thankyou for accepting my thoughts so graciously. Something i need to learn to do sometimes but i'm getting there. :-)

Thankyou also for your thoughts on 'A gentile river.' To be honest it was one of those poems which land in your lap and even i had no idea what it was about. The comments were interesting to read so i'm happy now that i posted it. Sometimes imagery is all that's needed and looking to find something else defeats the object of the exercise so to speak.

Janet.x

ps. as for mysterious, i don't think so but i'll take it as a compliment. Thankyou.

 

Antonionioni

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Thu 24th Sep 2009 08:45

Thanks Neil! I do like Iron Maiden to a degree, I just don't like the cliche subject matter I spose! They write some good tunes tho!

 

maipenrai

Wed 23rd Sep 2009 20:49

Hi Neil, I was in the Brit Army for 22yrs and then worked in International Aid for ten years, so I worked in a lot of conflict/post conflict and disaster striken area's, so that is where quite a lot of the stuff I write comes from.
Cheers Mate.
Bernie

 

nicky burrows

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Wed 23rd Sep 2009 10:25

Hi Neil.

I too was inpired by the Romantics, my all time favourite poet is Coleridge. His works also inspired my love of philosophy, metaphysics and of anything that is classed as supernatural - especially vampires - have a whole bookcase of Vampire novels - which is in stark contrast to my theological interests (or is it? angels and demons?), which I also find fascinating (may I add I am not religious, but dragged up a catholic, and I am not a goth or satanist haha, but think I would have made a bloody good Pagan and would probably have been drowned or burned at the stake).

Really enjoy your poetry. We can't write to please everyone, but we can write to please ourselves, and there'll always be someone at somepoint that will read a piece and find a connection with it.

Really enjoyed Crimson King, it weaves a spell around the reader. More please.

 

Cate Greenlees

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Tue 22nd Sep 2009 15:16

Hi Neil, thanks for the comment on Our Gramps, and yes it was written from my memories , all perfectly true ,of my grandfather. Sos if The Wheel frightened you...... its done its job then, it was meant to !!!! lol
Cate xx

 

Isobel

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Sun 20th Sep 2009 15:43

Hi Neil - I kind of thought the story had to be a real one. No-one could have imagined the ham sandwich which really tugs at you cos it brings us back to basics - the humanity of it all. You are right that sharing such experiences brings us together. I am happy to hear that the child survived it all and prospered - the seeds must have been sown well.

 

Ash Dickinson

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Fri 10th Jul 2009 17:19

Hi Neil, thanks very much for the praise, hope you're well.
No dates for Manchester at present, intend contacting a few places when I get a moment. Is there anywhere you'd recommend?
Keep channeling that inner goth!
All the best, Ash

 

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