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Rachel Eley

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Last blog entry: Wed, 15 Jul 2009 08:09:37 pm

Profile updated: Fri, 12 Jun 2009 01:08:47 pm

 

Biography

I'm based in Warrington,and work for a firm of solicitors. I'm new to this poetry lark,and haven't been writing long. Most importantly, I have plucked up the courage to post something here. Next stop, up in front of an audience....if I can control the nerves.

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After Happily Ever

Cinderella, Cinderella, has she lived la vita bella
Since her final chapter settled on 'The End'?
Has she broken from her cellar, is Prince Charming still her fella,
And is Buttons still her faithful servant friend?

Are her step-sisters still ugly, does she tell them to f' off,
Has her step-mum left her father all alone?
Is Prince Charming bleeding lovely, or a right annoying toff,
And does Cinders only want to nag and moan?

Did she sire 10 mini-Cinders, or is Charming firing blanks,
Have they struggled through a year of IVF?
Is she an independent woman, or a housewife with no thanks,
And is Charming fat and balding and half-deaf?

Is our Cinders a proper slapper with a new man every week,
Is she sleeping with her coachmen on the side?
Is our heroes' union blissful, or their outcome somewhat bleak,
Is their marriage stretched across some great divide?

Is her godmother old and wrinkly, has she lost her magic powers,
Does she turn men into livestock just for fun?
Does she meddle with her wand to help her while away the hours,
Or is she doing fairy nicely, 'scuse the pun?

Cinderella is a template for so many young girls' dreams,
But a shining good example she is not.
Living out a fairy story isn't always as it seems,
We should learn to just give thanks for what we've got.

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The First Kiss

Posted on Wednesday 15th July 2009 8:08 pm

My pulse quickens,
My heart races,
My palms sweat,
I move two paces.
Forwards.
Towards you.

 

Eyeball to eyeball,
Breath on my face,
Moving closer and closer
Until we're almost touching.
Then I
Pucker up

 

Does the earth move?
No.
Do stars fall from the sky?
No.
Do fireworks race up into the night?
No.

 

But a warm glow spreads
From each toe to the top of my head.
The air smells sweeter.
We draw apart and my heart
Slows.
Two steps back.

 

Never to be attained again,
The thrill of the first kiss.
Like chasing the dragon,
The first
Kiss
Is the best.

 

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Dave Morgan

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Thu 4th Feb 2010 23:14

Well Ms Eley have you retired already? I was at the DGPS last night and they speak of you with awe. Time for a come-back.

 

John Coopey

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Sat 10th Oct 2009 23:34

Hello Rachel.
I've just joined the site.
The Cinderella poem is a cracker.
Brilliant rhythm, faithful rhyming structures and pacey internal rhymes. Nice idea, of course,too.
I try R 'n' R in mine, but nothing's as effective as yours.
Post some more.
John Coopey.

 

John Coopey

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Sat 10th Oct 2009 23:30

 

Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

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Tue 7th Jul 2009 00:09

I ADORE the Cinderella poem!!! Adore it I do...

 

Scott Devon

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Fri 26th Jun 2009 15:38

Hello, Rachel.

There is some truly lovely work here. You have a wonderful sense of rhythm. Maybe you are a blooming dub poet (scuse the cliche). Imaginative use of words and change of emphasis (pour and poor). Great word play. To repeat myself some very very good ideas and phrases contained here. I would love to hear them performed and see that rhythm come through, hope I see it soon. To quote Alabaster De Plume, ask me what the time is and I say the time is now! If you have anymore mail me, I'd love to read them.

 

Joan

Mon 15th Jun 2009 07:47

Welcome to WOL Rachel. 'After Happily Ever After' - a witty, gritty look at real life - I like it.

 

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