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Thomas

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Last blog entry: 4 days ago

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Biography

I have been writing song lyrics since I was about 14 then in about 2003 I started writing what were essentially poems, though still with a lyrical bent. I like to write about all sides of life, love, death and the human condition.

Using poetry primarily as a therapy to help get my thoughts clear on a subject or to discuss feelings or points of view that don't crop up in everyday conversation with friends. I find poetry to be really helpful in this way and so I have to admit it's done more for myself than to inspire or provoke others, though the nature of the finished product does hopefully occasionally have this effect.

I have a real problem with quality control and being able to look at my poems objectively and know which ones are good and which need more work. Hopefully with some comment/criticism/praise from members here I can gain some more insight - I look forward to reading the other's member's works too.

Samples

"Night" 2008

So soon it's night again
The days are short
In times such as these
The sun only stays so long
Only lays its light down for so long
Then it goes again
We're plunged into night

Oh, Could you not find a torch
Or a candle or a lantern
To bring some light in here
We can't see any hope
Swimming in this darkness

So soon it's night again
We're back on that same street corner
I'm selling your body again
I'm selling my brain
It gets so dark around here
I almost forget about the light
There is some light, sometimes
But right now
It's night...


"Desert" 2007

What are we, without our make-believe breeding
Who am I, if it's not you that I'm feeling
We're out of time, no longer aligned
You lie resigned, my words; declined

Now what I need just feels like greed...

What point is there, if this evening's dry
No sweat escaped, no sparkling eyes
Just some feed, followed by some sleep
You barely see what I dread to keep

But what I need just feels like greed...

So when did it become
A party with no invitation
When were we locked out
Of the passionate celebration

Now what I need just feels like greed...

How much longer will we walk here
In the blazing sun with no water
How much longer can I just lie here
This appetite, unsatisfied beside her

But what I need just feels like greed...


"Calling Wisdom" 2010

Calling wisdom...
To see through all the horse shit
Of your flimsy words
And those jelly-limbed actions
Flailing so selfishly and blindly
Out in front of me
Calling wisdom...

Calling wisdom...
To untangle all your wires
Of dangling contradictions
Cut through the paper masks
Of all your posturing
That you're completely lost in
Calling wisdom...

I'm calling wisdom
To cast a dim light on your thinking
What train of thought
You caught to get to here
These decided sidings
Of this line's end
I'm calling wisdom

Calling wisdom...
To map a human sense of things
The fucked foundation you've built this house on
Is cratered and crumbling in upon us
And burning bricks and buried bones
Are all that I can know now
Calling wisdom...

I'm calling wisdom...
To put in place a forest of words between us
Brush blooming plants to hide the muddy path
That we spun down; senseless and scared-shitless
And because you never did;
I'm calling wisdom...


"Fall A Little" 2010

Could you not fall a little
Could you not blossom in my breath
Eyes glowing wide when I call to see you
And a passionate want in your every word

Could you not fall
The way I'm falling
For you

Hunting each and every slightest excuse
To come and just be near to me
Bring your warmest wit so precious
To captivate my five favourite senses

Could you fall for me
The way I'm falling
For you

Could you not flaunt all the rules
Forget everything but my subtle smile
Care nothing more for what came before
Now there exists this perfect possibility

Could you not fall in deep
The way I'm falling
For you

Now all my eyes can see is your bright glow
My ears hear nothing but that sweet laugh
Scents that trigger such magic memories
A touch so badly longed for
And a taste I've imagined so many times now

Could you not fall; completely
Could you not fall
Obviously, in front of me
Down to one knee and begging 'please...'
The way I'm falling
For you

Could you, could you
Fall in deep for me
The way I've fallen for you...

All poems are copyright of the originating author. Permission must be obtained before using or performing others' poems.

Last blog entry

Pull Apart The Perfect Nest

Posted on Monday 26th July 2010 1:08 pm

So then, brick by brick
Tonight we tear off strip after strip
The newest feathers first
Then the older twigs and vines
With each one
My heart drops further
Until there's nothing left
And nowhere lower
Just empty branches
Where our sweet home once was

Oh no! Inch by inch
We pack and divide the moss
All the soft things we've collected
Years of careful, loving selection
Squirreling them away, each and every one
My heart stops
As we place them into our beaks
To separate them forever
Over an unknown distance
Just a meaningless assortment now
Of what once was our sweet home

You fly South
I stay North
And never again
Will our sweet home be here...

(Oct 2009)

 

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winston plowes

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Sun 25th Jul 2010 00:12

Plas post up "pull apart the perfect nest" in the blog section. it deserves a wider audience. great work . Winston

 

Ann Foxglove

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Fri 2nd Jul 2010 19:37

I always find your poems interesting and with a lot of thought behind them. I see from re-reading your profile that you look forward to criticism/comment etc. I don't know how often you make comments on other poets poems - if you do, you are more likely to get feedback from them. Good luck with it all anywaY! XX

 

Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

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Sat 19th Jun 2010 11:45

"Pull Apart the Perfect Nest" is an excellent poem.

 

Angel

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Wed 17th Feb 2010 16:44

Hi Thomas - I very much enjoyed reading your poem "Pull Apart The Perfect Nest". Beautifully structured and very clever, love the imagery which this conjures.

 

Iain Uilleam MacEanruig

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Tue 16th Feb 2010 19:02

I know just what you mean about quality control. I think that every time I open my mouth, let alone what I've put in writing. Your 'One of Us Was Right to Leave' feels like it very much comes from the heart and is very powerful.

 

Alison Mary Dunn

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Sat 19th Dec 2009 11:49

Hey Thomas, a very warm welcome to WOL. I'm so glad to have read the poems you've posted so far. You have a gift and it's lucky for us that you're sharing it.
At the moment I like them all but 'Raining in Darlington' seems to have impacted on me most.
Ally x

 

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 16th Dec 2009 15:33

Thomas, your Bio is considered and honest, sharing with us those things about you that really matter. Second paragraph - ace!

And with your posted poems I so appreciate your care with common spelling and grammar, just editting in general. Comments are more relaxed, of course, and prone to hasty mistakes - no biggee. By the way, Ann's advice about spaced blogs is absolutely right - great for you to have a friend on board already. And she came on to WOL like a tornado, too.

 

Ann Foxglove

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Tue 15th Dec 2009 08:53

Hi Thomas - your poems are very good. I know I encouraged you to post some bloggs, but they would get more attention if you maybe put one up a day rather than several all at a time. I have found that if people see a stream of them together, they might not read them all properly, and some people even seem to almost resent seeing several bloggs in a row. As I feel I encouraged you in the first place, I don't want your poetry (which really is a lovely addition to this sight) to sink without trace all in one go. I know I'm sounding like your old mum giving you advice but I would actually delete them except the first one or two, then pop them back up individually over the days to come. But do tell me to but out if you like! lol AF x

 

Graham Sherwood

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Mon 14th Dec 2009 21:33

Sorry Thomas, I tried to email your profile email and it bounced back. Have you written it correctly?

 

Graham Sherwood

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Mon 14th Dec 2009 21:22

Hello Thomas, welcome to WOL. If this is a taste of what is to come, we're in for a treat. Your words are very well chosen.
If you'd like some initial criticism, I would punctuate your lines to give them more emphasis, so that we can read them as you do.
It helps this too if a poet doesn't start each line with a capital letter, although many poets do not think this important. It's up to you.

 

Ann Foxglove

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Mon 14th Dec 2009 17:43

Hi Thomas - welcome to WOL. I think we all (unless we're super-bigheaded, not many poets like that surely!) have doubts re quality control! But I really think that if Pull Apart The Perfect Nest is the sound of your voice, then you are a poet! It's very good and very moving. And it's very original the way you've used images from nature, with moss and twigs and feathers, to describe this sad tearing apart of two people and their home and their hopes for the future.
I find that if you want some feedback, people usually read the blogg poems. Hopefully many also read the profiles, but there are so many poets on the site that you could get missed. So don't be shy, blogg away!

 

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