My son Jack wanted to get in on the writing scene

Charley had a golden ticket
He did not know what it was for
Only his parents knew
Charley had to choose one grown up with him
One morning he went to the factory with Grandpa
Loved going round the factory
Accidents happened
They were the last two
Exited at being the last

by Jack Golding aged 9

Hello Jack
I enjoyed reading your poem. I love Charlie and the Chocolate Factory and your poem told the story very well. I look forward to reading more of your poems.

Hello Val

I like Charlie and the chocolate factory to.

Thank you for reading my poem.

i am trying others at school

Jack, aged 9