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Pete Crompton

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a gathering of grey words form to make this quite haunting poem

I see the kitchen Sophie
the irony too

I love the sandwich in the sun observation
the way the harden on one edge and curl as though bi-metallic strips

wonderful
Sat, 13 Oct 2007 08:35 pm
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Hi Sophie

You have brilliantly woven the dark threads of our society with the hint of a spark that suggests that we have to fight on in the face of adversity.

'China plates and M&S food'

Loved the poem.

Phil
Sun, 14 Oct 2007 10:10 am
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