This is my first time to put anything I have written out there. I have never considered these rambles to be poems. I would like them to be annotated. I am taking Higher English and am curious how they would look to others. Here is a short one to test the water. Please be kind, but honest.

Again.
And just when I think I am safe
the lights go off
sounds are muffled
and I am again alone
Tears fall silent in the night
and drench my pillow
until one day I cant hide them
and they fall freely in full sight
Denial fills my head
I will be okay
just have to keep on going
get through this blasted day
My eyes straight ahead
but this brews anger deep
pushing away those that matter
days to nights and then a week
The more I struggle
the more I'm stuck
until there is no more to deny
another episode just my luck
I hoped the peace would last
I guess this is not to be
Just want to find a level
and find a me
I can live with.