Drawing inspriration from Pete's performance at the Howcroft here is my attempt.

Hotel Pool

Sun beds
Baking trays
Bags first place
Firing squad
Playing god
Hit by rays
Cancers days
Stupid sods
Spit roast
Burnt toast
Timer binged?
Who’ll turn you when you’re done?
Dripping in factor 40
Hogs spit
Couldn’t give a shit
Sand, sea, pool fun
Got your melanoma hun?
Dive into pool
Try to cool
Bloody fool
Harness effect
More power to ray
‘Bing’, skin done
Burnt to a crisp
Hospital visit
Hospital bed
You and sun will you play?
Maximise protection
Love the shades

I like this one Phil

you must have got to know me a bit!

Glad Im not alone

'bing' the microwave!

instant sunshine.

Oh yes!

And particularly love that last line!
The dance of the tones of voice: the impassioned, the bit sarky, the amused, the amused-but-apalled.....

as i said:

Oh yes!

Thank you Ricardo and Peter for your encouraging comments an enjoyed wrighting to this style.

Its great for getting things off your chest or communicating contovercial areas. Glad to have get a flavour of the style Peter has made his own.

Regards

Phil
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