Love the rhythm with this.

Humorous and sad at the same time.

It seems to comment on the monotony of life and how we often acquiesce to things and those around us.

Very clever piece of work.

I really enjoy poetry that rhymes although most poets on here don't seem to. To me the rhyme and the rhythm is what helps breathe life into the page. It certainly does in this case.

Well done. More please.