Lifes So Fast. (My Message to you)

Cry for yourself young man,
you'll never do whats in your heart,
you will end up back at the start,
It's no ones fault but mine,
Standing here at the back of the line,
you did it and you knew you could,
things were just meant to turn out so good,
It's been so long it's been ages,
your lifes chapters flicking through the pages,
Are you trying to be different class ?
Stop looking through that rose tinted glass,
Don't end up the one to be last,
it's real life and it's over so fast,
grab it by the horns and control your situation,
you are the beholder of the lifes vital information.
The End

Lee J Blunt

Amazing!

not even remotely amazing

Lee;

Not to be rude, bud but most people are put their poems in the blogs section.

You may want to put them in there if you want feedback etc.

Not worth bothering, Cayn. It'll only feed his ego.

Hmm Steve, what ego?
You don,t know me.
But i would like a thought on my poems.

Then take it to the blogs where it belongs, and stop posting all over the messageboards.

Steve;

FYI - Looks like Lee has started putting them in the blog section now.