Just want to start putting some of my writings out and this is the first place i found. Also, I'm new to this, but here is my first poem.

Grimmie Lennon's

The humming burrows into Cosmos, even the flicker of a tube light can be seen from the dark side of the moon. Once again another star has burned out, once again the frost has numbed our bones. Light has become a sellout, with no plans to return. An idea had me today. Let's form our own constellation so I can burn next to you. Where cities of ascent pierce the underbelly of the clouds. Divine paths have no deadline, they're right on time. I can't help to feel late. Can i burn like you? Maybe just freeze instead. Is the parasite a host as well; that bathes in the fluorescent Sun. Who makes up his friends; synthetic fun and simulated love. I want to burn too, can i burn with you. Let's start our new constellation in contempt of the chaotic consequences. These Stars have never been seen. Programmed minds will start to bleed. Neurons in the vicinity will soak it up as the the soft tissue begins to inflame. Pioneers start to wake and will soon saturate callused minds. They are waiting for you. Needing you to burn today, even brighter than they did.

A great poem with depth that stayed on topic every single line. Well done.?