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Shauna Cornor

Updated: Mon, 12 May 2014 09:13 pm

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I am a new artist who wants to see if my work is good

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An Indescribable Beauty A beautiful woman full of heart She lives everyday looking for the sun and finds the smallest ray of light at the darkest time of night She opens her heart, she opens her home gives all that she has, and expects nothing in return she is the rarest of them all a beauty that is not easily described I could say that it is like a sunset in the fall when the leaves are a burnt orange and the sun shines perfectly that at a slight glance you could swear they were gold a beauty that is only seen once in a lifetime, one that can never be recreated because you will never be able to go back in time, and see that slightest bit of gold and to describe the feeling you had when you saw her rare beauty well that would be impossible because a feeling like that is not one you can describe it is one that only she can make you feel a beauty that you will hold onto forever a beauty that makes me weep because for all of those who were touched by her unmistakable beauty, we will waste our days searching for something, anything to make us feel that way again but to no end because it is a beauty that only she had, and now it is a beauty that will never be seen again because that slight glimpse of gold is gone that indescribably feeling is gone because she is gone, and with her dies that feeling of indescribable beauty.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 12th May 2014 23:21

Hello Shauna



Welcome to Write Out Loud.



We're really looking forward to reading some of your work. I know that you will be warmly welcomed by fellow WOL-ers on the site. 
If you haven’t already added a picture to your profile please try and do so. It’s good to see what our fellow poets look like. 

Have a good browse around the site, there’s lots going on and if you have the time make some comments about the work of other poets please feel free. It’s the best way to get some constructive feedback about your own work too.


Any problems, please ask. There’s always someone who’ll get back to you. It’s a friendly place, so welcome once again.



Graham Sherwood

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