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Solitude

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Solitude

Mind moves so gently alone
Hurt but eyes refuse to cry
A friend to call my own
For them my fishes I fry

Took all I have and fled
Someone my trust can lieĀ 
This time I carry my axe
This time I hate betrayer

True friendship is all I ask
Is that too much to ask?
Lets enjoy our food in flaskĀ 
Friendship is no task

Is failure an impediment? ►

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keith jeffries

Mon 9th Mar 2020 10:43

David,

A good poem. As I read it twice I felt drawn to reading between the lines where I believe I found what I was looking for.

Thank you for this
Keith

Do.RoThy

Mon 9th Mar 2020 07:37

Well expressed. But y u carry an axe. Nice pic.

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