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LA CONCHA

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LA CONCHA

The bank robber is a gentleman

raising a towel for his love to dress.

I wake some way down seashell beach

while Rick still snores behind me.

 

Bags rolled tight, we enter a bar,

slump on stools in a line, all four

staring at our reflections in the long

mirror behind the steel counter.

 

Jesus spreads arms wide over the bay

and we are down to out last pesetas

in this city of bombs and needles,

nervous police and general madness

 

but we possess a library of maxims:

distillations of road experience.

Reassure ourselves continuously

that something always turns up.

 

Hobo Camp Review. Issue 37. April 2020.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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◄ STRAWBERRY TIME

KEITH FORDYCE AND A PHOTO OF MY PARENTS ►

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john short

Fri 1st May 2020 21:29

Greg,

Thanks for the info. I've never been to Marbella and didn't know that.

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Greg Freeman

Fri 1st May 2020 13:06

'This city of bombs and needles' ... good line. Irrelevant topographical detail ... there is a fiercesome-looking mountain called La Concha that looms above Marbella on the Costa del Sol

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john short

Fri 1st May 2020 11:25

Hi Michael.

Just saying, until recently I just typed in the pen name and it came up. Now it's disappeared - at least I can't locate it any more on Amazon. Hence the Publish & Print option.

Cheers.

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Michael Triandam

Fri 1st May 2020 01:27

I live in the US, so I can get a copy of "The Private Unmentionable Gargoyle" on amazon...

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john short

Thu 30th Apr 2020 16:28

Hi Michael,

Glad you liked the poem. Might be a moment to push my story collection The Private Unmentionable Gargoyle which I haven't made much effort to publicise. Contains a lot of 'Bohemian Lifestyle' stuff from back in the 80s. You can see an image of the cover in the photo gallery section of my page here (top right). It's disappeared from Amazon perhaps because I haven't bought anything for six months (?). So to read the reviews you have to go to www.publishandprint.co.uk then click on Authors then scroll down list on the right until you find Hubert Tsarko - the pen name I use for stuff published with P&P. I have three copies at home to sell direct also.

Cheers John S

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Michael Triandam

Thu 30th Apr 2020 04:42

Wow It sounds like you lived a truly bohemian existence for awhile there. It reminds me of "On the Road' which I love......and the last stanza is so cool.."reassure ourselves continuously"...how that alone would keep you going through the lean days...

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john short

Sat 4th Apr 2020 21:40

Hi Keith,

This was San Sebastian in the mid-eighties, hence the bombs and nervous police. Herri Batasuna. Thanks and take care.

John

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keith jeffries

Sat 4th Apr 2020 14:15

This reminds me of my days in Franco's Spain before 1975.

Keith

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