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phosphorous

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I always felt so sorry for the hound

the piteous beast, alone and chained

up on the tor,

his lips and eyes lined all around.

With phosphorous.

The pain he felt was never mentioned in the book.

 

I never cared for young Sir Henry and his fate

when that dumb creature

with his heart so great

was imprisoned there in ruins ancient.

Distorted, tortured to inspire fear.

Poor dear

animal.

 

I need to take him in my arms

to tell him not to be afraid

for all is well.

To gently wipe away the stinging tears

and tend the mouth made sore.

By phosphorous.

 

And when at last we see each other

and eyes meet across the Grimpen Mire

and your eyes burn like coal

and my eyes burn with deep desire

I’ll hold you in my arms

so tight!

And when you leave

I’ll see my handprints crawling down your spine.

A proof writ to show the world that you are mine.

In phosphorous.

 

 

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 30th Apr 2010 06:58

Well, Stapleton can jolly well bog off then!! ;-)

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winston plowes

Fri 30th Apr 2010 00:17

An interesting take to tame the hound of hell! Stapleton would not be pleased! Win

<Deleted User> (7904)

Thu 29th Apr 2010 19:46

I like this quite a bit - the song-like structure, returning to one word, would make it go down quite well in performance.

<Deleted User> (7212)

Thu 29th Apr 2010 17:40

Hi Ann - great poem - & I'm not just saying that because.....
BTW - nothing wrong with a little "doggy style" if you get my drift :)

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 29th Apr 2010 17:30

No, no sex with the dog!! I think the hound (dog indeed!) symbolises the man. And phosphorous a passion that can burn.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 29th Apr 2010 16:46

I like work based on literary characters; it's always very 'in'.
This is interesting. I presume the last verse is not sex with the dog, however 'in' that seems to be lately. You might enjoy Kosinski's "The Painted Bird".

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 29th Apr 2010 15:19

Well Banksy wrote a poem called calcium and . . . . .

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