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A Painting

A Painting

 

I glanced at the landscape and moved on

The Gallery was full of people, a busy day indeed

I returned to the landscape, to see it once more

Before me, my eyes read in between the colours

The landscape gave way to my life, the past

I became mesmerised as images flashed before me

My childhood, family, times good and bad

I painted a superimposed landscape of my own

A unique painting depicting my entire life

As I did so tears rolled down my cheeks

Then smiles wreathed my weather beaten face

After the last brush stroke I stood back to view

The landscape had become transformed anew

A modern cubist portrait of my inner self

Complex, indescribable and utterly unique

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Martin Elder

Sat 27th Jun 2020 11:13

A beautiful poem wonderfully capturing the very presence of paintings and where they are situated in both time and place. I am a great fan of art and galleries have to say. I am blessed with children and a wife who are naturally artistic in that regard un like myself. My local poetry group has done a lot of work with artists. Us writing in reaction to their work and vis versa.
Thanks for sharing

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keith jeffries

Thu 30th Apr 2020 13:09

Jon,

Thank you for your comment. As always it is much appreciated.

Keith

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Jon

Thu 30th Apr 2020 08:52

Hi Keith
An enjoyable and fascinating journey that brilliantly describes the way the brain has dissected the traditional landscape of youth and upbringing and revealed the raw emotion of the true self by the final stanza in Cubist form.
Hugely enjoyable
Jon

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keith jeffries

Thu 16th Apr 2020 10:41

Hannah,

Thank you for you comment. it is much appreciated.

Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 14th Apr 2020 19:01

Celia and Abdul, thank you for comments on this poem. They are, as always, much appreciated.

Keith

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Abdul Ahmad

Tue 14th Apr 2020 17:52

Keith

A lovely nostalgic potrait of days of yore.

Revisiting the past may be best tonic in these exceptional times.

Past summers are always remembered fondly.

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