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We three

It snuck up on me.

Madness.

Hemming my shadow.

Chunnering,

a devil on my shoulder,

whispering insanity.

Demented and Tormented

became my friends

and together we ricochet.

◄ Going home

self destruction ►

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 30th Apr 2010 06:09

Hi Kathryn - another good one. I like Win's take on it too. But with his, I guess you'd have to change the title as I assume the three are demented and tormented plus the poet. x

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winston plowes

Fri 30th Apr 2010 00:25

It snuck up on me
- Madness
Hemming my shadow
- Chunnering
A devil on my shoulder
- whispering

Together we ricochet


Hi Kathryn, love the economy and choice of words in this. Above is an alternative take, notbetterjust different and something to think about maybe? Win x

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