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‘Falling life expectancy in the poorest communities is a deeply worrying indicator of the state of our nation’s health, and shows that we are leaving the most vulnerable out of the collective gain’ Independent, 28.11.18

 

What's this area got?
Not a lot of jobs, or prospects, or money
There's no des-res for burnt out
City execs round here.
But there is plenty of poverty, and plenty of fear.
Look around, you'll see:
No antique shoppes, just second hand tat.
No cosy-nooks, just wind-swept litter-strewn parks,
Plenty of pubs, bookies, boarded-up shops
Multi-lingual tower-blocks, closed churches.
Young girls on the corners,
knife fights at night.
Look around the concrete precinct 
Where the homeless flop.
The stinking fly-postered underpasses.
Hurrying, stressed out, suspicious, frightened people
Faces, too red or too white to be right,
Show the hard facts of life around here:
Poor diet, bad sleep, too much alcohol.
Kids with pinched faces, trainers bought on the never-never
Underweight or fat
With all too brief a childhood.
Teenage mums at the end
Of their tether at eighteen
Too many crammed into pokey flats
A breeding ground for the virus.
No social-distancing here. 
And the dole too small
And the flats too damp
Oh! there's little romance round here
It's hard staying alive round here
What with the gangs and the muggings and the drugs
Corners are cut
Strokes are pulled.
Oh! we've got the lot around here,
The future they call it. 

The study shows the life expectancy gap between the most affluent and most deprived sectors of society increased from six years in 2001 to eight years in 2016 for women, and from nine to 10 years for men

 

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Don Matthews

Mon 20th Apr 2020 00:42

As with Hannah, excellent poetry. On a sad situation......

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John Marks

Sun 19th Apr 2020 23:39

Brian, nothing in your experience or mine, similar as they may be justifies your attack on the millions of British people who struggle with poverty and debt every day.

I did NOT attack you, I attacked your horrible statement :

"But from what I see the 'deprived' seem happy to smoke, vape, drink, gamble, and drive in their SUV's to the tattoo parlour or food bank."

What a nasty stereotype. Read it again. Doesn't this vicious stereotype deserve attacking? Aren't you ashamed? You should be.

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sun 19th Apr 2020 22:58

John - I will further add that I was one of six children. My dad was a welder in a factory. He could not afford to booze or gamble, so he didn't. He did not buy anything he could not afford. He made lifestyle choices in order to feed and clothe us and pay the rent. I don't see too many of his ilk in the areas in question.

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sun 19th Apr 2020 22:51

John - you have your opinion as stated in your piece; I have mine. I did not mount a personal attack on you yet you seem to think it is okay to do so to me.

And don't forget I did say "from what I see" because I do actually see the described behaviour on a daily basis. I have also lived amongst this 'deprived' class and decided to work my out of it. So I do speak from personal experience, not from what I see in the media.

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John Marks

Sun 19th Apr 2020 22:01

Thanks Po and Hannah. I live in Salford Po, though the poem could be set in any British inner city area where poor people live. I, too, was brought up on a council estate. Some people think Salford is just a rough part of a tough city (Manchester) but it's a separate city. Engels, one of the founders of Communism, once ran a mill here (Capitalist!) AND, did you know, VIMTO was first made in Salford and the Dandy & Beano began life here before moving up to Dundee? I'm not really bothered, Po, if people don't like my poem but to slander the people I write about. That's a different matter. ?

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John Marks

Sun 19th Apr 2020 21:44

Brian, re-read your comment - does the word sanctimonious come to mind? It should. Maybe not everyone who lives in what used to be called 'slums' has your advantages (genetic or environmental). Think on that before you DARE criticize those trapped in poverty and debt.

"But from what I see the 'deprived' seem happy to smoke, vape, drink, gamble, and drive in their SUV's to the tattoo parlour or food bank."

Brian. I cannot believe you are capable of making such a crass comment. Your words are a calumny on all the children brought up in poverty, it slanders all the elderly, including thousands of veterans, who struggle from pension day to pension day. Your comment spits upon the day-to-day efforts of all the low paid front line workers who struggle to cope from pay day to pay day. It insults all those going to loan sharks whilst they wait weeks for universal credit, it insults all the single parents and disabled folk who try to make ends meet.

I hope that your conscience will cause you to think again.



<Deleted User> (18118)

Sun 19th Apr 2020 20:10

Excellent poetry.

Hannah

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sun 19th Apr 2020 20:06

People talk about 'deprived areas'...but is there such a thing? Sure there are areas of social housing and poor people, but deprived? Not really. An enormous amount of public money is injected into the areas to ensure a safety net for all. And the area is in itself an incentive for the residents to try to find a way out to a better life. Some take it...I did, and I am sure a numbers of readers will admit to being ex-council estate dwellers. But from what I see the 'deprived' seem happy to smoke, vape, drink, gamble, and drive in their SUV's to the tattoo parlour or food bank.

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