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On The Thirteenth Hour Bloodbath Ends

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Domestic row

heated words

temper overload

killer impulse

fake patrol

police imposter

lethal weapon

unsuspecting victims

slain repeatedly

weekend massacre

Sunday showdown

thirteenth hour

bloodbath ended.

🌷(3) 

Still counting body bags

â—„ Pushing Boundaries

Pie and Pint Cancelled â–º

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Nigel Astell

Mon 27th Apr 2020 01:43

That's right Don so far they have counted twenty two victims there may be more - - -

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Don Matthews

Sat 25th Apr 2020 11:51

Gosh! is this based on a true happening?.....

Just remembered...killer was dressed as a policeman somewhere.....

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