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Lockdown haiku

Bluer with sunlight.

Less pollution to screen us.

New day still no rain.

 

 

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◄ Chuck Berry's Ding-A-Ling

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Greg Freeman

Fri 15th May 2020 14:09

Abdul, Mrs F is possibly a better poet than me. At least she knows how to rhyme! Yes, apparently we can see the stars - and indeed Venus, more clearly these days, Graham. Thanks.

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 15th May 2020 11:36

The hardest style I think Greg, done nicely here!

Good to record one positive thing about lockdown. Only last night I stood looking at an incredibly bright Venus in the early evening sky, not really dark and wished I had a really powerful telescope to do it justice.

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Abdul Ahmad

Fri 15th May 2020 11:26

Greg

Blessed sunshine expressed with yearning for the tears that turns grass into colour of envy.

Nice.

Don't allow the present Mrs Freeman stop you haikuing!

Abdul

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Greg Freeman

Fri 15th May 2020 10:52

Or, as my wife said: 'A haiku? That's not like you.'

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