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THE VINDICTIVE VOWEL (or the deflated self).

For who am I reserved?

I weave a curl from my medicine into a stag’s crown - 

splintered howls bow, and I am uninspired.

 

Tired, moving into more, ridicule, perspire,

and leaving town, the wrists salivate on the floor, dumb,

and I am chicken skin,

 

barely thin anymore; retention, a cupidity clause,

a stained air, a gas, an alcoholic bypass,

the weather between pestle and mortar,

 

refined by the words of your altar,

God on the internet, the movement I

smile delicately, with punctuation and profile.

 

How do I look? An eye has an I, magnifying

all faults as revelations

and all beauties as imaginations,

 

turning over, there is a psychology textbook

and a baptism.

◄ The Birthday Comb

Pandora's Box ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 16th May 2010 17:00

I love this, Marianne. I've been a while getting back to it. So many expressions, images, devices are just plain inspiring and satisfying. 'the weather between the pestle and mortar' is fab, like so many others. You are a leader.

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kealan coady

Sat 8th May 2010 12:31

good piece, it shows the ever diluting fragility of the minds capabillity to overcome constant self critisizm.

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Daniel Hooks

Fri 7th May 2010 17:36

I like the way your imagery works and especially the line" How do I look? An eye has an I, magnifying

all faults as revelations

and all beauties as imaginations,"you make imagery work that almost shouldnt yet it feels right like the salivating wrists.
Great poem overall

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