The village
I have left a village where people don't -
come together, even for a valid reason,
compete, in a more healthier manner,
appreciate, even a better contribution,
spare conscience, for our own children,
believe, in a solidarity of our character,
remember, a purpose of our existence,
spend time, upon fulfilling good intentions,
feel and try, to empathise with others,
make a way, for a better humanistic culture,
reside peacefully, in a charming nature's temple,
because, my Lord, this time,
please let me serve you better,
and let my poetry be its vehicle.
Dr. Kishore R. Nikam
Mon 8th Jun 2020 04:57
Hello Adam Whitworth,
Although Art does not reach perfection ever, I have worked upon your suggestions. Actually, during the process of creating, I remained unaware of certain things. Thanks for your valuable remarks which made me more careful about my efforts. Please keep conversing.
Dr. Kishore