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Captain Camel & the Band of Hope

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Memories of Bordeaux last year. I feel the need to go again:

 

Captain Camel and the Band of Hope

 

Captain Camel and sweet Alabaster

pedalled for all they were worth.

Twisting tightly the rubber rope

that would take us from the earth.


This rubber band, the band of hope,

twitched and twanged 'til taut.

Joystick hoofed, and a plume of smoke,

My baby be good to us.


Poets quivered into their seats,

tense and pale and fraught.

Shuddering forward at stupid-o-clock

La Manche was hopped with aplomb.


There were actresses abounding

and bishops all about, but the

tall guy is at twelve right now

and the fat girl's right on eight.


We were strong armed round the city

by the sum son Church of Christ.

Past the black burned Jeanne

astride her mighty mount.


Not long into the foreign field

Makin beaucoup de pluie d'or

I'm struck with Bury Beret

like a spanner in the legs.


Shorn and shriven caverners

of Cambridge pale hue.

Quake to hear the thunder

of the Wolers in full flow.


Drink wine

drunk whine.


Great Scot, les rosbif ravagers

of the ranting poa tribe,

have thrown the bebe

to the ground in their crush

to get the booze.


We crossed the river Jordan

to two horses draped with grape.

One hoarse and happy picnic

in the stables of the mad.


My aunt's old pen of whitest stone

such fluent notes performs.

The Anarking of Poetland

struck les grenuilles blind.


Kneel o' subjects for these gems,

put a feather in your hats.

For some the colour's purple,

and Mamie knows that best,

For those of us just feeling blue,

the darkest shade shines out.


The headache and the ragged throat,

safely packed and stowed.

The tall guy ticked to twelve again

and we were put to flight.

◄ Capitol Murder

Cardiac Ward ►

Comments

Malcolm Saunders

Sat 1st Mar 2008 10:00

Hi Clarissa

I am afraid it would take a small book to explain it properly. It is rather an in joke aimed at those who went on the trip. Sorry about that. It was not at all exotic actually, just a short visit to Bordeaux in France where a dozen drunken British poets rolled around the city for a few days talking rubbish, getting lost and showing off as poets do.

Just a few little translations:

Camel - pure fantasy pilot
My baby - BMI Baby airline
Alabaster - pretty poet and fine musician Alabaster de Plume
Stupid-o-clock - four in the morning
La Manche - The English Channel to us. (Everything in the world is English or British)
What the actress said to the bishop - conversation laden with innuendo.
Tall Guy and Fat Girl - the hands on Gemma's watch.
Strong armed & church of christ - John Armstrong, maths graduate of Christchurch College, Oxford and our trip organiser.
Black burned Jeanne - French heroine Joan of Arc burned by the British for being too like a man.
pluie d'or - golden rain - pee
Bury beret - beri beri - disease of malnutrition - Gemma from Bury wearing a beret - alcoholics get malnutrition - Gemma doesn't drink.
Spanner in the legs - legless drunks - line from Gemma's poem
Shorn and shriven caverners - allusion to poet Sean Kavanagh.
Cambridge - English pub in Bordeaux - host to La Poesie.
Rosbif - French term for the English
Poa Tribe - reference to powerful performance poem by Scott Devon.
Bebe thrown to ground - some drunken discussion in the pub about another of Gemma's poems & the extreme height difference between Scott & Gemma.
River Jordan and 2 horses refers to Julian Jordan and his Citroen 2CV car. The grape and picnic relate to an eccentric French psychologist and his garage of 2CV's variously decorated as grape fields, fish bowls, etc.
Aunt's old pen - Alabaster again
Anarking - Paul Blackburn - the anarchist King of Poetryland
les grenoulles - the frogs - affectionately insulting English term for the French
feathers and gems refers to Alabaster and Gemma. Hues of blue are about the colours of Oxford and Cambridge universities. Oxford is dark blue. John and I went to Oxford and the pub is the Cambridge.
Then the hungover trip home when Gemma's tall guy indicates.

There you go. I think I missed some out, but I am exhausted now.



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clarissa mckone

Sat 1st Mar 2008 04:09

Very Nice Malcom, It sounds very exciting,wish I could understand more. Is there any way you could explain more of it to me?Please, it sounds fantastic, like a trip to an exotic place. But then Im an American, I may be missing it all. haha take care

Malcolm Saunders

Fri 29th Feb 2008 11:11

Why aye man

Narmean

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Julian (Admin)

Fri 29th Feb 2008 10:08

Nice one Malcolm
Ca évoque bien le sejour poetique a Bordeaux, like.

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