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Everything is right yet it’s not!

Sometimes even when everything is right

Nothing feels right 

 

Everything is complete 

But deep down all you feel is emptiness  

 

Your life is going smooth 

But all you feel is sadness

 

You’re happy 

But all you do is cry

 

You don’t know the reason

But all you feel is pain enduring you

 

You don’t want to give up

But all you do is losing hope

 

 

                                 k.d

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Comments

RoseMary

Sun 14th Jun 2020 00:57

Don't introspect, let yourself heal. There's always hope cos there's God.

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Kashish Dawar

Fri 12th Jun 2020 21:23

thank you so much ?

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