heavy with green
In the woods the trees are heavy with green
but it is cold for May.
The fat brown dog shambles her way along the stream.
Quiet scatterings of wood anemones pale as ghosts
gather under hedgerows
and a few thin bluebells hang their heads,
ink blue.
The trees are heavy with green.
The colour hangs like guilt,
a soft miasma of potential sadness
yet to unfurl.
A haziness of intentions masks
the sharp black branches of winters truth.
The valley is narrow and deep.
Here and there a new stream joins,
stained red with iron.
A heavy day filled with moisture.
Sometimes spring can be a disappointment.
We lift the fat brown dog into the car
and give her water after her exertions.
The slap slap slap of her tongue seems reassuring.
But I look up and lose myself
in the haze of springtime.
A time to fool you.
A time to lull your real life away.
A time when the trees are heavy with green.
Greg Freeman
Wed 19th May 2010 08:41
I liked the sharp natural observation in this, Ann, such as:
"The valley is narrow and deep.
Here and there a new stream joins,
stained red with iron"
It's well crafted. "Heavy with green" is ambivalent about it all. The downbeat tone reminds me of the song, Spring Can Really Hang you Up the Most.