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A Dream

Blow gently cold wind

I am a stranger and lost in this desert

The sun has been cruel

And the sand dunes have concealed the water from my thirsty lips

I have no map

Nor a compass to guide me.

 

Blow gently cold wind

Till darkness surrounds the horizon

And the North Star appears mercifully

to guide me through this barren land

Like a sheep dog come to lead the

stray lamb to the safety of the flock

 

Blow gently cold wind

And don't obscure my path

till I get there

for I need to rest my weary mind

and dream about the green pastures

That lie beyond the worlds end.

 

AA 16 September 1973

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◄ The servant of the land

At The Seaside ►

Comments

Kevin T.S. Tan

Mon 27th Jul 2020 09:25

thank you Abdul. So are your comments and your poetry. Much love,

Kevin

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Abdul Ahmad

Sun 26th Jul 2020 18:14

Stephen thank you for glowing comment and the red rose is gratefully accepted.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 26th Jul 2020 17:29

Beautiful.

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Abdul Ahmad

Sun 26th Jul 2020 11:38

Anmolpreet Kaur thank you for sharing your usual generous comments and your gift of the red rose too.

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Sun 26th Jul 2020 11:09

Abdul this is a beautiful dream guided by the star?

Ak

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Abdul Ahmad

Sun 26th Jul 2020 10:27

Shifa your continued support is sustaining and feeds a hungry writers desire to keep writing. The red rose is appreciated too.

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Abdul Ahmad

Sun 26th Jul 2020 10:23

Kevin

Your comments are much appreciated as is the gift of a red rose. Thank you.

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Shifa Maqba

Sun 26th Jul 2020 03:32

Your poem feels like a beautiful dream. The kind that you wanna keep seeing. Profound and reflective. Masterfully crafted!

Kevin T.S. Tan

Sat 25th Jul 2020 21:47

yeah I could definitely use this right now

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