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Shower Time

by

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Water

descends.

Drip.

Drip.

Dripping...

from her silky long hair,

cascading.

Onto,

a fine, structured bridge: her collarbone.

Falling

lower 

and lower,

striking and 

rolling

down

a curve

of fine, pert breasts

and erect nipples.

Drip.

Drip.

Dripping.

Caressing nude skin.

A delicate, seductive, touch.

Down.

Down.

Advancing

down.

Her fine, voluptuous, exhibit. 

 

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body   erotic poem   erotica   observe   observing   showers

◄ Death

Amy Johnson ►

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Andy N

Sun 26th Jul 2020 18:55

Great ending here but it's a strong piece throughout.

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