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LOOKING AT THE MIRROR

I look in the glass;

that reflects my image.

My thought turns back a page,

and my age stares me in my face.

 

Each line on my forehead has

has a story of my life to tell.

Every wrinkle in my face has

a time for me to tell.

 

The hours I search my memory to tax.

The minutes I find my mind to torture.

And the seconds I see my days to number.

 

AA 30 November 1972

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Abdul Ahmad

Sat 8th Aug 2020 16:29

Anmolpreet Kaur

One needs a degree in Philosophy to answer you searching question_

Why the once shining eyes are now dull?

Thank you for the encouraging like.

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Sat 8th Aug 2020 15:14

Mirror is a great reflector. It not only reflects light but once conflicting emotions with equal force.
Many a times i as well stand and ask myself as to why the once shining eyes are now dull??

Ak

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Abdul Ahmad

Wed 29th Jul 2020 20:50

Shifa no need to be apologetic. Your observations are well founded.

When one reaches a certain stage in life; and is content with lifes trials and tribulation vanity is of no significance.

Thank you for the red rose present.

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Abdul Ahmad

Wed 29th Jul 2020 20:38

Amatul thank you for your encouraging comments and what a supeb expression you coined , "Experience thou are priceless treasure in the form of wrinkles and greys."
One out of the Bard of Stratford's book.

Appreciate the gift of the red rose, too.

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Shifa Maqba

Wed 29th Jul 2020 20:01

An incisive, honest, and (pardon my pun but dare I say), reflective read. Enjoyed reading this profound piece of poetry!

Amatul Wadud

Wed 29th Jul 2020 12:11

Mirror is but a reflection of our feelings. Feelings need to be monitored while looking at the mirror.

Experience thou art priceless treasures in the form of wrinkles and greys.

Well expressed I must say. Cheers to life.

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