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The Shadow on the Rock

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Like Jacob arriving into 

the orange town of

Pineal we fight 

bright shadows on altars 

of heart, bones 

 

and crows break the paralysis 

of knowing without mind so many

thoughts form a nation 

within themselves        sovereign

defenceless 

 

there is no sound save

that of cracking ribs and snapped

skulls as a new day floods 

insubstant on chaos-forms

We morph and struggle 

but we never truly fully

become Old Israel

in the morning 

 

 

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kealan coady

Tue 1st Sep 2020 13:15

Thanks Kate

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Tue 1st Sep 2020 12:41

I'm with Keith, fantastic imagery.

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kealan coady

Tue 1st Sep 2020 12:02

Thank you Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 16th Aug 2020 11:02

Kealan,

This poem takes some delving into but the imagery is powerful. I shall have to re read and ponder some more on its meaning.

Thanks
Keith

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