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Ring of bright water

 

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Days of stormy autumn come
Mother, child, brother, son;
Memories, like dust, infect my eyes,
Swirling, like a Turner sky,
Land, sky, water, ripple by.
Like water under wind,
I begin to sing
Mixing grays and blacks and whites and blues,
With guitar chords to pull us through.
Chiaroscuro skies, tussling these monochromes
Into a piebald heavens above.
Below, girls in late summer dresses,
Taunt boys with unruly mothers,
Fathers absent, except in dreams,
Or, nightmares.
Where do the day’s shadows go?
September’s blackberrying has a-come again
Down languorous lanes we go leading only to this:
Dance with winter’s handmaiden and all her bleeding hands,
Freeze the ice crystals of the mind;
With words, stripped bare 
Of all the human heart endures.

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John Marks

Tue 1st Sep 2020 13:32

Thanks Keith.

Being in a minority, even in a minority of one, did not make you mad. There was truth and there was untruth, and if you clung to the truth even against the whole world, you were not mad.

George Orwell, aka Eric Blair

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keith jeffries

Mon 31st Aug 2020 21:52

One of the best poems I have read in a long time. It has a resonant quality
Thank you for this
Keith

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