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Dreams

 

Dog-tired of my dreams,

I gave them to

Someone who traded in such things.

 

‘Such an exquisite find.

I’ll shift them fast,’

This eager go-between opined.

 

A few years down the line,

Insomniac,

I had an urge to get them back.

 

Polite but firm, he said

That they were sold.

A ‘proper’ price was duly paid.

 

Should I make an offer?

No point. Such dreams

Are now out of my league, it seems.

 

My dreams should feel like clouds

Or like bubbles.

‘They fly so high’. Once sang the crowds.

 

Does anything remain?

From where I stand,

I won’t encounter dreams again.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 13th Sep 2020 07:25

Thank you, Robert and Abdul and everyone else for the likes.

Robert Haigh

Sat 12th Sep 2020 16:52

Wistful and inventive. I like it!

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Abdul Ahmad

Fri 4th Sep 2020 20:34

Well Stephen another unique poem from your quill. Enjoyed it.

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Fri 4th Sep 2020 18:37

Stephen...their best known song is "Three Lions" with Skinner and Baddiel.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 4th Sep 2020 17:35

Brian, John and Manisha, thanks for the kind comments, and to Julie for the like.

I'm afraid that the Lightning Seeds have passed me by but I will try to listen to them soon.

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MANISHA SAINI

Fri 4th Sep 2020 03:31

Enjoyed the read!

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Sep 2020 22:13

The most poignant poem I've read in a long time, Stephen. Class.

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Thu 3rd Sep 2020 17:45

Coincidently I was listening to The Lightning Seeds' Pure and Simple in my car this afternoon, containing the line "Don't sell the dreams you should be keeping".

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