My Feelings.
They come
They go
Remain
With you
Eat me up
They do
In ways
I never thought
My heart knew
My feelings
They come
They go
Remain
With you.
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Comments
<Deleted User> (6517)
Thu 10th Jun 2010 13:26
ta andy n.
Lot going on here, Georgina and I think the use of very short lines is good (although I know people who would hate it somewhat)although I reckon I would get mixed up performing it - lol
Nice stuff however..
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Noetic-fret!
Thu 10th Jun 2010 15:21
Hi georgina, i wouldnt mind reading some more work of yours. Have just read this, it is short and sweet but makes me feel that you are capable of writing more elaborate work. Maybe you have, i will just have to trawl through some to see what else you write. Nice simple piece that does say more than its few words.
Mike
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