Letters To Old Lovers
Why should anyone still care
why should anyone raise an eyelid
the news is old
Perhaps, eight years ago
you may have gotten
some reaction
to justify the price of ink
Still you persist
in writing them
letters to old lovers
letters they may lazily reply to
letters they may not reply to
the news is old
There's no reason now
there's no alliance
perhaps to reminisce
for a short while
on a dark cold afternoon
but nothing more
in these new lives
Still you persist
in writing them
letters to old lovers
letters that strain not to say
letters that overtly long to say
'please try again'
And every time the letterbox snaps
its steel chops around your words
old lovers don't bat an eye
old lovers just drive to work
(and teach)
And maybe one evening as they recline
perhaps a word or two then
they may spare for you
'take care', 'go somewhere'
the news is cold
Yet still you insist
on replying to them
letters to old lovers
letters that don't know when they're beat
letters that don't know when it's time to stop
You don't know when
the news is old...
(2007)
Anthony Emmerson
Sat 19th Jun 2010 13:32
Hi Thomas,
I liked this a lot. It illustrates perfectly the irrationality of the things we cling to, seemingly without reason. I get the feeling that this may have been written somewhat from a personal perspective; either way it works excellently in communicating a feeling of silent resentment. I particularly liked the image conjured up by:
"There's no reason now
there's no alliance
perhaps to reminisce
for a short while
on a dark cold afternoon
but nothing more
in these new lives."
A very worthwhile and thoughtful read.
Regards,
A.E.