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Hold On

The love I hold on to is imaginary

A mere illusion that subside fear of being lonely

Vows and promises as pillars keeping it sticky

Still I cling with hope of it lasting forever

 

The beings I call friends are scarce

Scattered in different cities, all away

Time and distance can't shake the bond

I will hold on to you, family of choice

 

The home I once loved is broken

Crushed into pieces of households

Love that held it scattered among the dwellers

Still I wake up every morning home sick

 

The parents I looked up to are gratified

Looking at children as saviours from their penury

Sleeplessly praying for the wellbeing of their progeny

Hold on to me, I may be the only of my kind

🌷(5)

◄ Scars Of A Mother

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keith jeffries

Sun 13th Dec 2020 14:43

I agree with Adam this poem has a powerful quality and deep in its message.
Well crafted.
Thank you for this

Keith

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Chihinga Chakatali

Sun 13th Dec 2020 14:32

Thank you Adam.

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Adam Whitworth

Sun 13th Dec 2020 10:06

This poem is much appreciated Lucas. Your writing has power, well done

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