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Of Ravens & Roses

The rose was succulent and red,

Spoke of passion and desire,

"Put it away," the raven said,

"Lest their ire we tempt."

 

You thought yourself invincible,

A knight, an angel of steel;

But what are you willing to fight for

When it's fire you breathe?

 

Wore the rose in your hair, 

The raven be damned,

The smell forever trapped in air,

Hail ignorance, oh glorious disregard!

 

Tell me, was it sweet the scent?

As it swirled and swirled around you,

And you basked and danced and laughed--

Till it gripped and choked you

While you whispered the "Amen"?

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Comments

Philipos

Tue 12th Jan 2021 18:22


A profound piece of writing Holden - one to grip the attention.

<Deleted User> (28781)

Wed 30th Dec 2020 21:07

It smells sweet when in the making
Later the smell turns pungent and dull
Untill a stench so foul rises that it kills the soul
Not a good thing at all
When trust is broken, you are left with not many options
But to stay happy even if its fake
Of ravens and demons
Or of angels and God

This is beautiful ?

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