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Sister of Toil (a farewell to a workmate)

My hoary handed sister of toil

Has left our world of grease and oil

She now inhabits cleaner rooms 

With nary a whiff of diesel fumes

No more long lunches in our dusty yard 

Nor almost romantic moments 'neath a canopy of cars

Not for her skinned knuckles or broken greasy nails

No more bellicose chuckles at lusty workshop tales

I hear that now she is using Olay, or some other unction or oil

But to me she will always be

My hoary handed sister of toil.

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◄ Faubourg NOLA

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 8th Feb 2021 17:17

She may have been eager
to try Swarfega
Apply generously, don't be meagre.

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keith jeffries

Mon 8th Feb 2021 15:27

Andy, your poems belong to a humourous genre of which you appear to be a master.
Keith

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