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Sister Houdini

I always meet you in a grave,

you see me there, startled

and cut.

Sharp enough to make rough,

a conversation

that never sees the light of day.

 

You left me in the corner of my eye

quickly filling up with black.

I ate the black

and my veins turned white;

the line of chalk between us,

sometimes smeared.

 

My father was good and yours?

A kite you lost in sunset.

We cannot live on air,

these broken angles I found,

fanning my feet in your precise voice,

watch in cruelty,

you needed more weight.

 

Sometimes, I am too small,

forgetful in the wake,

braiding my fingers

in your hair, stretching me beyond

and lively, perhaps too eager,

it slaps me back. My sister –

 

the quick silver on the precipice-

I am falling asleep in Braille,

swallowing words

like liquor, loosening life lacking.

 

(the title is taken from another poem of mine reflecting my admiration for  a few female poets...one came back for a second go...) 

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<Deleted User> (7212)

Mon 5th Jul 2010 21:18

Yes, I'll throw my hat in the ring on this one - sometimes we read a poem, a verse or a line - and we all think "Shit - I wish I'd written that". Mega.

Rachel Bond

Sun 4th Jul 2010 00:11

i love this, especially;
'i ate the black
and my viens turned white,
the line of chalk between us
sometimes smeared.
it all reminds me of alice through the glass..lovely x

<Deleted User> (7164)

Sat 3rd Jul 2010 12:31

I like all of this poem but for me the last two stanzas are superb.x

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Ann Foxglove

Fri 2nd Jul 2010 18:30

I like this a lot Marianne, esp the first and last verses. "I am falling asleep in braille" = fab! x

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Francine

Fri 2nd Jul 2010 18:02

This is quite intriguing Marianne...
I love the line: 'I am falling asleep in Braille'

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