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Desolation

Desolation

 

I have reached a desert plateau

a high place of rocks and sand

Not one single shoot of green can be seen

the horizon offers no break

A bleak inhospitable place

where the heat of the sun is relentless

I am completely alone in this terrain

as there is no evidence of others

No buildings or trees are here

which give any sense of direction

I stop and sit lacking any purpose

my heart is empty and redundant

I cry inwardly to be redeemed

to be given renewed energy and inspiration

Yet I hear nor feel anything

save the beat of my heart and the

heat and silence of the desert

 

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 13th Mar 2021 17:21

An exhausting journey, Keith, but a fine poem. Thanks for the explanations.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Sat 13th Mar 2021 03:07

Yes, I have read those and St. John of the Cross

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keith jeffries

Fri 12th Mar 2021 23:54

Brian,
Thank you for your concern but the poem is based on the themes of spiritual consolation and desolation as found in the Spiritual Exercises of Ignatius of Loyola. Desolation is the feeling of being abandoned by God and consolation when God's presence is felt in all its power.
Keith

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Brian Hodgkinson

Fri 12th Mar 2021 22:41

Are you okay? I sense some real suffering here. Great poem too ...

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keith jeffries

Thu 11th Mar 2021 22:33

Julie, Stephen A & Holden,

Thank you for your likes
Keith

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