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What-If Analysis

The unexamined life might

not be worth all that much,

but what if you get trapped

in the purgatory of memory,

no moratorium on melancholy?

 

That's where rumination reigns

supreme, and the brain succumbs 

to bribery, falling prey

to fake advertising

of a score-settling splash,

an ersatz denouement. 

 

So commences the dissection

of thoughts, utterances, deeds,

woven into deranged rhapsodies

of coulda woulda shoulda,

baleful enough to make

better angels jump ship,

begging to flee this

counterfactual apogee...

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Comments

Holden Moncrieff

Tue 16th Mar 2021 00:27

Thank you Annie, it means a lot ?

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Annie Josephine

Mon 15th Mar 2021 21:58

Wow! I can so relate to your poem! I know from past experience how it can take over. “So commences the dissection of thoughts, utterances, deeds, woven into deranged rhapsodies”. ❤

Holden Moncrieff

Sat 13th Mar 2021 17:25

Agreed! ?

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Nigel Astell

Sat 13th Mar 2021 01:41

Once seeing the what if list
you will want to jump ship!

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