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leaps and bounds

one wish at last
go quietly of an evening 
to die at the edge of the sea 
where the forest is close to me 
waves to gentle my dreams 
as I slide into the sea

sky, wide and clear like a new apron, 
a dance of light in the night 
no rich death here just weave 
a bed instead, inside my head, 
while young ghosts in the hallway
weep silently

spring arrives in leaps and bounds 
while small withered leaves rot… 
as the birds sing so cheerily 
in the merry light of dawn

in the pond tadpoles appear
like they did when I was a boy
in another century
rain penetrates my northern soul 
but nobody grows old

only time passes
deep in my heart
beneath the moon and the sun
birds arrive from the Congo basin,
at night the moon and the stars
soar slowly across the sky

whispering a long goodbye

🌷(4)

◄ Parataxis 

Vergissmeinnicht (Forget-me-not) ►

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John Marks

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 15:23

Thank you, as ever Keith for your erudition and empathy. As I.grow older I go further back for my reading. This poem was inspired by Virgil's the Aeneid and the Eclogues, one passage in particular:

"I will be gone from here and sing my songs/ In the forest wilderness where the wild beasts are,/ And carve in letters on the little trees/ The story of my love, and as the trees/ Will grow letters too will grow, to cry/ In a louder voice the story of my love."

Virgil 70 BC to 21 BC

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keith jeffries

Tue 23rd Mar 2021 13:23

a poem of intense longing for that moment when we drift away. As with all your poems I am drawn to certain lines, "waves to gentle my dreams as I slide into the sea" and " while young ghosts in the hallway weep silently". As the reader I am there. If I were to write this poem I should want to be close to the sea but in a chair wrapped in a heavy tartan blanket with my pipe and a glass of rioja as the sun sets. A poem which brings to together life as a culmination of all yet in a moment of time.

Dare I say, more please.
Thank you for this

Keith

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