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[Redacted] broke up with me tonight 

By message 

It was sudden and definite

Inside, I collapsed

Outside, I fell to the floor

But strangely

At the moment before I hit the floor

My arms stuck out to stop me

It was reassuring, somehow

That I had an inextinguishable will to live

Despite my feelings to the contrary 

🌷(3)

◄ Improbable

If Poetry is to be Like Fire ►

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Lewis O'Brien

Mon 10th May 2021 06:26

Thanks Stephen

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 8th May 2021 17:21

An interesting, thought-provoking poem. Thank you.

Take care of yourself.

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