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the first kiss

you and me.

on a happy couch made of sweet embarrassment and racing hearts.

people on the tv is talking but we don't even care

I don't even notice 

because on the other hand I only see the blue of your eyes

and that colour, in this light, makes me crazy.

I can only notice the sweet smell fo your breath on my face.

I can only notice you slowly getting close to me.

the million thoughts and the hundreds doubts just disappear.

I only see you in this dark room,

in this dark world the only light comes from your eyes.

in this dark room I can see your lips

and I can't stop myself from wondering how soft they are

and what they taste like.

and this existential doubt gives me the courage to do what I've dreamed of doing

since the first time i saw you.

and so it's happening

and my heart is beating so fast that it'll takes him days to slow down.

it happens

and I can state that never in my life

I've been this happy.

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Comments

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Francesca Elena Abbate

Mon 7th Oct 2024 07:28

so sweet .. ❤️

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 3rd Jun 2021 17:40

Great poem, Mona.

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Jun 2021 07:16

Wonderfully told, Mona.

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just_a_girl

Wed 2nd Jun 2021 22:56

Thank you! I'm happy you liked it.

Philipos

Sat 29th May 2021 20:20


Great memory and beautifully retold.

Enjoyed.

P.

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