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our own silence

I have knocked several times
patiently await a reply
Yet nothing
Apart, of course, from silence
And you say he is listening
superior
Then a silent devil he must be
For this is torture
To be unheard

Won't you listen to me?

The silent cries of the suicidal
And the needy
The samritatrian phone calls
Last only one hour
Even charity has it’s limit
And the pathetic weather underlines
The plight
With a hapless shower of sleet
when it's supposed to be springtime
I reached out
And toes became cold
Exposed from linen sheets
I hear you made daffodills in your name
and easter hung a cross
yet selfish am I too blame
anyone but me.

Wont you listen dear g?

If so, how will I know you heard?
Without joining thy tribe
the dire and  nodding herd of religion.

I cant do that:

For I saw crusaders and sarasons,
Muslim cloth and monk
And I cannot help
But feel defunct to engage,
In the everlasting curling page,
Of testamant.
I feel hypocrasy you see
except a creeping suspicion
suggests I should be beyond
and the strong hear him if
cleverly shown
in imagination
perhaps

No thanks

Yet still I call
For something
For someone
To hear
The inner voice
I am well aware
Hangs heavy on the ear
Saying

“we create our own silence”

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Francine

Fri 12th Jun 2009 02:49

Loved this for many reasons...
You know how to affect the emotions to the very core...
These lines are heartwrenching and make me cry...

'Won't you listen to me?

The silent cries of the suicidal
And the needy
The samritatrian phone calls
Last only one hour
Even charity has it’s limit
And the pathetic weather underlines
The plight
With a hapless shower of sleet
when it's supposed to be springtime
I reached out'

Pete Crompton

Sun 23rd Mar 2008 01:07

thanks Clarissa for all your comments. You always take time to read my work and its great to see what you think. Blind faith is difficult. yes. Im more a pagan I think.

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clarissa mckone

Sun 23rd Mar 2008 00:10

Hi Peter, very nice poem! Can you imagin being God? Having to hear all at the same time billions of people asking things? I cant, would not want the job.You cant test God. You either have faith, or you dont. Church is not required.Answers come when God can answer and you can hear.Dont you know the answers at times, to the questions you ask?I remember we talked about this before, and you never said what you believe.Blind faith is at best difficult.I have had answers, as I told you. I have seen things, that some would say was of heaven. I dont know, others would say I was crazy, but I know what I saw, and how it made me feel. To not be on drugs or drunk and have visions...well I dont know. Loved the poem. Happy Easter..Psss its a pagan holiday, the way most all churches do it.

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