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Don't promise!

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Don't promise me a paradise!

 

Don't promise!

 

Don't tempt by crazy dreams!

 

Please, don't!

 

Don't tell me you will miss!

 

Just give a farewell kiss.

 

Forget about tomorrow!

 

It doesn't exist.

 

Forget about yesterday!

 

It's brought a sorrow.

 

You still persist?

 

We are guilty without a sin.

 

You give me a sarcastic grin?

 

Oh, don't make a din!

 

I'll pay for it myself,

 

you think about life yourself,

 

it's worthy for itself.

 

Don't call me back

 

in the evening of the day!

 

On the very brink of the precipice

 

I'll say: I forgive you.

 

I will pray and will go my way.

 

But anyway... Be happy!

 

 

 

Larisa R (Odessa, Ukraine)

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Comments

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sat 31st Jul 2010 22:40

Good evening Larisa-I hope you and Lynn never get together-you would set the world on fire! but what a barbeque!! woo-oo!-lotsa love-Stefan-xx(M-xx)

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 31st Jul 2010 14:06

Hi Larisa, thanx for your comment on my poem, glad you like it. I haven't seen your work before today (just been busy with other stuff!), read a few of your poems and like your style, good stuff, keep it up, best wishes Jeff X

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Lynn Dye

Sat 31st Jul 2010 13:39

Enjoyed this, Larisa, very well put. Best regards, Lynn xx

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