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Now.

I was gone around a month. Before reality sank in.

There was a place where individuals were suspended

Left to float, feed themselves on thin air. It was always enough.

Forgot myself and became someone else. For the better.

The ones who say for the worst I left in the past.

I was gone around a month. Before I cried.

It was a Wednesday night that I realised.

Under-whelmed, discontented, heart-broken.

Had my legs cut off and my eyes held wide open.

I was gone around a month, before I thought

Of each piece that completed you to me,

Disected and labeled you piece by piece.

The suburbs the maker, the breaker. I'm recognisable here

To the same faces I've been avoiding these years.

◄ These Days.

Blue Turning Grey. ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (6517)

Mon 16th Aug 2010 14:24

thank you, i'm made up you all liked it xx

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Andy N

Mon 2nd Aug 2010 08:09

certainly one to make you think, Georgina. I think this would really work in a live environment too.

My favourite bit was:

There was a place where individuals were suspended

Left to float, feed themselves on thin air.'

Keep em coming!! x

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Lynn Dye

Sun 1st Aug 2010 13:31

This is really good and thought provoking. I enjoyed it too.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 1st Aug 2010 13:03

So brilliantly different! loved it-thanks-Stef.

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